| "Complexities of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 1145 ] |
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Title: this is great
Reviewed By: adea neri On: May 15, 2006 13:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo kool i enjoyed their bantering so much. inu is such a baka. but that is his first love so. their auras match thats great. update soo.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 12:31 PDT
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so i told you how cute and adorable inu and kag are and ho much i want to squish them =3 i usually end up hating kikyou in fics, but in the actual anime i dont mind her too much, sometimes she gets annoying though ooooh! the drama unfolds! hark do i see a sword made of inu-papa's fang being forged in the near future? dun dun dunnnnnn
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 15, 2006 10:07 PDT
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WOOOOT! Drama can be good..thanks i was scared for a second usually when authors start saying your gonna cry...well ya. Anyways I LOVE YOU! You are the greatest author in the world! Are there going to be any more citrusey moments???...i am a dirty Hentai yes i am...
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Reviewed By: Ryo-Truesdale [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 08:23 PDT
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Hehe, Inuyasha I Know Is Dumb But Kagome Seems To Have Fallen For Inuyasha's Parents Trick. Haha, Kikyo Must Be Embarassed, Awesome! Please Keep Updating.
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Title: OMG!! LOVED IT BUT I WANT TO CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 05:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Drama is such a pain...but I LOVED IT!!!!!! IT WAS SO COOL HOW KAGOME JUST PICKED KINKY HO UP BY THE THROAT!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I LOVED HOW EMBARRASED THEY GOT TOO WHEN THE DAD AND MOM STARTED TALKING TO THEM LOL!!!!!!!!! VERY FUNNNY!!!!!!!!!!!...but...but...Kagome thinks she is not with Inuyasha.....thats sooooo sad. And poor Inu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He could loose himself!!!! I dont want him to loose himself!!! Gosh!!! I want to cry!! But I loved this story soooo much!!!! My computer problems keep trying to get me not to read this......could that be that something sad will happen? WELL I LOVE THIS STORY AND I WILL ENDURE IT BECAUSE YOU ARE THE BEST AND COOLEST WRITER AND YOUR IDEAS ARE MIND BLOWING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST LOVE INUYASHA'S MOM!!!!!! SHE IS SOOOOOOOO COOOL JUST BECAUSE...SHE IS!!!!!!! I SOO BADLY WANT A FLUFF SCENE WITH IZZA AND TAI!!!!!!!!THAT WOULD BE SOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!! THE LIBRARIAN IS ASKING ME TO STOP LAUGHING!! LOL!!!!!! I LOVED HOW THIS STORY IS PLAYING OUT...EVEN IF I AM CRYING HALF THE TIME!!!!!!!! I LOVE HOW INUYASHA AND KAGOME ARE AND I LOVE HOW QUICKLY YOU UPDATE AND YOU NEVER FAIL TO BRING THE GOODS THAT WAS IN THE CHAPTER BEFORE IT!!!!!!!!! THE ANGST AND THE DRAMA IS SLOWLY BUILDING AND THAT...even though its those make-you-want-to-cry-and-laugh-at-the-same-time kind of drama....THIS STORY IS MAKING ME SO HYPER AND I WANT TO READ MORE AND MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS REALLY AMAZING HOW ITS PLAYING OUT AND HOW EVERYTHING IS SOOOOOO TWISTY FLUFFY TURNY!!!! WE havent heard from Sesshomaru for a while. Did he go back to college...did I skip something.....IS STAYING UP ALL NIGHT CAUSING MYSELF TO BE A PARINOID LUNATIC WITH INSANITY ISSUES!!!!!!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!!.....dont answer that lol*comedical sweat drop*!!!!!!!!!!!!!OKAY BACK TO THE REIVEW!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AN AMAZING JOB AND THE WRITING....as usual....WAS FANTASTIC AND THE CLOSENESS OF INUYASHA AND KAGOME MAKES ME SMILE LIKE CRAZY BECAUSE ITS SOOOO SWEET AND ITS THE TYPE OF STORY THAT makes you want a relationship like that sort of way Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter and I will DESPERATELY try to read it ASAP!! I WILL STEAL A COMPUTER IF I HAVE TOOO....but then I would need to steal the internet connection....and the email and....oh sorry!!! Love the chapter....no the story....I love you(in a non weird way lol) and ljgfejkzdklajiojev(that is my hyperness now!!)
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Title: Drama?NOOOO!THE FLUFF IS SO MUCH MORE COMFORTING!!!
