| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl!!! Sorry about the boy troubles. Man, he's calling women fickle? What about him? LoL. Anyhoo, yes, this chapter was sad. Aww, so Inu's going away for 2 whole years? Damn, that's a long time. I hope something works out, and that Kags at least wakes up before he goes. But whatever you decide to happen, I'll bet will be gret. I love your story, and can't wait for the next chappie. Awesome job!!! ;-)
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 14:01 PDT
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wow!! So sad.. poor kags and inu...He can do it, adn it will go by quick, i am jsut afriad of what will happen w/ kags in the mean time.. we all know the boys love to move in on her..
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 18, 2006 12:30 PDT
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But why can't Kagome go with him??????
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Title: *cry*
Reviewed By: ochamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... *tear* I can't believe you ended it like that! >< Well... I suppose... In Inu Yasha and Kagome's case, absense makes the heart grow fonder.... Right? *cue second tear* *cough* Well, very well written chapter. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: To BiggestInuyashaFANever
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 09:29 PDT
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Thanks girl, you were right..i meant BILE instead of VILE. Thanks for the correction...ah, about the drama thing...distance makes everything exciting...you'll like how everything will come into play...i promise. don't worry, my new story does not have 'physical separation' issues, they'll be together until the end of the story..but there's a twist...i'll finish complexities first though before i start posting the new one...thanks for reviewing.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 09:23 PDT
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NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Inuyasha!!!!!!!! Why training have to be so far away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DRAMA SUCKZ!!!!!!!!!!Just like a little game called love... they're separated for years but at least they don't hate one another.... oh and i think there might be a slight grammar mistake near the beginning of this chapter ' he felt vile rise in his throat as he fought the urge to gag.' Did you mean bile (as in stuff that comes out of your throat when about to barf.) instead of vile (as in loathsome and disgusting.)
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Title: please update soon!
Reviewed By: rlp On: May 18, 2006 08:01 PDT
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OOHHH I love the story! please update soon. I've just got to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Charice On: May 18, 2006 06:13 PDT
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It's been awhile. I nearly become crazy because I can't read your story. Stupid internet connection. I haven't read the new chapters yet as of now because we have to go to our province. but I printed it. I'll review as soon as I can after I read. sorry I have to go their already mad at me.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 16:05 PDT
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WOW!!! That was a great chapter!!! I didn't see it coming adn worry at what it will mean. Knowing inu he wil be pissed w/ himself for hurting her and want to stay away and kags of course will forgive him.. hmm interesting though.. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Aewi zu Hause On: May 17, 2006 09:27 PDT
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Ah! Cliffy! But I really enjoy reading your fic! Please keep on writing! ^_^
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Title: AHHHH!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sessy this is all cuz of YOU! I'm kick your ASS!!!* Oh hi! *hides sessy's boby* man Kagome is supid! she didn't hear a word anyone was saying to her about mates! I hope Sessy sees what he did wrong too. *hits him upside the head* UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOONNNN!!!! i'm dieing here!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 17:48 PDT
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:O poor Inu! when he comes back to his senses, he is going to feel TERRIBLE! ;_; and then he'll be upset at kagome because she will tell him there is nothing to forgive ;________; LOVE LOVE LOVE! LOVE!
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: May 16, 2006 16:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...that was a jaw dropper!! That was...wow...I dont know what to say...update soon!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 15:46 PDT
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ACK!!!! DRAMA is totally awsome need more!!!!!! mabye not more drama but more story!!!!!!! Life sucks with a broken arm!!!!!!
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Title: GASPINGCRYINGLOVINGIT!!!!!!!!!1GASPING!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 15:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!11 I DONT CARE HOW KORNY KAGOME THOUGHT THAT POEM WAS I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! oH AND I AM GLAD I CAN BE HELP!! BUT YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION TO WAKE UP AND WANT BADLY TO GET TO SCHOOL JUST TO READ THIS STORY!!!! THAT WAS SOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! BUT....OMG!!!!!!!!!11 HE HURT HER!!!!!!!!!!!! GOSH I WANT TO KILL HIM!!!!!!!! BUT HE IS FULL DEMON AND ITS OKAY!!! KAGOME CAN BRING HIM BACK!!! I KNOW SHE CAN BUT SHE IS UNCONCIOUS!!!...boy that could make things difficult. lol anyway!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED HOW INUYASHA AND KAGOME NEARLY GOT CAUGHT!!!!! I WAS HALF LAUGING HALF CRYING BECAUSE OF THE LAUGHING AND I JUST ABSOLUTELY LOVED HOW THE MOM IS LIKE...sneaky....like Inuyasha's dad. Lol........GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THAT WAS JUST SOOOOO AMAZING!!! INUYASHA BETTER WAKE THE HECK UP AND STOP IT!!!!!!! BUT HE WILL FEEL SO REMORSE FULLL!!!!!!!!!!OH I DONT WANT THAT!!!!! BUT KAGOME IS FORGIVING!!!!!!!! AND SESSHOMARU CAME BACK! I love him and all but he better back off and NOT flirt with Kagome because I am ALL for Inuyasha and Kagome and he is just making it more difficult!!!!!!!!! But I love him and I will gladly take him off your hands! lol!!!! POOR INUYAHSA!! POOR KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!11 I CANT TELL WHICH ONE I FEEL WORSE FOR!!!!!!!! BOTH ARE IN A STICKY SITUATION!!!!!!!!11 I THOUGHT I WAS GONNA CRY WHEN INUYASHA TURNED DEMON!!!!!!!!!! OH PLEASE LET THERE BE FLUFF IN THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR ME TO FEEL BETTER!!!!!!!! THESE TEARS WILL CONTINUE ON UNTIL THEY MAKE UP OR INUYASHA GETS DONE BEING A BIG SHOT DEMON LOL!!!!!! OH I WISH I COULD KEEP WRITING BUT I AM ACTUALLY AT HOME(i was soooo happy when my computer had it updated!! I now love my computer!!) AND I NEED TO GO GET SOMETHING TO EAT!! NO BREAKFAST (i was reading this story!!!) AND NO LUNCH(homework!!!) GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! PLEASE FLUFF AND MAKE UP OR I CRY!!!!!!!!!!!Well I am crying now but those are a mixture of happiness, sadness, and I think just a tiny bit of insanity!!!! LOL!!!!!! THANKYOU SOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!! AND I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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