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 Reviewed By: kAITLIN  On: November 27, 2005 17:16 PST
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PLEASE UPDATE....OMG YOU MUST.....!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: silvermoon maru too lazy to sign in  On: November 18, 2005 13:23 PST
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It's been 4 months after the last update of this fic, I hope you are not stop writting it. It is so sad that their wish didn't work as they expected and now they are away from each other. It is very well written as it is your style, wonderful. Don't be cruel and finish this fic with a happy ending for Inuyasha and Kagome. =)
 Reviewed By: beccapatty [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2005 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another one of ur brilliant fanfictions! I Love each and every story of urs.. This one is jus sooo soooo good! I can't believe Kagome and Inuyasha got seperated. soo sad.. Now Sesshomaru has shown up! well that means he's lived a hell of a long life lol. Why's he disguising himself as a hanyou tho? weirdd.. maybe its not Sesshomaru but a child of his? hmm idk.. anyways this is a really really good story.. As are all of urs! U are prolly my favorite author and Ur stories are definetly my favorites.. urs and one other are the top of my list "the lucky ones by terri botta" I just visited ur site.. and i noticed it said that this story might not make it on media miner or fanfiction.. well i see it made it here I just hope u continue to post it.. I really love this sotry n id hate for it to become an unfinished one.. with all ur other stories being so good i can just imagine how nicely this one is going to turn out! :) For someone who writes so many wonderful stories U certainly have lots of new and original ideas for each fanfic! :) anyways i gotta go please keep up the gr8 work! Ill keep a look out for an update! thanks a lot! ~Becca~
 Title: I've noticed...
Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2005 17:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
By the way, I noticed that you have changed the rule so that no one can review unless they are signed in, so I know that you or someone you know has been reading these reviews.
 Title: Forgot to say this...
Reviewed By: SpikeRulesHell [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2005 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a continuation of my last review. I just wanted to say that I am not just putting 10/10 on all of the fields to flatter you. I honestly tried to find something wrong with the story. But... Alas... Well, however you say this in an old englishy way, IT WAS AWESOME! Right, now I better not hear of you not wrting, or I'll... I'll tell on you!!!!! -SpIKe-
 Title: stardargon
Reviewed By: stardragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2005 13:43 PDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you for sharing this fiction with all of us peeps. The story is very gripping. Your cliffhanger is a good emotional one. It will be interesting to see how the situation is eventually resolved. I also wanted to say, I hope that your family is doing better. Don't worry about posting or updating. Great stories are like great wine, it takes time to age. ( lame homily, huh)
 Reviewed By: Krami [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2005 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I used to read your stories on animespiral, and I'm sorry to see that they're gone. I'm sorry all the horrible things people said about your stories, which are absolutely wonderful. But I have to know, when will InuYasha and Kagome be together again! update soon, please!
 Reviewed By: maroongoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 16, 2005 11:21 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aww! A cliffhanger! when are you going to update? I hope it's soon!! Great job, as always! -MG
 Reviewed By: neko_hanyou  On: August 31, 2005 18:17 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
aaaggh! sueric, you have to be the most talented author i have had the pleasure of stumbling across since i began reading fan fiction. i have read almost all of your stories, (not all, because i occasionally have to go to work and sleep) and am always completely captivated by the way you interweave plot and character. your stories seem not to be written, but cultivated from a very fertile imagination. you avoid using the same trite plots we've all seen a thousand times, and even though you have a way of making your endings happy, i usually spend at least half of the story in angst-ridden torture, hoping upon hope that you didn't decide to turn the tables and give up on the happy endings i have become accustomed to. with all that said, (whew! i sure said too much here) please....for the love of pocky....update! (not to put too much pressure on you or anything).
 Title: one word...AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Cappuccino [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2005 07:56 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAA! This story is so kick ass! I love it i love it i love it! I LOVE ALL OF UR STORIES AND I READ EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM! YOU ARE LIKE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR EVER! KEEP UPDATING PLEASE! I NEED TO READ AS MUCH AS I CAN OF UR WORK! I GIVE YOU A COMPLET 10/10!
 Reviewed By: lauraa07  On: August 19, 2005 02:24 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow i love this story so far!! it made me cry lol but its a great story, i read your Purity ones too (well still reading Purity 4) there all wonderful! i hope u update this one soon, it puts a spin on the inu/kag thing that makes it all the more exciting lol. love all ur work its great!
 Title: Awsome story!
Reviewed By: Tokyomonkee (too lazy to log in)  On: August 15, 2005 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You made me cry! It's a really good story. I've read all of your completed work, amazing! Every last one of your stoies is amazing! You're a wonderful author. I hope you will continue this one too, it's a really good story. ^^
 Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2005 02:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh there go my heart strings another amazingly interesting looking story:) I love Kagome's reaction to hearing Inuyasha refered to as 'junior brother':) This looks very heart wrenching I can't wait:)
 Reviewed By: Ninevrise (not signed in)  On: August 11, 2005 23:11 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Again, you've caught me up in the web of another story. I've truly enjoyed all of your works that I've read, especially "Chronicles". This one is no exception. I'm sorry to hear that you've had so many flames of your work. It's not right for people to critisize you just because the story didn't go the way they wanted. I totally agree with you, when you said that you write for yourself. These are the possiblitities you have created for Takahashi-san's characters, and I admire you for not writing what others may want. I'm glad to see that your work is still posted on mediaminer. I always read your stuff on animespiral, and was concerned when you vanished from the site. I hope that you don't give up on your fanfics, despite what some may say, because all your stories are true works of art. You weave stories that have truly touched my heart, and really made me think about my life. All my best to you. Ninevrise
 Title: ASlacker
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 06, 2005 13:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
All hail the Queen of Angst!!! I can't say it enough...I love this story and I love how you torture your characters...You are so MEAN!!! I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next. *Waits* *looks around* No really....I can't wait!! Who's the hanyou? Who's with the hanyou? Will InuYasha go to school and take...TESTS??? BAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA
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