| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 00:03 PDT
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Wow that was unbearable, they have to forget?!! What a cruel twist of fate!! I hope he kept the key so that way they will know that he was the one destined for her heart and him alone carrying the key... I hope you update soon, the sooner this err seperation is over the easier I will breathe..
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Reviewed By: rainydays-nsi On: May 22, 2006 23:14 PDT
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ahh!! that is just so sad! they have to start from scratch again!! Ahh!! how will the bonds be severed? i am very interested to find out... and she'll remember sesshoumaru and his family... but just no inuyasha? thats super weird. I was also wondering... once they find each other again, will all their previous memories return? ahh! i really like the locket and key- its just so romantic! fate will bring them together! i just know it! update soon!! :o)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 22:46 PDT
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;_______; i was waiting for that chapter i started crying at the very first word because i new it was going to be sad xD I'll bet Inu kept the key that opens the locket :P and kags wont even know its a locket while shes in the forgetting mode or she wont be able to open it anyways :P and thats how they are going to "find each other" again *sigh* LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!update soon my love! (soon as in, there better be a new chapter when i get home from work tommorrow night XXXD *joking*) LOVE LOVE LOVE **is still teary**
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 22:37 PDT
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*sobs uncontrolably* now i really really REALY dont want them to forget eachother!!!!!!! well just so long as Kagome doesnt get raped or anything like that and she remembers Inuyasha Im fine. *continues to sob uncontrolably*
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 22, 2006 21:47 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That... was so... SAD. And heart-breaking. OMG, I can't believ your story turned out like this. That's what i love about yoyr stories, they start off light and carefree, to something to deep it hurts. LoL. Wonderful story. But please, don't tell me you plan for Kags to be engaged or something to someone else when Inu returns. I mean, I wrote that in my story, but now that I think of reading it in another story, it's cruel. LoL. I hope Sessh doesn't fall in love with Kags, and she with him. I know whatever you devide to happen in this story, it'll be great. ;-) I can't wait till the next chappie. :-)
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 22, 2006 21:13 PDT
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NOOOOOO!!!!!! They can't be separated, I don't want them to be. You can't make me believe this junk.. well okay you can but please no more tears I don't know if I can take any more... I swear I am have tears streaming down my face as I type this, that and my eyes are all puffy and red from the tears, I can't believe how you can update that quickly, hopefully I'll be able to do that when I am finally out of school, I only have three more days! Then I can sleep in type my chapters.... go to work... come home type some more, then go back to bed I think that's going to be my routine. I swear, girl I think that if it was ever possible I would say, you need to get this thing published. I bet a lot of people would buy it if enough people are into anime and you know that anime is coming into style so before long, it will become the 'in' thing to do.. well got to go I do have school and i do need to get some rest. I'll talk to you later. Email me sometime.. I am writing a new chapter, not as good as yours but still I am writing.
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Reviewed By: paju_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:02 PDT
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whoooweeeee! That was quite a tear jerker if I do say so myself! I loved it and I am sooo glad you explained that whole thing for me. I was soo confuzzled about the whole forgetting thing but now I understand. Thanxxx! Love it! Update soon. And dont do the whole 'Two years later...' thing. I mean you can skip around cause I mean face it what r u gonna talk about but give us a little insight at what they are doing during the whole two years dont just skip it like I know so many other authors would.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 22, 2006 16:55 PDT
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You made me cry again.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 15:37 PDT
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Great Job!! Omgosh... TWO WHOLE YEARS!!! I can't believe it. Will they actually forget each other!?!? I mean... breaking the bond.. yikes! I can't wait for those two years to pass!! Ahh!! I hope you update soon! Wonderful job again!! :o)
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 10:29 PDT
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yanna_enoah must die ---- *Struggles to control self* if she dies who would continue this awesome story? --- Damn you for breaking up Inuyasha and Kagome!!! Keep updating to get them together again please.
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Reviewed By: kittycat925 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 05:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your fanfic so far and can't wait to see what you come up with next!!! Please update when you can!
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Reviewed By: TrinityK (nsi) On: May 22, 2006 01:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... That was a cute fluufy chapter. I LOVED it. But I'm guessing what's about to come will be a drama roller coaster. Please tell me, that there will be no case of amnesia. That sucks that they're breaking the bond. I hope Inu trains quick and finds Kags. I can't wait till the next chapter. And don't even apologize about beling late to post. It wasn't late. Considering how much I update, your updates are downright speedy. LoL. ;-)Until next time!!! Awesome chappie!!!! :-)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 20:43 PDT
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:O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DO THEY HAVE TO FORGET EACH OTHER!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!WHY!???!?!??!?!?!? see now your getting nasty and making poor Inu and Kags suffer (makes me cry) 2 years and they are going to forget each other!!!!! ;________________; :P 'Forget me not' xD it made me think of my story which *dodges the demands to update** shall be updated once i get more ideas xD LOVE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 16:15 PDT
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*CRIES* that *wipes eyes* was soooooooooooooooooooooooo saddddddd...*breaks out into a sobing frenzy* I dont want them to forget each other *tries to calm down but only makes it worse* great story, once again you are the god/goddess of writing!!!*bows while still crying*
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 21, 2006 14:37 PDT
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oh my goodness... I can't believe it's going to happen two years away from each other, that would probably be the worst for me.. I am working on my latest chapter for my story, I know I'm not that quick with updating and my chapters aren't long. I'm in love with this story. I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter and I don't want this to end. you probably still have a lot that you want to tell us, and with where the story's going. Wel got to go I have to go and take my brother to b-ball practice!
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