| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 451 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2011 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been re-reading your story and my pathetic number of reviews. The fact that I was going through a painful bout with a tumor, surgery, and resulting screw-ups with my seizure meds is obvious from the things I missed and from the lack of reviews. This is still my all-time favorite inu/kag fic. Only recently have I had access to adequate dosage of seizure medicine and as soon as my move is complete, you will get the reviews you deserve. It is going to take a long time to cover the entire story, but that is what I plan. Thank you, your beta's, and your supporters for such a wonderful epic. I wish I knew something about Final Fantasy. If I did, I'm sure you'd give me one helluva ride. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2011 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story! You did a wonderful job of keeping with the original story and yet making it your own. I loved reading about how much the characters had changed in 500 years. You did a great job of making sure they were different and yet still the same all at once. I was impressed with all the detail you put into writing this. I hope you will continue writing. |
Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2010 10:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I haven't read this story sooner! This is definitely going into my "fanfictions I read all the time" list. This story was AMAZING from start to finish. I loved it. LOVED IT.
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT ALL THE WAY TO THE END!!! I THINK U R A EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!!HPE U DECIDE TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY WAS AWSOME I LOVED IT ALL THE WAY TO THE END!!! I THINK U R A EXCELLENT AUTHOR!!!!HPE U DECIDE TO WRITE ANOTHER FIC SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww this was GREAT!!! I finially finished it and i wasn't disappointed. your a great writer with a good attention to details. i hope u write more stories! maybe one about Rin and Sess! hing hint lol
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't really say much 'very nice'. Well executed enjoyable read. The Seven was a bit of a long drag, but well done. :)
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Title: Finally
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I finally got around to finishing it lol, it was absolutely amazing as is your writing. Sorry it took my soooo long but work has been extremely hectic =] This is definitely and fave of mine now =]
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Title: just stumbled in
Reviewed By: TiffanyM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story thus far.... I only paused long enough to type this up As for the Sess/Kag comment in the last chapter, I completely understand.... after her and Yash mate she will be his sister so he would in fact have respect for her as well as some form of affection. Off to actually read this chapter and the ones after it =]
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Title: Award Nominations
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 04:45 EST
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Congratulations Fenikkusuken - your stories have been nominated at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008: The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse for Best Completed Serial One Hundred Thousand Lifetimes for Best Canon and Best Oneshot Revelation for Best Comedy, Best Lemon, and Best Oneshot This is only the first step in the process though - all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at http://inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions - their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! FlameTwirler
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So my question to myself it: HOW THE HELL DID I MISS THIS FOR SO LONG?!?! Excellently, excellent fiction. I've always been a fan of girls who kick major ass so your Kagome is officially my hero for life. Not only was your canon believable and original it also stayed true to the core of the InuYasha story. I've spent the last week reading this and I'm pissed that it's over. Reread time!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 15:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg your fic was sooo awesome! i loved itXD one of the best ive read=D actually to be honest...i saw this fic a couple months ago... and was like...is this one of those kagome in the future ype fics so i just scrapped the idea of reading it...then like a couple weeks ago i saw it again and decided to read the first chapter cuz all your reviews were sooo good and you had alot of views....i have to say...i loved it form the very beginning=D i couldnt get off the computer! and i had a lot of hw at the time too=D just finished it yesterday=D so kawaiiiXD i read it like nonstop...you have really good talent..just wondering...are you gonna make a sequel? cuz i keep imagining diff scenarios in my head for sequelsXD lol just means i love it so much that i want moreXP
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Reviewed By: ezaangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 06:36 EDT
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Moving, I was immensely impressed by this fiction, so much so I took two days off university to finish it :) But anyways I loved the ending yet I was saddened by Kagomes loss of power in sorts Ohh well I'll just have to get used to it... Thank you for this
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Reviewed By: God Amongst Mere Mortals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I have to say Fenik, I have read just about all of your competition. The purities, chronicles, lucky ones, the extended mating season, heart's landfill... well and just about any other high caliber Inufic you could name. This one still impresses me the most. By far it is superior with its AU setting twist and the characters are well developed. Besides the shear tenacity you have shown at the length this thing is is truly remarkable. Good job! I always look to this fic whenever I feel stuck on my own! I'm trying one Continuation/Divergence fic and one AU with mecha/ scifi themes. I hope I can be 1/5 as successful as you have been. TY for the amazingness, and I would very much like feedback on my fic some time from you! Message me since I don't solicit other fics in reviews XP
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best stories I've read! And you finished it! You did a wonderfull job!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 05:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amzing... it took me forever to read it, but wow.... that has to be one of the best stories i have ever read... i loved it... kagome was so strong and powerful.... i loved how you switch from one time to the next... and i loved yashita... some of my favorite moments were with him... you did a great job in recapping the anime.. i loved this story... i hope you continue to write so that there will be more great stories like this to come!!!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 06:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap, that was amazing!!! I actually enjoyed that more than the real anime!!! I am quite impressed, that must have been the best, longest, and most fulfilling fanfic I've ever read, and as son as I'm done writing this, I'm going to go back and re-read all my favorite parts. I love how you made Kagome so strong, and some of my favoite chapters were of Yash in the future, longing for her so much, yet having to let her go. And then the angst at the end!!!! GAH!!! I hope they named the little guy Fenik. I don't think it's a lame-ass name at all, especially since he flippin' fell for Midoriko!!! NEVER saw that coming!!! well, anyway, best fanfic in existance, hope you're going to keep writing epics like this, I bow to your greatness, and all that jazz. JA!
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Title: The Phoenix Blade
Reviewed By: Fenik Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fennie, I know I've said it before, but what a truly amazing story. Congratulations!!!!!!! I really enjoyed the military aspect of the story, being a one time military brat myself, I found certain aspects very satisfying and also very sad and all too real. I thought Kagome's characterization was amazing throughout the story, and the introduction of some wonderful OCC (especially one particular tufty-eared bishie with the striped hair. Like some of my favorite "dog eared" novels resting on my nightstand "The Phoenix Blade will also reside. I'm looking forward to some one-shots that will hopefully include fenik, maybe something more on his origin and creation. I'm off to Maui for a brief respite, if I find anything on the beach that resembles your bishie eared, amazingly stripped Fenik I let you know. I Love Happy Endings! Warm Regards, Carol
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope that you can bring out the sequels that you promise your fans. In particularly Exchange. As you can guess I am a huge Rin/Sess fan and enjoyed reading Exchange as well. Looking forward to reading more of your great works.
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Title: CHAPTER 75 PART II
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 10:05 EDT
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You portrayed Jakotsu exactly how I see him. He's such a violent perv. As always, your description of the massacre was excellent. Gasp! You killed Inu's! Evil you! [snffle] The fact that their mates dropped dead was so awful. And then they were melted! Sesshoumaru can't save them! You are more than evil! I know that there has to be casualties, but…but…[sobs] At least you kept Kumo from rushing in and getting itself (can't remember if it is a he or she) killed. Mukotsu is downright creepy. Little bastard. Oooh, you are so good at making me hate these bastards. Oh yeah. I mentioned in an lj reply that you have been able to make me hate Naraku more than any other author. We'll get to what he deserves later, after other screaming events. I'm looking forward to re-reading the next events. Yeah, I have done some reading on these before, but it didn't really stick because of going through med dosage changes. It all fell through holes. That's probably why I didn't remember the scene with Koga and Ayame. Okay, now I'm ready to go on to the next few scenes! Or maybe I'll go back and re-familiarize myself with the individual Tenbaryu's. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 08:55 EDT
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Oh god...right=write...I'm at work and in a hurry. Sorry.
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