| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 14, 2005 15:43 PDT
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cool. so who's the hanyou? It sounded like Sess, but it was hanyou, so I dunno...
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I certainly didn't see that one coming. As I read this I got so mad at Midoriko that I could have spit. She KNEW and still she let them make wishes that could make this miserable. You do a great job of reeling the reader in and then thwacking them. This is no different. I look foreward to reading more of this piece as you have time and desire to work on it more. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: July 12, 2005 11:42 PDT
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erk. how awful. it's like the gift of the magi, where they give away what's most precious to them to get what's most precious to their loved one...i hope midoriko had a good reason for doing that...so much suspense and only 3 chapters, wow!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: July 12, 2005 11:39 PDT
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(gasps) well that...was unexpected. good twist! can't wait to see where it leads!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: July 12, 2005 11:33 PDT
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you posted it again! alright! i can't wait to read more, i love your stuff. heh heh, i love inuyasha/kagome interaction. such as "bi - don't even finish that inuyasha - itch. Osuwari." Awesome.
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Title: Sueric,
Reviewed By: lemon_sweet14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 00:20 PDT
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I'd like ot start off by saying you are an amazing writer. I've been reading you're fanfics for awhile now, and terrible orry for not reviewing until now. You're an inpiration to me, and even though I haven't written any fanfictions yet(I plan to lol) you definitly are my writing hero. Now, I've read your profile and I'm so sorry, for whatever those people have said to you. Thank you for the amazing stories. And again, I'm sorry, and what they've done shocks me. How could they do that to someone who just wants to write? Anyways, keep on truckin. lol. -Rach
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Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: July 08, 2005 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have taken a great couple and made them Gods! And it's only the 2nd(3rd) chapter. I am so glad that even though there are people out there who cannot appriciate a good writer you keep working. I love all of you Inuyasha stories and though I haven't ventured into your other stories yet, I am sure that they are as good if not better! Pleasecontinuewithyourwonderrfulwork
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Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 14:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your style of writing, and you inspire me. Your grammar is excellent and I love the way you don't repeat things over and over, you may have to reiterate a certain topic or idea but you always make it seem fresh and new. You write Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship perfectly. Half the time (I've read a few of your other Kag/Inu fics) I start chuckling to myself because their situation and dialogue seem so real. I can often picture it in my mind. I just want to say this new story has started off great and I hope you keep writing. My opinion isn't really important, only yours really matters, but for all the people who write negative things (not actually being constructive, just being mean), I hope you always remember that people are just people; they often criticize cuz they have nothing better to do with their time. You are an excellent writer, not just grammatically but your ideas and storytelling abilities are very adept. It's good you only write what you want cuz I think that those people who write from passion and love write the best. Thank you for sharing your talent and love of Inuyasha with us, the fans! Good luck with inspiration bunnies in the future!
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Title: YEY!
Reviewed By: mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 06, 2005 12:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEY! you updated this story again. i didn't know until i read one of your responses saying you had threee chapters up for this fanfic! i love how this is going! its awesome! im still following all of your stories so tell us when your updating new ones okay? im still reading purity 4 and all of the other stories. i read crhonicals last month and it was midy awesome! monk in pain red! LOL i just wanted you to know that even if i dont review, im still following your stories and i hope you always continue to write fanfictions for the ones that love yoru work as much as i do.. you are my idol for writing, my role model, and i get inspiration from you. keep up the good work because you do such a good job with your writing. i love the work! keep it up and have a great day! i hope you have a good experience writing this fanfic. your writings dotn deserve flames. i hope you feel better about updating stories more often.
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Title: Lena17
Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 22:39 PDT
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Man, that was a tear jerker. I'm glad to see that Kagome is wanting to step up into place and help out someone in need as she knew InuYasha would, despite his hardened exterior. I really wonder how you are going to put this together though. I like it so far
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Reviewed By: yuki_chan_89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you want my honest thought? I'm on the verge of tears, seriously. Or was on the verge. The writing was so incredible, it actually brought tears to my eyes. I wouldn't patricularly mind if you updated soon? Thank you for a great read. Chao chao.
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 19:56 PDT
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I've only read Purity and this one so far, but I have to say you have an amazing talent for writing. Since there's only these three chapters, I'm going to start reading Purity 2 now. I hope that you continue this story, it's extremely interesting.
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Reviewed By: MaggieA On: July 01, 2005 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you decided to continue this story...so far I am enjoying it immensely. I am looking forward to the next chapters. Don't be disheartned by those who criticize your work. I love the way you bring Inuyasha and Kagome to life, so true to character, so full and complex, so devoted to each other. Happy writing...wishing you all the best
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Reviewed By: Vanquisher On: July 01, 2005 18:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter for a great story. Sorry about the Purity remark by the way.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved every one of your stories you are a very good writer that brightens up my day to read your work. I really like how you have this story set up its very orginal and different I'm curious to see how you plan on taking this. I'm so glad you brought back the cute little lynx kitten he's so cute and having him anounce to the group that Inuyasha was his junior bother is adorable. I'm really liking this and can't wait to see where you take this. :)
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