| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Numina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 09:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's cool, very original, tho i see some grammar faults in it....not that it matters :) well keep up the good work i guess |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 05:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good and well written. I can feel the tension building up, and hope that somehow Bulma can help Veggie whip Freeza's ass. |
Reviewed By: mic On: January 20, 2002 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Keep those chapters comming! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 20, 2002 04:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. At least now Raditz can warn Vegita about the green scum. Please update asap. |
Reviewed By: pub6 On: January 17, 2002 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats to say its great! |
Reviewed By: re-o-ko On: January 17, 2002 16:28 EST
Comment/Review:
great! keep going! i love to read more of your story! vegeta hides his feelings very well in this fic! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 17, 2002 08:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappies. Great fic. Keep goin'. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 16, 2002 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very captivating. Nice job. Can't wait to see how B&V's relationship start to blosem. Keep them chapters coming I'm on the edge of my seat here. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2002 09:39 EST
Comment/Review:
This is really good. I've never seen anyone go in this direction with a v/b fic. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 16, 2002 02:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy this fic just started and I'm already pissed off at Raditz and that blue freak. I have a feeling that the near future will be bleak for Bulma. Keep going. |
Reviewed By: dbzfan_d On: January 15, 2002 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue this great fic!
Love the a/u!
And I can ALWAYS be tempted by a well-written V/B get-together fic!
The fireworks generated from that particular pair, the saiya-jin monkey Prince and the human monkey genius, is always special!
Bravo! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 14, 2002 05:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this. Great start, it's AU and a V/B get together with a twist. Doesn't get any better than that. Please continue asap! |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 11:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
*giggles in sheer delight* Ya know I have just spent the best part of three days reading your story around writing my own lol and it was well worth the effort. I absolutely adore A/U fics and this has to be ranked up there with some of the best.
I loved every minute of it. The B/V scenes are intense as they should be, and the Raditz/Amanda lemon is almost as delicious... by the by I think that Amanda is one of the best portrayed Mary Sue's I have ever had the pleasure of being introduced to in a story.
Listen to me waffling on lol. Suffice to say that I will be waiting with baited breath for updates! *huggles* Ember |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 19:57 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay onna, where in the home for infinate losers is ch.23? I'm going mad with anticipation. Bring on the long awaited lemon. **chants peer presure, peer pressure in background** Just kidding, no presure at all. None. Absolutely none what so ever. I mean it. You've just spoiled me with these bi and tri-weekly updates. Well, I guess I'll stop harrassing you and work on my own stuff...as if. **whispers peer pressure, peer pressure**
Hmmm, maybe a different approach. I'm sending you positive, good, serene vibes through the internet. Mmmm...so relaxing and inspiring. Yes, good lemon writing vibes that posses not the vaguest sense of pressure...Mmmm...nice vibes.... |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap!! How did I miss this update?!?!?!? This chapter was so completely awesome!!! I wouldn't want to be the guy who has to explain this to Vegeta. They should let Kakarot do it. He can handle the beating.
I wonder what Victor has in mind? If it's anything that could possibly cause Radditz anymore pain I will personally climb into the computer and kill him!
*Looks at above statement and sweatdrops* Sorry. Got a little carried away there. Anyway I can't wait for the next update.-JB |
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