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 Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2006 09:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow!! That was another graet chappie!!! But they don't seem to realize that they just told kikyo about thier um marriage. i am worried for them now. and esp. since miroku says that they can move apart although it would be messy, i hope thats not foreshadowing... *bites nails in anticipation*
 Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2006 09:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
oH NO NOT DRAMA!!!!!!!!! duh duh duh .... Haha Inuyasha almost killed kikyo ... hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Inu's got it going on ... i like to move it move it she like to move it move it we like to ....MOVE IT! Hehe sorry...... Anyways awsome chapter loved it so keep it comin!
 Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2006 09:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hehe I'm so fricken stupid I mixed up Jiromaru with Jakotsu(band of seven) and ya jakotsu ids the gay person that peoples are debating about..... I'm sorry I screwed up! But ya Jiromaru is Kagaromaru's twin ... sorry!
 Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi)  On: May 14, 2006 08:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love, love this story so much. I never did get ur first email but i did get ur second one, which I have read and I will email you later, when I get home. Right now, I'm at my bf's house and he's asleep. He's so cute when he's asleep. And later i'm going to wal-mart to exchange some clothes that I bought, and they don't fit me.. I LOVE this feakin story. Well I got to go... Talk to you later!
 Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2006 07:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reviewing last chapter, I was away elsewhere. It seems that the drama is coming soon eh? Awesome chapters and overly possesive Hanyous. Keep updating please.
 Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 14, 2006 07:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reviewing last chapter, I was away elsewhere. It seems that the drama is coming soon eh? Awesome chapters and overly possesive Hanyous. Keep updating please.
 Title: Nicely done!
Reviewed By: Mark *ya already know*  On: May 14, 2006 00:49 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey cutie pie. Yeah I saw your pic too when Sura and maria wake up I'm show them too! You're just a cute little thing you know that? You look alittle like my godsister. I loved the chapter but theres no need to say that when you know I do, right? Terry most love this fic he may not always be able to review for you, but just know that he loves this story as much as me and LW do. Tell your boyfriend I said "he's one lucky man cuz you're one hot lil'mama"! Well talk to ya later babygirl. Ps. I'll tell Sura and Maria you said hello k.^_^
 Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2006 23:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
hail once again from reviewer land!! Sweet chappie!! I thought for sure there was gonna be another fight but it was avoided *wipes brow* whew!!! Wonder what you have instore for our totally adorable and sweet couple next!!! I love reading this story its so well written and interesting! Keep up the great work!
 Title: that was sooooo sweet!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2006 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was soooo cute!!!! my caps lock button is broken still...couldnt fix it. but thats what you get when an amazing author types the best and amazing story and i have to show emphsis by caps because screaming my giddiness at a laptop screen wont really do much except but my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyway....i loved this chapter!!!!! inuyasha and kagome were sooooo sweet and i nearly cried when kagome ran to him and apologized!!!! i sooo think miroku and sango need that!!! i agree with kagome they arent boring!!!!!!!! i was also way happy when kagome's mom said yes!!what do you have planned?!?!?! i loved this chapter soooo much,i loved how inuyasha was at her house and they felt together! oh!!! and what is with the symbols.....my heart was racing when the glowy stuff started happening to kagome and inuyasha and now i need more!!!! more more more!!!!! but i will wait because you are worth it and your story is worth it and just....if being this happy means waiting a day or two(or longer if you need it) then i will be happy to oblige!!!! great job! awesome job! terrific job!! amazing job!!! i loved it with my hearts smiles and charmss and my heart all together!!(if that sentence made any sense whatsoever)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!! my dreams will be so packed with inuyasha nakie(lol...what a word) and my own anxiousness on what is to happen next!!! okay well lots of love and good fortunes to you!!!!! thankyouthankyou for making my evening...wait its like 1:55 am...so um...thankyouthankyou for making my morning"::D:D:D:D:D^_^_^_^^_