Reviewed By: 0oStandinOuto0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 05:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I GOT ANOTHER CAPS LOCK!!!!(Well I am In School...but still) THAT CHAPTER WAS SO COOL!!! INUYASHA STOOD UP FOR KAGOME AND TURNED DEMON WHEN YELLING AT kinky ho!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! AND I LOVED HOW SOUTA WAS TRYING TO BLACKMAIL HIS SISTER BUT SHE AD THE TAPE AND GAHHHHHH THAT WAS SO FUNNY LOL HAHAHAHAHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE MIROKU!!!....wait....yes I can!!!! I loved how Sango and Miroku's relationship is!!!! It is so FUNNY and I always want to hear them talk!!!!!!! OH AND I LOVED HOW MIROKU KNOWS THAT STUFF!!!! Of course its in a perverted way of wanting to know about it but thats Miroku and it works!!!!!!!!! I just might cry if you are crying for the next chpater!!!!!!! Seriously I might just be thrown out of the library...again....and that wouldnt be good!!! I already can't go tomorrow or wednesday which means........GASPSSSSS I WONT BE ABLE TO READ THIS!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER A LOT ALOT ALOT AND I LOVE HOW ITS GETTING SADDER!!!!! Of course you could make them both DIE and I would still love this story because you are an awesome writer(please dont kill them!!!) Anyway!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GREAT GREATGREAT JOB ON THIS CHAPTER!!!!! AND THE NEXT CHAPTER IS ALREADY UP SO NOW I AM GOING TO GO READ THAT!!!!!!!OH I AM SO WORRIED....ANXIOUS....HAPPY!!! (BECAUSE OF THIS STORY!!!!!) LOVED IT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 05:03 PDT
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Wicked! Kikyo got told, Inu's getting buff(training), and I love your story!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!
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Title: Full bitch song!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 23:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kikyo...is a...ho...who ooh oh oh...almost GOT her...aaaaassssss...kicked. Oh why most she be a BITCH! Who can't take a-fuckin'-hint...cuz she's aaaaaaaaaa bitch! Do dah do dah yes a bitch fucked up in the head WITCH! Did sleep wit her or you...may itch!! YES SHE IS!!!!!!! A BITCH1! who almost got her ass kick!*end of song* It's late and I had to do it! Anyway girl you what to do. UPDATE! I hope the drama is't to much to take!T_T Oh don't let it be as bad as A Little Game Called Love or I'll cry...then die...then cry some more and you don't want that cuz I'm your friend. So ya won't...right?UPDATE UPDATE like NOW!!! mwah
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah Kikyo almost get her ass kicked...more killed! Come everyboby sing the kikyo song...Kikyo almost her ass kicked do dah do dah kikyo's bitch a bitch a bitch...yes kikyo is bitch who almost get KILL! Oh that was supid but I love it anyway cuz it's my song!^o^ I love this story sssooooo MAKE IT A BOOK SO I CAN BUY IT!!!!!!!!! I already know kikyo gonna try to do something to get herself killed. But what I wanna know is...when will Tai find out his son is mated! I mean he should be able to feel what type of mates they are(know that they did the nasty) can't wait for that. Oh and girl when Kags licked Inu I was like "Kags ya don't know what you're starting!" I love YOUF FICS!!!!! so...for me...could you........UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT TEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE! mwah
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Reviewed By: Portia On: May 14, 2006 21:33 PDT
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NOOOOOOOO! No drama pleeeeeeease....THEYRE TOO PERFECT TOGETHER...Ohh god what is going to happen???? Just one thing though...NO RAPE! If there is going to be something about rape, then pleeeeease tell me first cause i don't wanna see it *cries*....sorry...i love you...write as you wish...*cowers while curls in ball sucking thumb*. Just nothing too bad???
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion_lo On: May 14, 2006 17:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're gonna make me cry arent you? I know it. What else could you possibly do to add more drama. Should I buy a box of tissues now? Damn you.
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Reviewed By: rainydays-nsi On: May 14, 2006 16:50 PDT
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another fantastic chapter!! yes.. i love the sentimental chapters! :o) they are the best... what can i say? i am a sucker for romances. i am worried about the whole kikyo thing... i wonder how long it will take for the entire school to find out. hmm... let the drama begin! update whenever you get a chance!! :o)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, was that the calm before a storm? Oh gosh, now I'm scared. I don't know if I can handle it. LoL. I'm sure I can. And don't worry, I don't mind that this story will be longer that "A Little Game..." I don't at all. ;p I'm sure it'll all be one great roller coaster of high ups and rock bottom lows. This story is really awesome so far, so I can't wait for more and what's to come. Stupendous job, girl!!! ;-) Your an awesome writer. :-)
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 11:11 PDT
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I agree with elenacala, i hope kikyou doesnt make a total mess of things(although we know that thats what your going to do with her T___T) i love the relationship between Inu and Kags, how lose they are it makes me want to hug them ;_; UPDATE! XD LOVE!.....love you my love!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: page 13 On: May 14, 2006 10:15 PDT
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Oh those kind of changes! Okay well that is cool. Love it still so keep it cummin'!!
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