| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: sumire86 On: April 11, 2010 20:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story it is very original and I can totally feel the pain that Kagome is going through. If I would have to pick between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha... I would go for Inuyasha but I want him to suffer the way he made Kagome suffer. If you decide to go with Sesshomaru I will not dislike the story because I am a fan of both pairings... Update soon :D
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Reviewed By: smiley1991 On: April 11, 2010 19:14 PDT
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Inuyasha, without a doubt inuyasha. However I think the full demon Inuyasha would be a very interesting pairing. Anyway, I like the story so far, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea you have here. It seems like something that could all too easily happen- Inuyasha is far too enamored with Kikyo to see two inches past his nose in the face of truth... I'm a die-hard anti-cannon fan... so of course I'm going to vote for Sesshomaru... but at the same time... I want to see Kagome with -not Inuyasha- but Inuyasha's demon half, and only his demon half. As you've pointed out, it was his human -instincts? idiocy?- that caused his harm to Kagome- his demon I doubt would ever hurt her. I may just be reading too into it- I don't think it was the human half or the demon half, but the hanyou part they make up that did it. I've rambled enough on you, so please- just keep up the good work. -DuskenDreamer
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Wine On: April 10, 2010 07:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. Don't worry about reviews, look for the visits. I personally rarely write a review and I've ready "The Lucky Ones" probably 30 times by now
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 20:40 PDT
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I believe you meant to say Sango sat down, there at the end, and not Kagome. It will be interesting to see how K and I work things out, considering that he beat her. Very out of character, but I await developments.
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Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 07:26 PDT
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u should continue this as soon as possible i cant wait to see how this turns out
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