| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 17, 2002 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was finally able to r/r. For some reason I can't seem to log on to MMO at night :(. Anyway, this was another knock out chapter. The way you described the refugees' feelings at having to leave the space station (and the safe haven it was for them) and Rich's demise actually had me tearing up (I really need to get out more). Also, the way you described the impact of the asteroid and the effects on the atmosphere, well let's just say that I closed my eyes and with a little help of this kickass cough medicine that I'm taking, I could visualize it O_o. I'm still tickled pink that Zarbon is no more, but the way it happened kinda makes me wanna lose my lunch. It obviously affected Vegeta, Goku and Piccolo the same way. The way that Veggie looked after Bulma was sweet. There's no doubt as to how he feels about her. I felt sorry for Sarah when she caught sight of Jock and Bulma. At least he's not dead, and he's gonna feel extremely crappy when he regains conciousness and starts to remember how he played a part in the mess that followed. I just have one reguest...please have Radditz (aka cutie pie extraordinaire) take care of Victor personally. He needs to pay for being chronically stupid and an Grade A asshole. Veggie's dream was awesome. It was nice to hear his dad tell him how proud he was of him and to take care of Bulma cause she's one of a kind ^_^. As far as the B/V lemon, I'm still drooling *gives 2 thumbs up*. It was very emotional and brought to light a sense of urgency from both of them. Last, but not least, I'm curious as hell to find out what Yamcha wrote in that letter. His death I always found disturbing. Yeah, he may not have been the strongest of the bunch, but he should've died as a warrior, not a wino. Well, I guess I've reviewed enough. Then again it's all your fault for turning out chap after chap and it's all pure genius. I can't wait to read #48, and even though I don't have a clue as to what'll happen, I'm sure it will kick some major ass! Oh yeah, I almost forgot, I got my e-mail problem resolved. Sure took long enough. It's suenami927@yahoo.com, so feel free to put me on your update list. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Christina On: September 16, 2002 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I love it. I think this might have been the best yet, in a writing sense. Every thing just flowed smoothly, no bumps. I cant wait for the next chapter. I know what you mean about the studying thing. Homework is very important, espeacially when your in high school or college. |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: September 16, 2002 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's to say? Cha's rendition of an AU,B/V get together is so irrestistable,not to mention full of her wonderful creativity. *You genius you!* This chapter was absolutely supurb! The lemon scene between Bulma and Vegeta was so awesome! This chapter was definitely worth the wait! I also loved the scenes with all the worried characters in them! Hmm,are we going to follow this up with a A/R fic,Char? I definitely hope so!I Can't wait! *You also have to...Kill the Victor! ^_~* |
Reviewed By: PowerGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 22:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG what was in that letter from Yamcha??
It's a real shame that FFN screwed us over...but fear not I'll follow this story anywhere!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 20:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh! What an evil cliffhanger! I want to know what's written in those letters! Will I ever know? Blah! I loved this chapter! I'd write more, but I'm in a bit of a hurry. I have to do some stuff to my comp, and I can't when other programs are running...*sigh* Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!!! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: September 15, 2002 19:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
OH, NO!!!!!!! I canīt believe you stopped like that! You are so cruel....... :)
Please, update soon.
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: chibic On: September 03, 2002 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!!!!!! what a wild imagination you have~ it's really great so far, please continue to write more!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 30, 2002 23:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I just came across this fic today and read through Ch. 24 practically straight through! And I still have plenty to read before I'm caught up! You've got a lot of good plot lines going, and it takes talent to have them intertwine and affect each other as they have in your story. I love how Vegeta's plan continues to evolve with new developments. The whole thing with Radditz's unrequited love was a nice touch, and I can see how it's actually playing into the story quite nicely. Zarbon is the perfect villain. And somehow Bulma's in the middle of every plot! Well, she wanted some excitement didn't she? :) Great job, loving the story, and I'll review again when I get further along. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 23, 2002 12:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey welcome back girl! I hope that this time it's for good ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Khris On: September 16, 2002 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it as always!! I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 05:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you're back!!!!!! Well you already know I loved it. I'm glad that Vegeta has some control over himself. R/A moments were perfect. God I love those two! Okay Victor is really starting to scare me with the whole killing themselves to be together forever. Zarbon, Zarbon, Zarbon, when will you learn? You already know this is one of my favorite fics and I can't wait for another update!-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!! For once Veggie showed some restraint and didn't jump Bulma's bones by the pond. Ahhhh, but the R/A lemon...that was yummy *licks lips*. On the other hand, I despise Victor and Zarbon with every fiber of my being. I only hope that you give them both gruesome and disgusting deaths. That would make my day, my month and (being as I have no life) probably my year. So until your next update, TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was nothing short of total awesomeness! I absolutely love the R/A moments. They are so great together. Picollo's disgust is just so funny. I mean he looks like a male but what does he do for "fun". He's asexual, so I guess he could literally go f*ck himself, but would he? Inquiring minds want to know. Anyway, all I can say about Victor is that he should be strapped to a chair and be forced to watch a 7 day tv marathon featuring Barney (the purple twit). Oh and take away his booze. That would be the perfect torture for that jerk. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you're back! I hope it's for good this time. Well as you already know I reviewed on FFN, but here goes. I absolutely loved the lemon with B/V. It left me breathless. Bulma is one lucky lady. All the men I've ever known go to a shower to TAKE a shower and nothing more. Boring bastards. |
Reviewed By: destiny On: June 17, 2002 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is brilliant,truly one of the best i have ever read!but it really upsets me loggin on 2 find you havent added anymore so please write more!oh and i hope you wanna be a writer coz your gonna get there no prob.your the best! |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
