| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 22:59 PDT
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nvm about that last part, i was gettign confused for some odd reason... sorry bout that^^'
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 22:58 PDT
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wow that was an intense chapter! I was surprised that all that happened so abruptly, but I am glad. I am very interested to see what happens the morning after. And all I have to say is... what a great birthday present for Kagome!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, almost died when you wrote chapter 22 XD, one ? why did you change those chapters, whasnt it party and Kagome going with sesshomaru and all that, or are you just going to add those chapters in later, or not at all?
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn girl!!! That was one fricken hot lemon. You definitely delivered. I LOVED this chapter. It was so... so... HOT! LoL. I can't wait till Kags birthday party in the next chapter. Geez, what a great birthday present from Yash. I wouldn't mind getting one like that too... LOL, j/j. You rock!!! I can't wait till the next chapter, awesome update!!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: May 11, 2006 18:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice...really nice. I LOVED IT!! Ha Ha Ha it was good and I like the whole thing about how a bithday card would have been enough lol.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 11, 2006 16:54 PDT
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Wow, one simple word. You probably had a few hundred people who read the story panting by the way you described everything but, what the hell, almost every author goes through the phase. I haven't yet. I think I'll leave that to people who are really good at typing those type of stories. But, along the lines of my story, all I know is that I want Inuyasha and Kagome together of course. I'm trying to type up a new chapter for it, but it's getting difficult when nothing comes to mind anymore. I've been home all day because of the god-damn flu bug, that my niece gave to me, and my dad was sick so yea.. I've written about one or two pages of the new chapter. I do have a lemon in the chapter between the two of them but after that I don't know what to type about. I have Sesshomarou smirking about something, that I'm not so sure about either... if you have any ideas... leave a comment on my story, or if your PC isn't being pissy you can email me. Alright I got to go and eat my resse tulip (ice cream with peanut butter spread) I'll talk to you later! ^_^
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 16:00 PDT
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hehe, i love the last lines of this chapter.. hehe after something like that you can still make me laugh!! great chapter, i look forward to reading the next one.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: HigherBeing(not signed in) On: May 11, 2006 16:00 PDT
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... read chapter 22..... sizzly.....
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 15:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm lemony goodness. Now that's what I'm talkin bout ^.^
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Title: WoWAAAA!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 11:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lookie lookie....i'm your 19O&191 review! YA Know you're the shit when ya get to # like this so soon!
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Title: Wild!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 11:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like Oh my god! Tai is so funny, he alot like my mom! I know they were gonna find them...lies go no where with boyfriends...just we can find things out they can too. This was funny I needed a chapter like this. I Know the next one will be even more FUN! sooo UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 11, 2006 09:37 PDT
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dun dun dun...and late night again my dearest???
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 08:50 PDT
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Happy Birthday Kagome! Haha, Inuyasha Is Really Over Possessive Aint He? All The More Fustrating For Kagome. Awesome! Keep Updating Please.
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Reviewed By: rainydays-nsi On: May 10, 2006 23:36 PDT
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oh dear... this will be intense... I am curious to see what will happen after Inuyasha fights Jiromaru... they really are protective boyfriends. Kagome and Sango should have thought about it more.. I mean that kind of scheme never works out. haha. great job once again! i love your consistent updates! thanks!! :o)
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Reviewed By: Charice On: May 10, 2006 22:33 PDT
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I can't wait for Kagome's birthday. What will Inuyasha do to Kagome because she went to a club without telling him. And she lied to him that she went to Sango's house. Please! Update! Update! Update! Update! UPdate! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Please!
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