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 Reviewed By: bored_girl  On: May 09, 2010 18:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
INUYASHA-KAGOME pairing please!!!!!!!!!
 Title: marshmom
Reviewed By: marshmom  On: May 09, 2010 11:22 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've never written a review before and i just wanted to say that I think your story is great. I personally think you should have Sesshomaru/kagome/Demon Inuyasha. You already have the plot set up in that direction, and it would fit in with the story much better.However,it's your story and whichever way you go would be great. Keep up the good work.
 Title: inu
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2010 08:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
inuyasha-kagome with some work from inuyasha...
 Reviewed By: Hmm  On: May 09, 2010 07:25 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You gotta have InuYasha with Kagome... you can tell just by reading that he has a deep regret for what he did to kagome.. he deserves his second chance with her.. Sesshomaru seems to fit more so as a protective safety blanket he doesnt work as a romantic intrest for kagome...
 Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 20:20 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story it's awesome I look forward to reading the new chapters you add to it . BUT PRETTY PLEASE HAVE HER CHOOSE SESSHOMARU. Especially after what Inuyasha did beat Kag then left her to die he doesn't deserve to have Kagome if it was me I'd never forgive or go back to Inu ( LOL THANK YOU FOR A GREAT STORY )
 Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 15:06 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I found your story today and just love it. My vote is Inu/Kag. Update soon :)
 Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 12:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome, but don't have Inu go back to being a hanyou. He should have to earn her trust and love back!
 Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 12:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
DEFIANTLY KAGOME AND SESSHOMARU..... Yahsa had his chance and he blew it. Like he said "a few weeks ago, I stood and watched it being taken from her without giving a shit." So I whole hearted believe that it should be Sesshomaru and Kagome
 Reviewed By: kysha82 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 08, 2010 06:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
i/k
 Reviewed By: Josiln Stafford  On: May 07, 2010 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like a Kagome/Inuyasha pairing but i want him to earn her forgiveness. Let him show her how much she means to him
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 22:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
I still say Demon Inuyasha out to have a fair shot at making up for what he did as a hanyou... it is my firm belief that the demon is much smarter than he is ever portrayed as and would never hurt Kagome (this smarter half of him recognizes her as his mate of course). Sesshomaru doesn't really seem to fit right for a romantic interest as of right now, so if he wins you'll really have to work on that relationship. Right now he seems to be acting more like a protective big brother than a romantic interest for Kagome. So my vote is that Demon Inuyasha (not hanyou and not human) is the one to be with Kagome. Ultimately its up to you, and I'm sure I will enjoy the story no matter the pairing.
 Reviewed By: uu  On: May 07, 2010 22:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
inu and kag
 Reviewed By: Beautifully_broken91 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 21:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Kagome!
 Reviewed By: Athean  On: May 07, 2010 19:47 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I would give a higher rating than a 10 but alas I can not. Why not have Kagome with both Inuyasha and Sess. You have the foundations laid for that type of plot. Kagome trust Sess to be there for her and protect her. Also she does not quite trust Inu as much, but she still has feelings for him. It would take some major time for Kagome to trust in Inu again. I think if you decided to with either Inu or Sessh it still would be a wonderful story. Your the author of this awesome story, so it all up to you to decide.
 Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2010 18:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well, as I've said, I'm a true-blue Inu/Kag fan. Besides, he's already bonded his blood with hers, now. I think when she figures that out, she'll realize just how dedicated he is. Human emotions can make people stupid, after all. Inuyasha said it himself. It seems Shippo and Sesshoumaru still trust him, as well.
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