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| "Shades of Gray" Reviews/Comments [ 670 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 10:09 PDT
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Sooo happy you updated!!! When I got the email, at first, I was wondering what story it was and then it was like an explosion in my head (YES!! I get to read a chapter!!). So glad that Kagome confessed everything to IY, so they can start a relationship properly (Finally!!). Love Miro and 'jiro, so hilarious. Wish we could see more of them. When Bank showed up, I was so scared!! In my head, I was like: "Not again!! OMG!!!" I was biting my nails (which I NEVER do). So evil for stopping the chap there. I know you like happy endings and like they say "it's always darker before dawn" but, poor Kagome... Anyways, I totally get what you mean about life being crappy sometimes (in May I was in a serious car accident where 2 of my friends died and my grandpa has terminal cancer). Things like that makes you realize what is important and what isn't and to cherish what you have. Anyways, I hope it works out for you and I hope to read another chap soon.
| Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 09:39 PDT
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This was a wonderful thing to see when I woke up. Loveage. Hah even though you warned us of the violence that didn't stop the "holy shits" coming from me. Great job dear, can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling (nsi) On: July 13, 2010 14:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! Just when IY/K were starting to smooth things out Bankotsu had to come in...and with InuYasha on a hunt for Onigumo, I can't see help arriving too quickly. Poor girl =( I'm kind of hoping Jakotsu has some part in the save. I love him being so protective of her, like when Bank broke into his house and he stayed vigil over Kagome. Whatever you do, I'm eager to find out what'll happen next! Getting updates for this is like finding a present in my inbox and timing is not an issue because its always, always worth the wait. Excellent, exciting update! ~Amber :D
| Title: NO WAY!!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 13:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!! Damn!! I just can't believe it!! I wasn't expecting an update, so when I saw on my mailbox that you had updated I was nearly pissing my pants! I read like a rabid woman, every word, every sentence!+*+*+* Just when you think things are finally getting better, you drop the F-bomb on us!! Damn girl!! You have some wicked imagination!! And a twisted mind to leave us with this cliffhanger!! I swear, I nearly had a heart attack!! *+*+*+ Love your sense of humor! The scene with Miroku and Kagejiro was priceless!! I love those 2! Damn it!! If I can't have Inu, I want a Kage for myself!! >_< *+*+*+ I'm really sorry to hear that life outside internet has not been quite what we all wish for our favorite writer. I wish I could say something witty or even smart to make you feel better, but all I can say is that no matter how bad it gets, there is always something better around the corner (The problem sometimes lies on making it around the fucking corner!). I really wish for everything to get better in your life. You are a very smart girl, and there is got to be someone out there who is not blind and will see you for who you really are and love you that way. *+*+*+ I would be lying if I said I didn't want you to update soon, but I am hoping that life will get better and you will find your wits to write again in the near future. Take care of yourself, have fun, and don't worry about the things you can't change. We all love you here, and behind each name, there is a person who appreciates what you do! Hugs and best wishes: MidCat
| Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 13:18 PDT
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Damn i didn't think Bankotsu would show up again. Figures that just when things start to look up something has to happen to off set it all. I really hope Kagome get her chance to get revenge on Bankotsu its well over due. UPDATE SOON because that was a horrible place to end a chapter i dont know how i will handle the suspense.
| Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2010 12:13 PDT
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Figures, just when everything begins to look up Bankotsu rears his twisted head again. I very much want Kagome to personally get her revenge on him, he's underestimating her now and I want her to show him what she's capable of, and I don't mean physically.
| Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2010 06:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no! I have been reading this story for DAYS and im sooo sad their are no more chapters to read yet!!!!!!!!! This is an AMAZING story. Please never give it up and UPDATE SOON!!!
| Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 07:43 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the March 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: Ht tp:// groups. yahoo. com/group/ FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/winners. php?a= show&type= Fanfiction&year= March%202010 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: Ht tp:// feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: Ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/pickup_ site. php First place awards will be on permanent display here: ht tp:// feudal. animara. org/gallery. php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: ninjagurl512 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2010 08:51 PDT
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wonderful chapter! finally kagome stops being a dumbass. can't wait for the next one, keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Oyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 23:56 PST
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so his brother was wrong! ha!! well, i never saw a weirdo stalker coming. i really thought it was naraku that kikyo had been doing. please have more soon! i want to see what happens and if naraku can talk some sense into his cousin!
| Reviewed By: GLily On: March 01, 2010 21:26 PST
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For the chapter you just gave us, consider yourself forgiven. ^_^ Please update soon though!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Katlady13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so I was really excited when I saw it was Onigumo! I can't believe I got it right! Anyway, thank you for coming back to this story, I was worried! Geeze, since your last update I got myself knocked up, by my husband, and I'm due with a baby girl in July! (I have to announce that to everyone, apparently) So, this was excellent, the confrontation with the photos exactly how I'd imagined it! I'm really looking forward to her making up with Sango and Rin and even Miroku too lol. I see possible massive humor in the making. I just hope you're able to update more frequently, although I understand real life has a way of taking over your priorities for you. So, excellent as always and update soon!
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 17:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sooooooooo happy when I got the email for this! I loved it! The way they made up was so explosive and crazy--a little unexpected considering their argument--but amazing all the same. Interesting twist with the cousin. I had a feeling he was gonna be one of the reincarnations, but his motives are a bit of a blur. I can't wait to read more about those. Naraku surprised me as the good guy here and his arguments and him reluctantly working with IY made me giggle. The banter was hilarious. And of course, I can't wait to read more on IY/Kag making up. Even if she makes things right with him, I can't see everyone else so readily accepting her (especially Sango and Rin). How Mama's gonna react to Kagome bringing a boy home should be interesting, too. I wonder if she'll wind up having to sneak him through a window xD VERY exciting update! Well worth the wait! ~Amber :D
| Reviewed By: Kinky-Hoe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 12:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've been waiting for them to reunite for so long! And I didn't think they'd jump each other right away! I dreamed of it, but I didn't expect you to write it, lol. Amazing update, really. It's fine, you were busy. Everyone happens to be busy sometimes. I'm kinda missing Sesshomaru and Kikyo (sigh)... Please, update soon!
| Title: I FREAK THE FUCK OUT!
Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 10:07 PST
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Yes! YES! YEEEESSS! I love it...every aspect of it. The suspense...the intensity...and of course, the LEMON! So, Naraku is...the...good guy? That'll be hard to wrap my mind around, but okay. When Naraku said that it wasn't him in the pics, I was like, "Mmmhmmm, yeah whatever, bro." But okay, enter Onigumo the crazy cousin stalker who knows about....basically everything. Great job Kags for snatching the fishnet clad hanyou pic. Then hot lemon in the car...can't resist those "cognac" eyes. Okay, let me stop rejoicing. I love this story and because you don't update often, when I get the email about it...I FREAK THE FUCK OUT. I'm like, Elf. "SANTA!" NEways, wishing you luck, prosperity, and all that jazz (^_^)!
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