| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kapies On: February 09, 2002 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, will you please write more and soon. I love Vagita ans Bulma fan fiction. |
Reviewed By: Sara On: February 09, 2002 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i love this story. i can't wait til the next chapters. I have been reading it from about 3 different sites. *smile* SO, hurry up w/ the next chapters pleaz. thanx :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are going to make me cry. Poor poor Radditz. But I guess his pain is all for the greater good (the advancement of the V/B relationship). Maybe Lisa will be able to help our sad Saiyan friend. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the review and the acknowledgement at the being of chapter 21.-JB |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: February 08, 2002 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thx for the complement i honistly feel that this is one of the best fics i have read and thats over 120 fics any way plz you must put up more this is the only fic iv read that makes me feel im there watchin' it all happen. you truly are a good auther. anywho plz put up more ASAP.
loven it,
mizu |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2002 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. You have managed to do what only one other author has done-and that's to make me like Radditz more than Vegeta **checks her temperature**. I guess the long haired cutie cared for Bulma more than he was letting on. Maybe Lisa can get him out of his blue funk and make it easier for him to forget about Bulma. As far as B/V goes, I see they're starting to really communicate. I loved Veg's confession, and Bulma's reaction at the end of the chapter. Could that possibly mean that some lemon candy is right around the corner or will Veggie wait till they get to earth? I'll be on tranquilizers waiting for your update. HHHHHHUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYY!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2002 12:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaawwwww. Thanks for the compliment. I must say it's an improvement, cause at home I'm referred to as Queen Painintheass. Well written chapter. Poor Goku now knows that Bulma will be forced to breach the shield, and that he has a brother. I wonder if Radditz' state of mind will complicate things. I guess I'll continue reading to find out. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 11:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so good! BTW, I caught the direct quote from Piccolo. Nice touch. Done it myself.
Oh, that was a nice kiss. And I saw the Lisa and Radditz thing the first time I saw the names in the same paragraph together. That one was easy. But how will Yamcha react to all this. I'm not worried so much as to when the stuff that happened in the dream will happen as to how the other's are going to react to Bulma and Vegeta. lol, that should be amusing... |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you have done a good job so far in this story, but when will Vegeta and Bulma actually start making love in this story? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 07, 2002 04:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg I thought i was gonna bite my nails clear up to my elbows. Great chapter, I went from one emotion to another and you haven't even put out a lemon yet. God help me when you do (hehe). Zarbon is freakin me out, Nappa's temper has me concerned, poor Raditz has it bad, Veggie's turning into a real possessive jerk and Bulma is caught in the middle of this mess. Even "that time of the month" for me isn't that stressful. This story rocks and I hope you update asap. Keep up the great work> Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sat here for the last 5 minutes rereading the last line hoping that more would appear. That chapter was so good! I feel so sorry for Radditz. Poor baby! It's so sad when the one you love loves another. I hope he gets a happy ending. I can't wait forthe next chapter! This story is amazing.-JB |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is too good plz put up more im loven it and plz plz plz update this asap
loven it,
mizu |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kick @ss, onna!!! The last two chapters were awesome. Hopefully, the long awaited lemon will be in your next update **crosses fingers**
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 00:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have left me hooked. I can't wait for the next update. |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: February 04, 2002 18:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better!!! please write more soon as posible. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 04, 2002 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome chapters!!! What a talented writer you are. Feelings between B/V are starting to get serious and with both sharing the same bed-hubba, hubba. I don't trust Nappa though and, I can't believe I'm saying this, I feel sorry for Raditz. Poor baby is gonna have to go about it alone. Can't wait for the next update. Peace |
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