| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2012 03:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story can't wait for an update if you are still writing i do prayer that you will finish one day |
Title: WHAT?! NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2012 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This can't be COMPLETE...NO..NO!!!..THIS IS NOT OVER!!!!....PLEASE...KEEP...WRITING!!!!...I..LOVE..THIS..IT..WAS..JUST..GET TING..TO..THE..LAST..BEST..PART!!!! anyway, shoudn't Bulma be pregnant already? or is it after frieza dies that she becomes pregnant? does Mirai Trunks come into this story? does this just cover DBZ or is it going to cover DBGT to? because if it does than i'm all for it. i don't get to read any of those because out of all the stories i've read none go into GT. so if you read this than please be aware that every one loves this and are waiting for more!!!! |
Title: update please
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my second time reading ur fic. This story is very well written and a pleasure to read. I hope someday u will come back and finish it. I don't know if u still read reviews, but I want u to know that I really enjoy reading this story. |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2006 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just read this story over the last 2 days, i think ive gone blind, i know its been years since youve updated, but it would be great if you did pick up, or give it to another author... its a really good story...
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 21:51 EDT
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I hope life calms down for you soon, I know how tricky it can get! Until then I'll still patiently wait for the next update. Patience is still a Virtue.
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Reviewed By: yen-dawg On: April 18, 2004 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fanfic! Please update- i really want to know what happens- I hope you enjoy your new house!
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Reviewed By: Rosilienne On: October 12, 2003 02:34 EDT
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Please update soon :( I'd like to see this story to the end. I love youuuu~
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Title: BARDOCK!!!!! :D
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 13:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!
What has that pasty lizard bastid done to my precious lamb??????
My poor sweet honey, reduced to a pawn of the 'F' words... *sobs uncontrollably* I need to go and rescue him!!!
ummm very nice to see Radditz happy at last, and Kudos on the Yamucha idea - I was despairing for a while there - I hate seeing Yamucha maligned in stories, but still I carried on reading, and you made it all alright!! *big grin*
PS - I'm going to read further - I couldn't resist reviewing when my Honey Lamb made an appearance.
I shall be praying for his safety (and that he find love with an Englishwoman) |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o I forgot to mention how keen I am on Radditz in this fic!! I love it when people include the little(??) sweet in their storylines.
Also the last S/G rating should have been 9, not 8, it's incredibly refreshing to read a fic by someone with an understanding of the language, and who makes so few mistakes!! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone has just reminded me of this fic! I started reading it a while ago, then MM had its slowness problems and I lost track of it. I'm so glad that I've got back into it again!
I'm thoroughly enjoying reading this, it's well thought out, well written and VERY entertaining. I'm only up to ch 5 at the moment, so I have to go back and read!! :D |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 14, 2003 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Hey great stuff can't wait for your next reveiw |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: July 03, 2003 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Radditz! I remember being happy you put him in this fic! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: July 03, 2003 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, It's me again! Thought I'd reread/review! Sorry it's been so long! Poor Radditz- It's not him Bulma gets!! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: June 28, 2003 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, even yet, still so exciting! The end of this chapter, had me on the edge of my chair! The enternal struggle of Goku, the intensity of Radditz's feelings as he cleansed his love's wounds, *yah, nice lemon too!* even Chi-Chi's thoughts and interaction with the telly had me spellbound with....Awww, I just love it!!!! A most wonderful writer you are and it's too bad you lost all of those 400 plus reviews on ffn!! |
Reviewed By: King_Kold On: June 24, 2003 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, please continue, I've been reading this for some time, kicks ass. |
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