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| "Desideratum" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] | | Pages (23): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: lunatrick114*~~ not signed in On: June 10, 2005 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so excited that you decided to post another story! I love it so far, please update whenever you can!
| Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 01:54 PDT
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Okay, read the second chaptre, and all I have to say is ... wow.
| Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 01:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo-hoo! You tell 'em, Sue! Personally, I love the InuYasha/Kagome pairing. Shoot, they even argue like Ralph and Alice Kramden. I look forward to reading more.
| Reviewed By: ~ME On: June 09, 2005 20:03 PDT
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Damn, so SAD >.< Inu wished to be in Kagome's time (to be with Kag) and Kag wished to be in Inu's time (to be with Inuyasha)--right?? am I RIGHT???? kinda like the story 'The Gift' --yah know--she cut her hair to buy him a thing for his watch, and he sold his watch to buy her a thing for her hair--the thing being though.....they ended up TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!! I think you may have missed that part in the story--so, I thought I'd bring that to your attention, you know, to let you know where the story is supposed to go.......so....off you go *shoo*shoo*...bring Inuyasha back....go on, your a-wasting time....and....and....I JUST CAN'T GO ON WITHOUT INU AND KAG TOGETHER (now, imagine, if you will, that last word being in really big, sparkly, bold letters--very eye catching, if I do say so myself.....)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *stretches finger--note to self 'must really do some warm-up exercises before I hit the "!" button so hard/long' (gotta build some stamina)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OWWEEE *cramp*1111111111 Just havin' some fun ^_~ yah, one of *those* nights. Ummm, so please bring Inu and Kag back together VERY soon--I can't take too much angst---I'm on the EDgE, mannnnnn INU AND KAG FOREVER!!!! (REALLY big and sparkly letters!!) Okay--just hopin' this made for an interesting review which titillated your muse into writing some more, soon!!! ~ME
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Reviewed By: mandateofhell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 13:08 PDT
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Amazing. Exquisite. I'd look for the thesaurus, but I don't have one and I am not at the library. But I think you get what I mean, don't you? I'm really glad you decided to post this anyway. You don't have anything I could read (I've read everything else). You don't see what's so different about your writing? Well, you have this gift of letting the scenes fold out in the minds eye. The choice of words only helps. Very, very good...
| Reviewed By: dragon-fly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 11:33 PDT
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wow. i feel stupid now. i sent a review saying that i hope you update your story, but i didn't say which one. well i was talking about Desideratum =)
| Reviewed By: dragon-fly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 11:31 PDT
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i know you said you would update it whenever you feel like it, but i do hope that you update frequently!! i totally love this story so far!!
| Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 19:14 PDT
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OMG INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO U CANT HE HAS TO COME BACK *BAWLING EYES OUT* COME BACK INUYASHA!! KAGOME NEEDS U.......THIS IS GREAT !! keep it up and update!!!
| Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: June 07, 2005 23:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O ... how horrible. @_@ ... i can tell this story is going to be torture- for everyone. ,o_o, poor inu.. ,,,-_-,,, poor poor inu. o_o all alone in the future.
| Reviewed By: yasha101(not signed in) On: June 07, 2005 16:49 PDT
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no inuyasha oh you have to update soon
| Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 10:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really happy that you decided to post this story again, even though people were being assholes about the pairings... again. This story is so beautifully written (aren't all of your stories though?), I can't imagine why anyone would flame you so much. If they want to read about the odd pairings, there are a ton on this site along the lines of; 'lyke omfg inuYaShA is a jerk! imma go date sesshy nowe!' that I'm sure they'll appreciate. Anyway, I'm done ranting, and I actually have a question this time! It seems that Midoriko knew what would happen if Kagome chose to stay in feudal Japan. My question is; even if Kagome stayed, why would Inuyasha disappear? He's from that time, Kagome isn't, did they switch time periods? Like, Kagome stays in the past, Inuyasha gets sent to the present? Ah, I don't really expect to have these questions to be answered because that would be giving away your story, but it was just on my mind. *Hugs Desideratum* Welcome back!
| Title: ::sniffles:: ok, that's a tear-jerker
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate (nsi?) On: June 06, 2005 20:48 PDT
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So I finally got to read this in a quiet house with my relaxing music playing and my cup of tea steaming in front of me on the desk and my trusty box of tissues on my left so they don't get in the way of my mouse. And you had me crying a couple times =) Saying you've lost your touch, geesh! ::HUGE huggles:: You are so brave and forgiving for posting this at all and I hate hearing you belittle yourself... you shouldn't feel a need to do that. Hope tomorrow looks brighter and runs a bit smoother for you!
| Reviewed By: Kaneasimi On: June 06, 2005 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic fic!! Please continue to write, you are a very talented woman, Sueric-sama. This story is like a lost treasure. Thank you so very much for being who you are and keeping true to your heart.
| Reviewed By: lilbabidevil214 On: June 06, 2005 15:45 PDT
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o no!!! wats going 2 happn? o god plzplzplz save inu!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH save me from the evil cliffy! neway i luv the fanfic! update soon!!!
| Title: Go Sue /o/
Reviewed By: On: June 06, 2005 13:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Another big sucess I see :D Please update as soon as 'mood strikes' again ^^ kisses Marta178
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