| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: rambo328 On: July 07, 2010 01:33 PDT
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Hey, I just wanted to tell you I've been reading your inuyasha series. It is VERY good. You mentioned in last chapter posted so far you not getting the encouraging reviews, so congrates this is the first review i've given. Your story is very different especially from inuyasha's side, but I really like it. It's sad, but I like how Kagome's all Sess is my protector. Makes me feel bad for Inuyasha, but same time like how it can throw that jealous out plus the fact Sess does protect her from him. It's very good and I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha, he has to live with what he has done. I think Kagomes behavior is realistic. I know I would be afraid of him. I also would need time to even think about forgiving such an act. Great writing. So looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 05:39 PDT
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Reviews, Reviews. Many times I have read how reviews help authors, and make getting rid of writers block easier, but when I attempt to write a review, my mind freezes up like a glacier. somehow just saying how much I am enjoying a story seems pointless, but then I realize, if I don't say something, how will you know I am a return customer. I enjoy your stories, Kj, and am also enjoying watching your development as a writer, your style is getting smoother, and the conversations less stilted, the storyline is flowing better. Your doing great. Keep your muse close, and your computer closer. As long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading, OK?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 23:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... lots of drama... glad that inuyasha was able to help kagome but sad developments for both of them... what will happen now?... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 08:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL thanks Awesome story love the new chapters keep up the good work.. the reason I think Kagome should go with Sesshoumaru is because 1 Inu has been a real abusive SOB to Kag 2 he'd still run to Kikyo if she were there 3 if it were me the minute he hit and tried to kill I would lose love & trust I don't care if your female or male once someone does that to you can never really trust them again and the next time they did it it would be worse..Please let it be ---> SESSH/KAG
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Title: A Damaged Soul
Reviewed By: Nabikitendo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 06:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome. I love this story plot you have going. I also love the whole Sesshomaru/Inuyasha thing. I also understand what you mean about reviews. I am posting a story and I have no reviews lol. Oh well, I still say your story is absolutely cool. But if I can vote I want it to end with a Kagome/Inuyasha pairing please. If not that's cool too. Thanks so much for taking the time to write and post this story.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2010 00:36 PDT
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Well you can always count on me for a review! Though I must say.. I'm only feeling bad for Inuyasha's demon half.. Inuyasha himself, not so much. I'm not a very forgiving person- at least not like Kagome. But that comes from years of harassment I suppose. Still loving the story, even though I say that Inuyasha deserves every bit of pain he gets (still feel bad for his demon side though- the human side can go kiss Naraku's ass). See you next update, -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: SelinaA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2010 07:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! please update.
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Reviewed By: blue_light121 On: June 15, 2010 03:47 PDT
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Okay, I'm a newbie to the story because I just read it and I wanted to stop in and say I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It's different, with the whole Inuyasha beating Kagome thing, and Kagome being killed then Sesshomaru reviving her while Inuyasha just watched the whole situation, and Inuyasha going full demon. I like different. It's just completely unexpected, but it works at the same time. You have GOT to update again soon. It's just to good to let hang for too long. Again great work and keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2010 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You always look forward to MY reviews? Aw- that made me the happiest woman alive. It was short again, and the writing style was wonderful as usual, but the format of the text got messed up by MM... or it might just be my browser though. Even though I'm still pissed at Inuyasha and think he deserves worse than the self-loathing...but that may just be me (though I doubt it). He still needs to do some serious ass-kissing though. By the way- was the word 'barrio' supposed to be 'barrier'? I looked it up and all I got was that it was a city in Spain so..yeah. Your loyal reviewer -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 23:28 PDT
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No!Inuyasha so does not deserve forgiveness...he freakin watched her get killed!!!are you seriously pairing them up?
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Title: You should pick...
Reviewed By: Halfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 21:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...it took me a whole day to read this story and I really freakin loved this story!!!!! now as for who should be with who.... personally i vote for inuyasha and kagome to be with each other....but don't make it to easy for Inuyasha....he should have to do so many things to get her back to make it an interesting thing to see him get her back by earning her trust again....now i also vote for demon inuyasha/kagome/sesshomaru.....because i thats like my favorite 3 some of them all!!!!!! but yeah!!!!! DEMON INUYASHA AND KAGOME ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 12:36 PDT
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Your best friend, seriously? Aw well I'm glad I made you that happy with my review. I've found almost all my best friends on fanfiction sites. Great update too btw. I like the way you pulled off the scene of what was going on in Kagome's head. I do hope, however, that when she fully wakes up she doesn't automatically go back to Inuyasha...that would just...no. It would be too fast. He should have to jump hoops around the world before she trusts him again. There's a big difference between having compassion and pity for someone and trusting them. Seriously, he basically KILLED her.. that needs major ass-kissing before she lets him near her (emotionally or otherwise) again. It may be the all-forgiving Kagome we're talking about, but still. Anyway now that I'm done rambling, great update, glad your on a roll, and can't wait to see more. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I havent read this whole story yet.B but from what I've read so far it's awesome.keep up the good work..LOL THANKS
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Reviewed By: Deedee4theWin On: June 08, 2010 16:57 PDT
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I really enjoy this story :) Pleeease update soon!
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