| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: ochamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 14:36 PDT
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Aww... You have a good reason to be proud of this chapter! >w< I can't wait to read the next one. Poor Inu Yasha and Kagome... so they're going to forget all about being mated to one another? *tear* Well... I hope... Everything will get better soon. ^^; And I really hope that neither one of them forgets each other and gets with someone else. >.< That would be sad. Anywho, keep writing! ^^
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Title: WHY!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 11:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so wrong, why can't they make notes to one another! *CCCCCCCRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYSSSSSSSSS* Their in so much pain I hurt now too...make it go away! That's just soooooooo wrong to do to them. But they way they made love so sweet and lovey!^.~ make them happy in the end missy! I can't wait to talk to you too(and hear about the wedding!) CALL ME SOON! lov yas mwah
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 21, 2006 10:42 PDT
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AHHH!Why is fate so cruel? I want them to rememeber eachother! *cries hysterically* Sorry...How was the wedding? And who's? Wooooot! Best chapter ever in the GREATEST FREAKING STORY IN THE WORLD! Writen by an author that could seriously be god in disguise! (I'm not religous but if your god *puts on accent*Then for you baby, i could be)
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 10:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...*sniffle* That was awesome! It had me tearing up. That chapter really pulled on the heart strings. Now one question. When their bond is broken they forget everything? Does everybody foreget or just them?? Can you explain this to me? I'm confuzzled
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Title: *sad**happy!**sad**HAPPY!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I could write a longer review but I have a Banquet to go to so I must hurry. To make up for the shortness everything will be in bold and caps...hopefully if my computer allows it. THAT CHAPTER WAS BOTH SAD AND AMAZING!!! I DONT WANT THEM TO GET THEIR BOND BROKEN OR HIM TO LEAVE!!!! GOSH I WANT TO CRY SOOO BAD BUT THEN DANCE ON HOW GOOD THIS CHAPTER WAS!!!! IT WAS NOT ONLY AMAZING BUT INTENSE AND WELL WRITEN!! I LOVED IT!!!! THANK YOU FOR THE FLUFF!! I MIGHT NEED IT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS THAT COULD CAUSE SEVERE CRYING SESSIONS OR A NEED TO SCREAM AT THE TOP OF MY LUNGS!!! OKAY WELL GREAT JOB!!!! AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! OH PLEASE LET THEM LEAVE AND GET BACK TOGETHER SOON OR I WILL DIE!!! BUT THE DRAMA....THE DRAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^_^_^_^_^
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 09:43 PDT
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Wow!!! That poor couple never gets a break!! But I guess if they did would we love them as much? Great chappie, loved the twist, but can 2 teens promise to each other last 2 years.. and i know kikyo and kouga will rear thier ugly heads once more.. esp. now that they are tragically torn apart.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 07:41 PDT
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awwwwwww that's (sniffles) a really good chapter............. why would they forget?? I don't understand. How could they forget???? Oh well..... I need to tell you how much i love your stories before i break out crying..... I ....waaaaaaaaawawawawawawawwawawawawawawawwwawawawwawawawawawweawawawawwaaw awawaawawawawawawawawawwawawawwwawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawaawawaw awawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawawa wawawawawawawawawa~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Darn it i didn't have a chance........ kisses bye!
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 20, 2006 20:02 PDT
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Wait...Where is the new chapter??? I go to visit my family for 2 whole days and then I get all excited when i open the page...but where is my surprise??? WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME???? Oooh well... I need to stop depending on you so much anyway...Damned expectations...Fine! be that way...don't give me my drug! I'll just go in a corner now...and cry...cause the love of my life has left me ...all alone...in the dark...frightened...without anything to read.... WAHHHHHHHHHHH! *throws fit* Sorry...I still love you...*cough* abandoner*cough*
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 07:53 PDT
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Why does Inuyasha always face this torment. It'a heart-wrenching experience. Targic... tragic... O.Kkkkk - Enough og that, This is awesome. You really like making huge problems don't you? Two years? Thats way too long for Inuyasha. Won't Kagome think Inuyasha abandoned her? What will happen in these two years that they are seperated? Oh no, we must find out. Keep updating please.
