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 Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2006 11:07 PST
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This is such a great idea for a story! I can't wait to see it evolve. I hope you find time to update it! I love everything you write, so I guess I just want you to write all day, every day, so I can be entertained. Terribly selfish, I know. I just love your STUFF!! Thanks for sharing.
 Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 21:01 PST
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This is so heartbreaking... Please, tell me they'll be together at the end, this is simply so sad and frustrating.. Anyway, this fic is really interesting and well written. You are a genius!
 Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 13:48 PST
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Hmm...I wonder what Shippo sensed? Could it have been Sesshoumaru, or by some miracle, InuYasha? I wonder what Houjou is going to tutor InuYasha on as well lol...that's a bad omen there lol.
 Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 12:53 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories!!!!!!!!! I can never wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! I only wish I could be half the author that you are!! And next time someone flames you send them to me and I will be happy to maim them! I never read anything but canon pairings and anyone who doesn't like them shouldn't be reading the manga in the first place!! It is not your fault if they don't like it and they should have the common sense to leave rather than flame!!!!!
 Reviewed By: InuyashaThinksImSexii [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 08:26 PST
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Oh, another great chapter! Took ya a while to get this one up, but I don't really mind. Writing takes time. n.n; Can't wait till the next update and keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 07:47 PST
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i really enjoyed the capter, and while I know you do this story second to the Purity series is it possible that you will be doing this only after five and then picking seven up after this is done? I am not trying to suggest anything I am just curious. Ja ne
 Title: Ohayou
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 04:49 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awsome woot! Continue asap I love this story it's verry well written and everything ^_^ Will Inuyahsa and kagome ever see each other again please tell me that they will ?
 Title: Review
Reviewed By: crushed by a dandelion [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 04:06 PST
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Thank you for updating. : P Very brave of you. The Inu-Yasha section kinda reminds me of last night's Will and Grace... "My ex's life all came together after he left me" kinda thing. I gotta catch the bus now. Rest assured, had I had the time, I would have written you a long and beautiful review.... but I didn't.... so I suppose it doesn't matter.
 Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 27, 2006 03:39 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg...that made me cry soooo much. I loved it. But I still don't get how Midoriko would can honor their wishes and not warn them about it, or at least let them have a little doubt in themselves. But I'm also sensing that in the end, this while just be another fantastic Inuyasha and Kagome story ^^. Update soon! ja ne! Ao
 Title: ahh, bravissimo!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2006 23:12 PST
Comment/Review:
As always, your canon characaters are a joy to read and an surprising contrast after falling in love with your vibrant OCs. This story is already building so nicely; you hand out plot threads so carefully, so delicately, that one is afriad to try an piece them together for fear of getting hopelessly tangled. It's amazing how much information you give, but in such a way that no one can quite solve the puzzle until you want them to. We should start calling you the queen of Misdirection and Deception (all in a good, challenging, angsty, suspenseful way of course). I cannot wait to see what continues to go on in this piece, because I believe the foundations are almost completely lain out and ready to be built upon. As always, thank you for sharing your heart through your words!
 Title: YAY!!!!!
Reviewed By: MidnightsKeeper [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2006 22:58 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY! I'm so super happy that this story got updated! You, Sueric, are the best of the best and I salute you. I think we could call you the Godfather of fanfiction. I'm a longtime fan of yours and I'll faithfully read every story you write so long as you write them. Speaking of which, I've been to your site, and I see you have other stories yet to be posted. Will we ever get to see these (most likely amazing) stories? Until next time, keep posting and know that you can always, always count on a review from me. (And a good review at that. I could never give you a bad one!) Thanks for all you do and for putting up with all the unnecessary criticism. You rock! P.S.- Pretty please update again soon. I like this one alot.
 Title: Son of a!
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2006 21:37 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are the master of suspence! At first I thought that the Hanyou was Sesshoumaru and Rin's child, which is a common enough occurance. But after that last bit in the past you've thrown mroe then just a handfull of doubt into my mind as to whether or not the hanyou is Rin's, or Kagome's. Obviously the other parent is Sesshoumaru, there's no doubt in my mind about that.
 Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2006 21:24 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my God - the angst! I normally really enjoy angst but this is that super heart wrenching angst that is really hard to walk away from! Beautifully written angst ... but ... wow ... really hard not having the "next chapter" button there.
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2006 21:17 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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 Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2006 21:03 PST
Comment/Review:
*cries* It just reminds me so much of Sango and Kohaku's village's story! I can't help but want to jump through this screen and comfort little Bunza. I'm just filled with so much sympathy for all the characters!!! I don't know who to want to comfort first. I'm all intrigued now also! Who could the pale violet-eyed mystery person be, Sue? I'm not going to even bother guessing since I know you'll still surprise me in the end! This Renzomori character seems like he might play a larger role in everything too... Or maybe I'm just grasping at thin air. Can't wait to find out more!!
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