| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: inukaggrl06 On: May 24, 2006 06:51 PDT
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This is for that one reviewer 0oStandinOuto0, don't you look closer to the underlying message, Kagome has a heart locket... Inuyasha has a key necklace... He's the only one that can open her heart... PUN INTENDED! I can agree with her though if you pair her up with somebody else, I'll kick you.. It just doesn't do the story justice if you pair her with someone else when she has already mated.. then de-inu-fied.. But no, you just can't do that, it ain't cool. Sorry I was reading her comment and it had me wondering if anybody was looking at the underlying message, hopefully some people did. Alright I'm leavin
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06(nsi) On: May 24, 2006 06:46 PDT
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man, I love your story, I actually didn't cry that time. I am so axious for the next chapter. Whats the deal you haven't been sending me emails. I'm surprised at you. Well not really, I am soo bored. I had a choir concert last night and I got to sing my song, so I am happy. I check my mail often now to see if you have updated your story, and lol you did. ME SO HAPPY!I don't want them to be seperated, but I think I know what you're doing. I do have some things in my mind, that I think are right. Like the locket that Kagome has on, she won't let it go because before she get's de-inu-fied.. She will still have the locket and for Inuyasha he has the key that will open the heart locket.. Man I love this.. I can just play it out in my mind. I can't wait for you to continue, I think that this one is longer than your other story. Well girl you know what to do, I'm gonna stop typing the comment, so YOU BETTA GET THAT NEXT CHAPPIE DONE! I don't want to wait forever unlike me who takes forever to update... Okay now I'm leavin. I'm over a thousand words for this comment.
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Title: You want me dead dont you!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 05:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o0o If I didnt like this story sooo much I would HATE it!!!!!!!!! Grrrrr...how could theyy......THEY WONT REMEMBER EACH OTHER!! !THEY JUST WONT!!!!!!!!*sobs LOUDLY** I want to say I loved this chapter but I can't....not when my heart is going out to them and I want to KILL Inuyasha's parents and Kagome's mother!!! Not when I have the nauseating and sickening hunch that Kagome will end up with Sesshomaru or Koga. AND MOST DEFINATELY NOT when Inuyasha and Kagome might not remember each other at first sight. Crying is all I can do now.!!!!!! I hope this doesnt come off as too harsh its just that....this drama thing is TOO much for my poor little heart......too much. But the connection with Kagome and Souta seems to rise which is the only plus I could find in this chapter. Damn you Kaede and every once else who wants the bond broken!!!! Alright....well another plus actually is that the chapter was well written and makes me want to cry desperately in an effort to make up for the depresssing situation. This isn't a Kag/Sess or Kouga (or someone else) is it? I hate those!! No offense to anyone who likes them I am just a Inu/Kag fan. It works that way!!! Anyway. This chapter was excellently written and the plot(although I hate it) is working but the suspense of everything and the drama is so....grrr...I have no words. I can't wait for the next chapter. That leads closer and closer to the chapter where they meet again.....and if there is a happy ending...its also leading to that. Good job.:| :|
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 05:21 PDT
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CHAPTERS are so sad... wanna cry... can't too tired... update soon!
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 24, 2006 03:04 PDT
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GAHHHHHH! Need them to be together! *slumps to floor and weeps uncontrollably*
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Title: Update please!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok girly, just update...i'm still to upset about everything...so update and make me happy again soon! I can't say to much now cuz i'm crying for them....so when will this be a book? lov yas mwah ps.call me
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:24 PDT
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so sad, so tragic, so wrong!!! This just isn't fair, destiny will not leave well enough alone.. tsk tsk. I kow they will remember eventually but i honestly have to wonder about the integrity of sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 23, 2006 21:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chappie was sad. Amnesia of the one you love. Sucks. I can't wait to read the next chap. I wonder hoe they'll meet again. I love this story. :-)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:13 PDT
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okay now! two years later!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD ;_____________; it makes me so sad, 'specially how your drawing out the angst T___T but GASP!!!!!!!! Kikyou knows of the mate-age!!!!!!!! I see trouble a brewin'! LOVE!UPDATELOVELOVELOVE!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:12 PDT
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*sobs once again* I soooooooo want to RING THAT GOD DAMN DEMON SIDE of INuyasha right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*stabs it again and again and again and again!!!!!!!* DIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIE!!!!!!!!!!! *wipes away tears* love the story*bows* you are awesome!!! (haha, i just looked at my activation code thingy and it says MUTS !!!!!lol)
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Title: DAMN!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 05:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!! That was so!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I dont even know what to say!!! I want to cry!!!What if they dont remember each other!!!!!!!OH I couldnt take that!! I WOULD KILL THEM BOTH!!! WHAT IF WHAT THEY DID MESSED IT UP!!!!!!!!!THIS ISNT THE END IS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!OH PLEASE DONT LET IT BE!! PLEASE LET THEM GET TOGETHER BEFORE I THROW MYSELF OVER THE RAILING OF MY SCHOOL TRACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVED THIS CHAPTER BUT I WANTED TO CRY SOOOO BAD!!!!!! ARENT THEY DESTINED!!OH AND I LOVED SESSHOMARU IN THIS A LOT AND HOW HE BECAME CLOSE WITH HIS BROTHER!!!! I LOVED IT!!!THE HUGS AND EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!GOSH I HATE DRAMA!!!!!!!!BUT I LOVED THE CHAPTER THROUGH ALL THE TEARS AND CRYING I LOVE IT!!! OH AND THE MEG RYAN AND NICHOLAS CAGE THING WAS FUNNY!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!PLEASE LET THE BE HAPPY SOOOOONNNNNN AND I PROMISE NOT TO THROUGH THIS DUMP TRUCK FULL OF BOOKS AT YOU!!!^_^_^_^_^:D:D:D:D:D:D
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 04:46 PDT
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I can't kill you or I won't be able to hear the rest of the story. That was so sad.Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 23, 2006 04:15 PDT
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*Cries and throws more tantrums*
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Title: I cried...
Reviewed By: Michaela On: May 23, 2006 03:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you... now I'm crying. That was too sad. >.>
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Title: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 01:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* He's gone noooooooooooooooo! *sobs* I can't really think now...it hurts to much. I would die if I had a mate and he had to go away for so long! *Sobs* When they see each other let them remember please! *sobs and sobs on top of sobs* I can't stop cry.:( MY POOR INU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Save his and Kags breaking hearts soon! Lov yas mwah *still sobing*
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