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Title: CRYCRYCRY*GASPS,GASPS,GASPS*CRYCRYCRY
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 05:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now you know and I know that I would NEver hate anything that you do. But I do want to cry badly now!!! But...I loved INTENSELY how its played out!!!!! I am so worried though!!! INUYASHA AND KAGOME!!! GOSH I WANT TO CRY!! But you wrote it so greatly that it almost makes up for me wanting to die right now!!!!! POOR INUYASHA!! I AM SOOOO GLAD THAT INUYASHA AND SESSHOMARU MADE UP THOUGH!!! THEY HAVE BEEN TO ABSORBED IN PRIDE TO FINALLY TALK!!! I LOVED THEIR KIDDING AROUND TOO!!!!!!! IT WAS SOOO FUNNY!!!!!!!! Gosh.......may I ask...no no....BEG that you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let there be one more fluff scene between Inuyasha and Kagome before you ship him off and kill them both!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER BUT SADDEND!!!!! I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DID MAKE ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I probably love you already (in a non weird way) due to the fact that you are an awesome writer and made this story BUT I WILL BE ETERNALLY GRATEFUL!!!!!! I WANT TO KILL INUYASHA"S FATHER NOW THOUGH BECAUSE OF THIS but I under stand its for "good reasons" even if I despise it. GREAT JOB!!! !!!!!! !!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Even though if they say goodbye I will cry more but I will suck it in because I am in school afterall. Lol!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!! I HOPE THOSE TWO YEARS GO BYE FAST BECAUSE IF THEY SEE EACHOTHER AGAIN AND THEY ARE HAPPY I WILL SEND YOU A GIANT THANKYOU CARD!!!!! dont know how but I will!!!!!!!!!! But what if...NO!!!! HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY I WANT TO BE HAPPY and when they get together again and are happy I WILL BE TOO!! !!OKAY WELL LOVED THE CHAPTER THE TEARS ACTUALLY MADE ME FEEL BETTER AND I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! (oh and I liked Kagome's mom in this one!! i liked her before but she is raised up a point lol!!). Oh and thanks for updating!!! I am sorry you have to deal with ex's and what not. If thats the problem its okay if you wait to update. I would understand. Anway GREAT job!!!
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Title: wonderful!!
Reviewed By: rainydays-nsi On: May 18, 2006 21:58 PDT
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omgosh! that was an amazing chapter. probably one of my favorites. i think this chapter was fully developed ~ everything was good! the characters were so real. it was awesome!! i must say.. i am bummed about inuyasha and kagome. i wonder HOW they will survive without each other. this chapter threw me off... i didnt expect them to be separated for two years!!! i am also very curious to see if you will just summarize the two years or go into a lot of detail. humm... i guess i will find out soon! thanks for the update!! i can't wait to see what happens next... and what will happen when kagome and inuyasha see each other after two years!!!
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Title: CRYING!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 20:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs* I'm sooooooooo SAD! i could die. why can't she go with him and they learn together!*more sobs* My poor InuYasha!!!!!!!!!! *sobs,sobs,sssssssoooooooooobbbbbbbbssssss,sobs* I can't stop crying he's gonna be in so much pain and what about Kagome and what if she forgets him or what if she can't wait for him! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHH! What if the demon in him becomes stronger cuz it's a way from it's mate so long!*S O B S* Oh and I can't wait to talk to ya! lov yas mwah^_^
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 18, 2006 20:09 PDT
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man you have me crying... this is such a good chappie.. 2 years away from Kagome when he can't spend a night away from her, makes me want to cry harder. I don't want that to happen with my favorite couple, I still can't believe it, two long years away from each other and in different countries.. England, and Asia... This story does take place in Japan doesn't it? Just wonderin.. lol! I am sooo sad now. I am now another's beta reader and I think I figured out what happens with it.. the writer sends the beta the chapter that they are working on and the beta reader helps with the grammar and spelling and all that freakin jazz. So he he, I figured it out. Well this review is so long for me, I got to go, I need to check if my mother threw away some papers that I need for class. Talk to you later. Maybe we can acutally do this beta thing right? LOL ^)^ - Chels
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Title: :(
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 18, 2006 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not talking to you....And thanks for tha happy birthday...I'm still not talking to you...
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 17:03 PDT
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;___________________________;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! two years!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????? when he gets back it will be like they dont know each other as well, or well.... they would just miss out on things in the others lives in those 2 years.... LOVE! men are scum, thats the best way of explaining it xD
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