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Reviewed By: Tazy On: June 16, 2002 08:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really great better then some that i read out of books! i read all and i give the story 10 out of 10. keep up the good work! please write some more asap. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is up with me?!?!?!?!?! If it wasn't for Susan's review on one of my fics I never would have seen this. Will you please check and see why I haven't been getting the updates because as I've said before this is by far one of the best -and I mean like in the top 3- fics that I've ever read!
Anyway, I must say that you really out did yourself with these two chapters, espacially the last. It was so-so-so...Well I can't think of words to describe it but just know that it was so something wonderful. I'm so happy for Vegeta.
So, Zarbon has finally seen how the other half lives. I hope he can change his ways, because I kind of like him in this fic (he got a big boast when he rid us of Lisa). I wonder will Vegeta be willing to help Zarbon after all the s#@& they've been through. Hmm...
Damn Victor! If he does anything to Radditz (not that he could physically). I will...well give me a minute and I'll think of something. Why can't he take a hint? I mean he didn't decide to pursue her again until Radditz got her, anyway. Why does everybody always want what Radditz wants (well in this case has ~_^)? I for one would most definately read a Radditz/Amanda fic.
'Horitzontal Sparring'...hee hee ^_^. I love Goku.
Well I hope this extra long review makes up for my absence lately. If you update again and I don't review in the first twenty-four hours please send me some kind of reminder because I don't want you to think for a minute that I've lost interest in this story because I never could. Til next time.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG WHAT A CHAPTER!!! That was stupendous, great, fantastic and magnificent the way you made Veggie become an SS. Wow, talk about different. I don't know what else to say except that you're a damn genius. The way Veggie brought Bulma back was nothing short of beautiful (sighs). Now back to more disturbing stuff, Amanda is missing and Victor has gone from a nut to a friggin homicidal maniac. Promise me that Radditz will do him in and please, I beg you, make it painful and extremely slow. I want that low life, scum sucking, good for nothing piece of sh*t to make his final exit in the most gruesome way possible. Whew! glad I got that off my chest. Oh and did I mention that this chap was awesome? Well, it is, in fact the whole story is one of the top 5 best B/V get togethers I've ever read. You should be proud ^_~. Till next time , Sue. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man what an awesome chap! It was surprising to see that Zarbon actually felt guilty about some of the things he's done. Now he's contemplating going to earth...I think this is gonna really complicate things. I have this sick idea of him pairing up with the delusional and totally f*cked up Victor to do something to Radditz. You know the old saying "I'll scratch your back if you scratch mine", well Zarbon might ask for Victor's help in delivering Bulma to him. Then again I have had 15 cups of coffee and I'm ready to start some shit, so lets just forget my ramblings. Now back to your story-Victor is a classic case of fatal attraction. He's a nut and that hasn't gone unnoticed by Amanda. I'm starting to fear for her safety and so help me if he does anything to her I'll jump into your story and do some serious damage to that a$$hole (there I go again *sighs*). As far as Veggie goes, I knew he would be foaming at the mouth. I'm just glad that he didn't turn Kami into a crispy critter and instead gave the old dude a chance to explain what really happened to Bulma. With Veggie helping her out I think she'll be just fine. You know that was sweet of you to say you'd write a R/A fic even if I'm the only one that reads it, but I suspect that more people would be checking it out. I believe that JB would definitely be tempted to read it (yeah JB, I know I'm being ballsy by getting you involved, but hey I'm overly caffeinated and not responsible for my actions ^_^), and EmberMaxximusTalentus (great writer) seems to be enjoying this fic as well. Whatever you decide to do is AOK with me. I guess the main thing is to finish this fic first before thinking of doing any others. Again, great update. TTYL ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 27, 2002 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chap. I loved it when Bulma found the clothes neatly folded-lol. I would've loved to see the look on Popo and Kami's faces when B/V were gettin it on. Victor has some major issues to deal with-mainly DENIAL. He has a better chance of getting syphillis from Cleopatra than of getting Amanda back. I mean why would she, when she has a gorgeous hunk of animation waiting for her at CC. Personally I think he should put some lipstick and a blond wig on his right hand (or whichever one he uses) and deal with it ^_^. I don't like what's happened to Bulma and I hope she heals quickly. This is gonna piss off Veggie big time and he might force Kami into telling him everything regarding this type of training. On a different note, I was visiting Kaji's site and I saw DITH posted there too. I think it's a great idea to have this story up at different sites so alot more people can read it and love it like I do, but I noticed that you have a different name there too. Are you under the Witness Protection Program or something? j/k :P Don't mind me, it's late and I'm rambling, so I'm outta here. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!! .....OOOOOHHHHHHH! I swear you are the best lemon writer I've ever read! This was an amazing chapter and the best part (aside from the lemon ^_~) is that Lisa's dead! Hooray!-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 12, 2002 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was a fast update, great one too. Loved the B/V lemon as well as Lisa's "final exit". Well, I suspected Victor would have a problem letting go of Amanda, and I was right. I wonder what he plans to do. Whatever it is I hope Radditz wipes the floor with him. Can't wait for the next chap, and take your time. You're busy, I'm patient *cat rolls on floor laughing*. Updates for this fic are worth the wait ^_^. Ja |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't even have to tell you how great this chapter was!!! I am soooooo happy for Radditz. I swear he like the best character in this story. *hears growl from behind her* Well...I mean after Vegeta of course.
I can't wait to see what happens to Lisa in the end of all this. Death hopefully.
Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter(your probably getting tired of hearing me say that).-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 11, 2002 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, what lemony goodness!! They are so perfect for each other and you made their first time beautiful, tender, romantic and passionate. I have a feeling that Victor's gonna rain on their parade. The nerve of the guy thinking that Amanda would go back to him. I mean why would you want a scooter when you can have a Porsche, right? Anyway, I think Lisa is deluding herself in thinking that she'll get a reward for the capture of Zarbon. Oh she'll get something all right, but it won't be in the form of perks (more like pricks...oops I meant jerks ^_^). As always another great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one big time! Ja |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 04:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How in the world did I miss this update?! I guess I should start checking my e-mail more often. Anyway this was another great chapter and I am soooo happy for Radditz!!!! Waiting for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 06, 2002 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Cha, so glad you're back! If you don't mind, now that you're "back home", I'll r&r here. I've got nothing against FFN, it's just that to me MMO was kinda like the birthplace of DITH. Speaking of which, awesome chapter. Now we know that Bulma's training will be for the most part mental (did that sound ok?). Veggie's training in the HTC and Radditz and Amanda are gonna get laid. I'm so happy for them ^_^. I can't wait for the lemony chap! Again, welcome home ^_^. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2002 00:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
HEY YOU!!!!!!!! WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 02, 2002 13:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
WWWEEELLLCCCOOOMMMEEE BBBAAACCCKKK!!! :D |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2002 18:00 EDT
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run the hell away Zarbon's having hentai thoughts. love the fic and plz let Zarbon die soon. the pea brain of his is really starting to scaring me. plz put up more soon.
love the fic,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Dragon_Optic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic i have ever read by far i cant stop waiting for the next chapter to come out if you keep this up long enough you could turn this into a book if you wanted well keep it coming cant wait to see the next chapter |
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