| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2010 13:28 PDT
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InuxKag, definitely. I hate Sesshoumaru. xD Besides, he doesn't like humans. Rin is a pet. Face it, fans. I'm actually enjoying this more than I thought. The only part that bugs me is Inuyasha beating her up. It's so far out of character it's ridiculous, but I suppose it contributes to the plot, so I can partially overlook it...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 20:15 PDT
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I'm an Inu fan, all the way. So you know my vote for the pairing. But, I wouldn't object to a Inu/Kag/Sess, either. At any rate, I think a separation is in order for them, and hopefully some maturing on both ends, b/f they reconcile. Perhaps Sess could be the motivator for that for each of them.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but pleasurable. Still would like to see some of a DemonInu/Kagome relationship- who knows.. maybe Inuyasha's demon self would get along more with Sesshomaru? Its up to you, I'll still be here for the story- its too awesome an idea to leave behind and you pull it off really well. -DuskenDreamer
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Title: INUYASHA!!!
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078 On: April 20, 2010 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i haven't read a story this good in a LONG time! Great job and i can't wait to read more! Pick Inuyasha! he's the best! i love Sesshomaru too, but he should end up with someone more like Kagura, not Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Rachel Amanda On: April 15, 2010 11:17 PDT
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Sorry >.< came up with another idea once i left, Kags should kiss fluffy at one point and find its not right... then go to inuyasha!! lol im a hopless romantic...
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Reviewed By: Rachel Amanda On: April 15, 2010 11:07 PDT
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Kagome and InuYasha must be together!! He needs to do something Epic that shows kags how he or in this case his demon really feels!! they need their happy ending!! First chapter was a-freaking-mazing btw!! update soon ya hear!?
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAH!!! You stopped right in the middle of something good..LOL LOL Nice Cliffie. Uh oh I wonder what Idea I gave you.. well I'm curious to see how this all pans out. Keep on going I can't wait for your latest update..
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Title: Inuyasha/Kagome
Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:54 PDT
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Inuyasha and kagome need to get back together.... i hate sess/kag stories Inu/Kag PLEASEEEEEEEEE
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep! I've decided... it should be Kagome with demon Inuyasha.. the human/hanyou parts of him can go screw each other. Sesshomaru/Kagome is cute too though...but doesn't feel right yet..both maybe? This is an anime fanfiction so its perfectly acceptable...and they are demons. That would work out very nicely I'm sure.. to have the human/hanyou part of Inuyasha be sealed away by the Tetsuaiga since its the part that hurt Kagome- wasn't the only rule of the Tetsuaiga that the weilder had to use it to protect humans? Again, I've ranted on at you for long enough so I shall shut up and let you get on with your life. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 15:42 PDT
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This has the beginnings of a great story. I felt so very sorry for demon Inuyasha...he just seems so sad. I really like the Inu/Kag pairing, but Sess/Kag is good too. No matter what the pairing ends up to be I will read till the end!
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Title: PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 11:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story..Please write more and faster!! I cant wait to read the next one...Its amazing...
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 15:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say it should be Kagome and Sesshomaru. InuYasha has broken her heart one too many times.Kagome should find the love that Sesshomaru could give her. You have the good beginnings to a great story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 12:44 PDT
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Personally I would like Inuyasha and Kagome, but Sessy did rescue her...
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story its really good. I really hope Inuysha and Kagome get back together. Its good when you have drama but i hope inuyasha goes and talks things out with her. She Still loves him shes just hurt right jeez i love this lol update soon ok!
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great so far. I hope you update soon
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