| "What A Girl Needs" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story very mucch so far. I hope you will be adding more to it soon. I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while. I hope that dosen't mean that it has been abandoned.
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: July 08, 2006 02:13 EDT
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I just casually glanced at a certain review (cough cough inupasserby123) and realized my own came off kind of nasty. I do greatly enjoy the story and disagree that it is floundering. It was quite rude of that reviewer to come in and critize your work nastily. There are reviewers out there like that. They're a pain to authors who have their own lives other than the fandomain. Big hugs. Akihana
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: July 08, 2006 02:06 EDT
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Whatever happened to a chapter at the end of the week? You haven't been hospitalized, have you? Not saying that the story hasn't been excellent so far, but the promised lemon is still not delivered. I don't care if I'm labeled hentai, but I do hope that you're alright and it's only a muse/technical problem. I hope the new chapter comes up soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 02, 2006 13:39 EDT
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SS, Sorry, just reading over some of your reviews and I feel the need to comment. You just can not please some people, and some people get rude when they do not get timely updates that they secretly are hoping for. I never have understood negativity in the reviews. There are many courteous ways to get a reviewer's point across without being cruel. No one makes the author share and no one makes the reviewer read. Again sorry, ungrateful people drive me to insanity. I just want to restate that I love your story and I hope all is well with you. Please count on me to check in regularly in hopes that you will update soon. Best wishes, Cynbad146
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Title: *yawn*
Reviewed By: inupasserby123 On: June 17, 2006 20:21 EDT
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I decided to finally check this out to see what all of the fuss was about since it has done so well at the IYFG. While it started off well enough, and it is very will written regarding grammar and spelling, it seems to have no direction. It started with one, but it disappeared along the way. Now you have jumped on the *yawn* 'Shippo is older than he looks' bandwagon and seem to be devoting a chunk of the story to that. Maybe you are getting too many suggestions; do you not have your own ideas, or an idea of where this was headed? It does not really matter because at this point you just don't seem to want to get to your own lemon (which you stated you have written), though I am willing to bet at this point you are waiting to post at the end of this quarter as you did last two times to make certain that you are included in the voting again. You must have had somewhere you were headed when you started this, maybe it is time for you to rediscover what that was and go there. Right now, it is just a floundering muddle of confusion. That last chapter was just all over the place.
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Reviewed By: darkless On: June 15, 2006 23:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... i really like this. i had stopped reading fanfic for a long time having gotten bored with most of the stuff out there, but then i came across this story and started reading... and kept reading until i finished it. granted, the whole 'mating' thing has become something of a cliche in iy fandom, but you've actually handled it really well. your characterization is some of the best i've seen in a fanfic, ever. i notice you haven't updated in a while but i really really hope you plan on finishing this. i look forward to your (hopefully to be posted soon) next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 22, 2006 01:28 EDT
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I was just a little worried, that we had not heard from you lately. Hope all is well with you and yours. I am a big fan of this story and would like to pass the word to anyone reading your reviews of how really good it is. Hope to read you soon if all is well. Best wishes, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 18, 2006 01:21 EDT
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I have to admit I miss this story, but it is understandable that an author has other things in her life to tend to as well. So I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter...and I really want to know what Shippo looks like.
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Reviewed By: drachen1 On: May 15, 2006 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful!! So rare these days that I find one that really grabs me like your story has. I can't wait for an update.
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Title: What a Girl Needs
Reviewed By: kyokitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall that I have read - this is among one of the most interesting - staying close to the story line, but having enough guts and creativity to give it a life of its' own. Very Very Good among the many I have read. So far, I haven't got the guts to write, nor much time as I prefer to read all of the good ones. Looking forward to any lemony stuff too!
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Title: ch 13
Reviewed By: lavie (review page won't show me as signed in) On: May 09, 2006 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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Good! Unfortunately, I forget what happened in previous chapters, like why Sesshoumaru wants Inuyasha and Kagome to mate. Anyway, I picked up one spelling error: "I could not in good conscious stand idly by" - conscience. Also, Kagome forgot to add -chan in "Let Shippou talk". No reply necessary
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Title: super
Reviewed By: telephoe girl On: May 01, 2006 12:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
next chapter PLEASE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17 *n.s.i.* On: April 30, 2006 06:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah wow, this is great! Please update soon! I've added you to my favorites. ^_^
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Reviewed By: CrystalTwilight On: April 30, 2006 04:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyable! I like it a lot! Keep up the good work.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: desktop girl On: April 20, 2006 15:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENS NEXT TELL ME CANT WAIT ANY LONGER
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