| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short yes, but not at all lacking in its usual show of talent. For whether or not you should show whats going on in Kagome's head... well you should and you shouldn't. My suggestion is not to openly say whats going on but to strongly hint at whatever's happening. As a writer myself I find that doing it that way keeps an element of mystery which keeps people wanting to know, thus keeping them coming back. Hope the idea helps you, even if it only inspires an idea of your own. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 08:08 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright That was so great Inuyasha and Kagome really are perfect together! Great work update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2010 23:47 PDT
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Sess/Kag as a pairing definitly...Inuyasha has abused her and hurt her way to much to be actually and realistically forgiven. Sess has been protecting and caring to Kagome which is what she really needs. also you have written her distrust of inu...how can a relationship between Inu and Kag work with all that baggage and especially the fact that he watched her die and didnt do anything to save her? and she knows that he did nothing. so seriously How could you actually write a good Inu/Kag fic with that background? and besides I'm a hardcore Sess/Kag fan :D
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Reviewed By: meganramirez13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2010 21:55 PDT
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You HAVE to make this an Inu/Kag I mean Sesshomaru was there for her and all but he's more like a big brother than a lover. My votes for INU/KAG ALL THE WAY! great story by the way.
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Reviewed By: knife thrower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 11:30 PDT
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Keep up the great work when you get a chance, I'll keep checking on this story, because I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: knife thrower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for all three to be together. If not, then Sesshomaru/Kagome. Because without Sess' protection, it is asking just too much to trust InuYasha with her emotional and physical well-being. But you are making demon InuYasha so woebegone, I am having a hard time saying she should totally forget him.
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Reviewed By: knife thrower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2010 11:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whether this turns out to be a Sess/Kag, Inu/Kag, or Sess/Inu/Kag, it is awesome! Great writing, engaging, emotionally wrenching story.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I vote Kagome/Inuyasha. Looking forward to your next update, once your free....
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 06:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So first off, don't worry about it. Most fanfiction authors are students. Second, take your time. A rushed fic tends not to be well done at all and it would be a pity to see such happen to this amazing story. Third, good luck with your papers. My vote is still for Sess/Kag/DEMON Inuyasha btw. -DuskenDreamer53
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Weeeeeeeee On: May 17, 2010 14:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and kagome love this story please update again.
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Reviewed By: Dedicated Reader On: May 15, 2010 22:06 PDT
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Inu/Kag all the way! Pretty pretty pleease!
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Title: InuKag!
Reviewed By: fann On: May 12, 2010 18:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome all the way!
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Reviewed By: inu_slayer078 On: May 11, 2010 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Inuyasha and Kagome!!!!! :D oh my goodness i love your story and your voting idea is awesome! keep of the good work! :)
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Reviewed By: Hanyou-InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2010 12:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to have InuYasha x Kagome as the pair you just have to. They developed and suffered so much in the anime/manga that it wouldnt be right to pair them with anyone else, even in fanfics. Like Hmm said before he should get his second chance with Kagome. So my vote InuYasha x Kagome
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Reviewed By: inu ilver not signed in On: May 10, 2010 11:21 PDT
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K & S Kags and Sess-- PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
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