| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't know how you do it. The chap was great before but your add-ons made it even better. Sorry I hadn't reviewed but I've been having probs with the ISP. As for the update you really gotta feel sorry for Sarah. That poor woman doesn't have a clue as to what really went on with Jock and Victor. If she ever finds out it's gonna crush her. Of course Bulma has been perfect throughout all thats happened and I hope she continues to be as strong b/c Freiza will be fowling up the air pretty soon. I know I've put in requests before for gruesome deaths and you've delivered, so I'll do it again. Make that fucking lizard pay big time for what he's done to everyone. Pls make it so gross that I won't be able to eat for a week (I could stand to lose a few lbs anyway :D). I want his guts coating the inside screen of the monitor, I want...er...hehe...sorry, got carried away there. As you can tell I am no fan of that no good, pompous, megalomaniac, self serving. dickless piece of shit. Ahem, as for Goku's ascent, that was just way cool. The way Radditz spoke to him, pissing him off a little at a time was rich. It worked too cause now he's a SSJ and Veggie is starting to talk to himself ^_^. Again, another awesome chap on your part and I am so looking forward to your next update. Kudos Cha!! |
Reviewed By: mae44 On: June 07, 2003 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You're a great writter! The only problem is that I linked to this page through ff.net and I can't find Danger in the Horizon to read more. I'm dying! I need to find it before I die of suspence. It stopped at chp. 22 at ff.net and reading through some of the reviews here I concluded that there is more to the story. MUST. FIND. STORY. |
Reviewed By: Pan-Chan Briefs On: June 03, 2003 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic on fanfiction.net a LONG time ago and am SO incredibly glad I found it again!!! And with chappies I haven't read!!! YAY! hehe. I was really glad to finally check up on this on FFN and realize you had talked about continuing it on this site. Ahhhhh, I hope you post more soon, I really can't wait to read more. This should be a book 'cause it's such great quality! Original AU with ZILLIONS of awesome twists and long chappies and great lemons and no OOCness. Keep up the greatness! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 03:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great update! Your description of that poor newbie reporter was right on. I kinda felt sorry for her having to report from the scene of grossness on a grand scale-LOL. Good! Personally I can't stand the press. The fact that Goku is stressed out b/c he hasn't become a ssj is a nice change. Usually it's Veggie that gets all bent outta shape at not becoming the Legendary. Radditz oath was so beautiful *sigh*. Amanda is one lucky woman, and the fact that they wanted to be intimate after all that happened made alot of sense. Of course the lemon was exactly the way it should've been. None of that hot and heavy "oh baby, harder, deeper" crap. After what they had been thru they needed to reassure each other and sort of rebond. And of course you gotta love Veggie. Bulma's about to go thru a crisis with the press and all he could think about is getting it on with her. I sort of get the feeling that our saiyan prince would think about getting laid during a nuclear holocaust O_o. Again, this was another super effort on your part and I'm so looking forward to the next chap :D. |
Reviewed By: Chiku On: May 11, 2003 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, you've written another chapter. And it's a good one too. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been awhile since I read your fic, so now I'm making up for that. Its even better than the last time I reviewed it! I'm totally captivated here! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: January 30, 2003 17:08 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah, and how could I have forgotten to tell you what an awesome scene that was with Victor & Amanda... Whew! What a looney! Radditz came just in the nick of time. I hope he makes it through the battle with Frieza, I really like them together. :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: January 30, 2003 17:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was intense!! What a great chapter! I really like the way you've decided to use Bardock, I'm interested to see how all of that will play out. It's a shame that Frieza knows about Bulma, but Bardock really had no choice but to reveal her to him. (Plus it makes for an even juicier plot line!) Looking forward to finding out what happens next. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 30, 2003 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo!! Great chap Cha! Raddy really knows how to make an entrance ^_~. At least now Amanda is safe from that delusional prick and R/A can go on with their lives without interference from anyone. Next in line to be wiped out is Frieza. Have I ever told you how much I hate that bastard? -_-. I can't believe how he has treated Bardock and the way he's using him is sickening. It bothers me that Bard had to tell the slimy, slithering scumbag about Bulma's mental powers and the fact that she may be Veg's mate. To think of what he's capable of doing to her makes me wanna vomit. Again, another great installment on your part. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dbzkeri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waiiiiiii!!!!!!!! I luved chp 39!!!!! XD This story is just too good to be true!!!!!!!!!!! luv ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: January 26, 2003 12:47 EST
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As always great chapter, and looking forward to the next ch. Good writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: January 26, 2003 08:47 EST
Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter!!! Please, continue it.
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Onna On: January 26, 2003 07:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm soo happy you've finally updated! This chapter was great, just like the rest of them... I hope you go on with the story! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 17:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you decided to post the rest of your story on this site. I'm happy now, ^_^ Well, I hope people will come to their senses and review your story. It's undeniably good, they waste their reviews on pathetic stories, when yours is right here. So, ignoring the stupidity of others, I truly wish you'll keep posting it here. |
Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 14, 2003 10:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ayah! I totally forgot to review this chapter.. And I read it ages ago.. Checked for updates every day..
What's with the lack of updates? You haven't given up now have you? That would be the death of me!
I hope to read more soon..
Take care, Naomi |
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