| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 20:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FORGET TO RATE
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 20:46 PST
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SHE FINALLY GOT FREE but inuyasha is still in the cold darn i thought he=d be like Its me look AT ME! OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT BUT STILL REALLY GOOD
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Title: O.M.GOSH.!!!!
Reviewed By: MistressKagome4U [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I ever told you how amazing you are?.. I think I have... I'm pretty sure I have... And by the slightest chance I haven't, OGMOSH you're amazing... Hurry up on the next chapter, babe, you're fans are creaming themselves for you! But one question... When is Rin and Sesshomaru gonna meet again??? ----With lots of fangirl screams, Tracy M.
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Reviewed By: madjax36 On: February 19, 2008 17:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, its obvious that everyone loves this story. I love this story and that's from someone who really needs to reread your COTD again. I kinda stopped halfway, cause your writing is this amazing roller coaster of emotional tidal waves and believable plot scenarios. Plus, its so refreshing to read someone who knows our generation. Our lingo. Our weird underground fetishses and what not. Or you're that f***king good of a writer. Tho, I'm thinking you're really experienced... I love how you've intro the d/s world into this story and OMG I can't wait to meet more of 'Jiro! Plus, I'm totally stoked in seeing the day after the night at the club. On a Shakespear rant, I loved the contrast to seeing Kagome going to Club of Illusions in the beginning (like she's in the throws of a fairy glammour and then again sans custome, completely disillusioned. She kinda reminds me of the character Helena from Midsummer. Of course, if I were to cast Inuyasha's part, he's the guy who turns into a horse's head - then again Puck was having an affair with Titania... Sorry, rambler. I actually played Helena in a Midsummer's production many years ago. But I definately like the Shakespear references and in an original story, like yours (even as a fanfic), you would get a solid "A" for accurate, quality quotes. Does that make sense? Anyway, wow, I ramble...WRITE MORE! I can so tell you're there! All I ask is the muse gives you the time/energy/space you'll need to keep plugging away. I would suggest more refs for your personal reading pleasure and if Shakespear is your bag, then might I add a suggestion of ref'ing Much Ado About Nothing or some 12th Night or maybe a little bit of the Merchant of Venice for classic plot devices? OR go to Rumiko Takahashi's stories (her other ones) from Rumic World? Or not. You're the creator. I'm just the reader here. Though I'm craving more. So don't let go, cause this story is glorious. Fabulous, really. And well, yeah. That's it. Thanks for reading and wow, I just hope you update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:46 PST
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LOVE the Shakespeare references. Midsummer is one of my absolutely favorite plays! I look forward to reading the rest!
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Reviewed By: peachzykeen14 On: February 16, 2008 21:23 PST
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omg that was UHMAZING!!!!!!! so kagome isn't out of the crossfire is she i mean would bankotsu subccumb to public humiliation in fromt of all of his "people"? so to speak. and well if so then does that mean that she and inu r gonna start hooking up...the beans about him being sha are gonna spill arent they? omg and sesshie!!!! soo many loose ends left untied and too much time for you to tie them!!!!!!! *passes out from shock of realization*
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 23:00 PST
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Hot damn I love chapter 8 too. Second favourite I think! Though I am a little disappointed that beer pong wasn't actually featured...maybe you could toss some flip cup during a later chapter since it FAR surpasses beer pong on the scale of fun :) Amazing writing as always. Now that I've gone back and re-read from the beginning again I can really see how your characters have matured - especially Inuyasha, Kagome and Miroku. It's amazing what a tragedy can do to age someone. Fantastic work and marvellously funny!
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...so I started reading this story again from the beginning because I couldn't help myself. I just love it that much. I think I've decided that Chapter 6 may be my favourite light-hearted chapter. The line "like a fat kid on cake" gets me EVERY time. This really is a grand fic. I've never gone back to re-read one this many tmes before so that's definitely saying something :) Good luck with the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Broken Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 11:08 PST
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I love this story. It is nice to see Kagome in a different light for a change. I really like your style and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 10:00 PST
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Great chapter! I love Kagome's courage in this chapter. I was so glad that she stood up to him. When Inu and Kag were in the alley, I thought he was going to tell her the truth. I was a few minutes late for work cause I had to finish that part before i left! I can't wait for that part in the story when the light is shone on some of the truth. I am so looking forward to when Kagejiro shows up. And Inu's reaction about him not being the father of Rin's child. So please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 12, 2008 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive he pulled a gun on her! You did a great job with this chapter though. I'm glad to see you writing again.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 18:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thought you were going to shoot someone! Well, not you, but Bank. Please tell me he's not going to get off that easy! Where's the justice! I'll trust you to do what you need to do, but you have to, like,...chop his dick off or something! I'm sorry I'm so crazy right now. That was just an excellent chapter and I was almost in 'Shades' withdraw. I can't wait until Sesshoumaru and the estranged brother come to town. I'm so excited!
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: hahahahaha On: February 12, 2008 17:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i actually screamed when i saw you updated. its really good. i have like an idea whats'going to happen, but im in like anticipation of the next chapter. thanks bud.
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Reviewed By: Radhika [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 16:44 PST
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OO i totally forgot that she doesn't knw that Sha is Inuyasha! this might mean troublee
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: February 12, 2008 13:33 PST
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Ooooh, Kagome my dear it not the end. Its just the beginning for all hell to break loose. I hope that the next chapter will involve Sess,Inu, their older brother, Kags and and Rin. Can not leave out Banks. I hope that you will update the story really soon.
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