| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAH!!! You stopped right in the middle of something good..LOL LOL Nice Cliffie. Uh oh I wonder what Idea I gave you.. well I'm curious to see how this all pans out. Keep on going I can't wait for your latest update..
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Title: Inuyasha/Kagome
Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:54 PDT
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Inuyasha and kagome need to get back together.... i hate sess/kag stories Inu/Kag PLEASEEEEEEEEE
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep! I've decided... it should be Kagome with demon Inuyasha.. the human/hanyou parts of him can go screw each other. Sesshomaru/Kagome is cute too though...but doesn't feel right yet..both maybe? This is an anime fanfiction so its perfectly acceptable...and they are demons. That would work out very nicely I'm sure.. to have the human/hanyou part of Inuyasha be sealed away by the Tetsuaiga since its the part that hurt Kagome- wasn't the only rule of the Tetsuaiga that the weilder had to use it to protect humans? Again, I've ranted on at you for long enough so I shall shut up and let you get on with your life. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 15:42 PDT
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This has the beginnings of a great story. I felt so very sorry for demon Inuyasha...he just seems so sad. I really like the Inu/Kag pairing, but Sess/Kag is good too. No matter what the pairing ends up to be I will read till the end!
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Title: PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 11:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story..Please write more and faster!! I cant wait to read the next one...Its amazing...
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say it should be Kagome and Sesshomaru. InuYasha has broken her heart one too many times.Kagome should find the love that Sesshomaru could give her. You have the good beginnings to a great story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 12:44 PDT
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Personally I would like Inuyasha and Kagome, but Sessy did rescue her...
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story its really good. I really hope Inuysha and Kagome get back together. Its good when you have drama but i hope inuyasha goes and talks things out with her. She Still loves him shes just hurt right jeez i love this lol update soon ok!
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great so far. I hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: sumire86 On: April 11, 2010 20:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story it is very original and I can totally feel the pain that Kagome is going through. If I would have to pick between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha... I would go for Inuyasha but I want him to suffer the way he made Kagome suffer. If you decide to go with Sesshomaru I will not dislike the story because I am a fan of both pairings... Update soon :D
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Reviewed By: smiley1991 On: April 11, 2010 19:14 PDT
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Inuyasha, without a doubt inuyasha. However I think the full demon Inuyasha would be a very interesting pairing. Anyway, I like the story so far, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea you have here. It seems like something that could all too easily happen- Inuyasha is far too enamored with Kikyo to see two inches past his nose in the face of truth... I'm a die-hard anti-cannon fan... so of course I'm going to vote for Sesshomaru... but at the same time... I want to see Kagome with -not Inuyasha- but Inuyasha's demon half, and only his demon half. As you've pointed out, it was his human -instincts? idiocy?- that caused his harm to Kagome- his demon I doubt would ever hurt her. I may just be reading too into it- I don't think it was the human half or the demon half, but the hanyou part they make up that did it. I've rambled enough on you, so please- just keep up the good work. -DuskenDreamer
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Wine On: April 10, 2010 07:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. Don't worry about reviews, look for the visits. I personally rarely write a review and I've ready "The Lucky Ones" probably 30 times by now
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 20:40 PDT
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I believe you meant to say Sango sat down, there at the end, and not Kagome. It will be interesting to see how K and I work things out, considering that he beat her. Very out of character, but I await developments.
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Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 07:26 PDT
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u should continue this as soon as possible i cant wait to see how this turns out
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