 Title: LOSS OF WORDS!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2006 22:37 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
loss of words........not!!!!!!!!THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST CHATPER EVER!!!!! THEY.....THEY............YAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAY!!!!!!! THIS SMILE IS GOING TO NEED TO BE CUT OFF MY FACE!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO SWEET HOW INUYASHA WAS CONSIDERATE AND KAGOME FINALLY SAID YES AND GAHAHHHHHHHHHHYHHH!!!!!!!!!!*SMILESMILESMILE* !!! OMG!!!!!! MY HEART WAS BEATING SO HARD AND I NEARLY WANTED TO SCREAM ANGRILY WHEN SHE SAID STOP BUT THEN I WANTED TO SCREAM WITH HAPPINESS WHEN THEY FINALLY BECAME REAL MATES!!!! HE WAS SO PATIENT WITH HER AND CARING WITH HER AND BLUNT IF YOU WILL!!!!!! GOSH!!!! AND I THOUGHT THE THOUGHT OF INUYASHA DANCING PRETTY MUCH NAKED WAS MIND BLOWING!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!! THIS....THIS...THIS.....THIS.....THIS......THIS.....THIS....THIS....CHAPTER IS THE BEST CHATPER AND THIS STORY IS THE BEST STORY IN THE WHOLE WORLD AND I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE YOU( in a non weird way:D) AND I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THE IMAGE OF INUYASHA NOW IN MY HEAD!!! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU AND........GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I AM SOOOO HAPPY ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY!!! MY FRIEND IS YELLING AT ME TO GO TO BED BUT WITH ONE OR TWO MORE CHAPTERS LEFT AND AFTER READING THIS ONE THAT WONT HAPPEN!!! I KNOW WHAT MY DREAMS WILL BE TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!! great great...my caps lock button broke..:( well um these words are in caps lock......great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Title: Keep up...
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2006 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The Awesome work! I love how cute Inu is.^_^ Kags is slow and Sango can be a pain in the ass! Kagome did come on to him....he stoped but a man can only take so much ya know. I Love this chapter girl, it makes my day when you UPDATE!!!!! I'm gonna go look at my mail now.
 Title: OMGOMGOKMOGMOGMOMGOM
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2006 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off let me start... I AM SOOOOO SORRY!!! I WANTED SOOOO BADLY TO READ THE STORY BUT THE SCHOOL LIBRARY CLOSED DOWN AND THATS WHERE I READ THIS BECAUSE MY COMPUTER AT HOME IS OUT TO MAKE MY LIFE MISERABLE AND GRRRRRR!!! I HAVENT HAD AN AVAILABLE COMPUTER THAT WORKS GOOD IN AGES AND I WAS SOOOO MAD WHEN MY FRIEND READ THIS BEFORE I DID!!!!!!!! ANYWAY!!!!!!! Secondly....I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! INUYASHA WAS SOOOOOOOO......EJEJEKIEOKJEGFJDS;LJF I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO CONTAIN MY ENTHUSIASIM AND I SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOVED THE ENDING!!! I would usually say I hate cliffy's but since I have been lost in the world of sad and emptiness...its updated and I can go on!!!! YAY!~!!!! THE ONLY BENNIFIT TO NO INTERNET!!!! I LOVED HOW MIROKU KNEW RIGHT AWAY WHERE THEY WERE AND HOW HE FOLLOWED SANGO!!! AND THE CONVERSATION WITH INUYASHA AND MIROKU MADE ME CRACK UP!!!! ANY WAY I LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND NOW I AM ON TO THE NEXT AND THE NEXT AND WHATEVER ELSE I MISSED!! FOREVER YOUR LOYAL AND DEVOTED AND IN LOVE REVIEWER, ME!!!!!!:D:D:D:D
 Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 13, 2006 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story keep writing
 Reviewed By: Portia  On: May 13, 2006 16:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
What does he mean by 'Even if i get lost' ?....PORTIA IS CONFUZZLED!!!!!!!...lmao *sends you telepathic love waves*...don't question it, that sentence made puuuurfect sense, yes it did *eyes dart around then hides beneath table*
 Reviewed By: rainydays-nsi  On: May 13, 2006 12:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love it!! It was a sweet, sentimental chapter. :o) Do Sango and Miroku seriously believe they aren't mates? I mean... it's kind of obvious. Poor Miroku can be quite dense at times. I think now he finally got the point. I wonder what other changes will happen... hmm... Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read what happens next!! :o)
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