| "A Damaged Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Title: Came from FF.net
Reviewed By: Furostomi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2015 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found the updated version on fanfiction(dot)net and was curious
when you mentioned that the original, in part was posted here. I
find it to be fun and engaging; I look forward to reading more
because of the original concept you came up with. You are a
talented author and the length of the chapters doesn't matter.
Cheers for now!
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Reviewed By: Domi000 On: June 18, 2013 15:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and I hope you will finish it!!!! |
Reviewed By: rtgfesd On: July 07, 2011 11:53 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
uh...so after inuyasha beat her, tortured her mentally and watched as a youkai kill her without lifting a finger she goes back to him? I understand that love makes you blind and stupid but this is unrealistic even for a fanfic. No woman would trust someone who practically killed them. |
Title: oh my
Reviewed By: orlarulez601 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2011 09:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absoultely love this story and its heart breaking to see you havent updated it since 0ct 2010 :( please update soon |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2010 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... nice that kagome and inuyasha are slowly getting back together again... seems that sesshoumaru is the big brother watching out for them... good that kagome and sango talked... looks like the girls are in trouble... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LokoRamenDaily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2010 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im writng a review, because i acknowledge you. there. jk, i dont hate you im a very patient person and tho kagome and sango complete owning of that demon will most definitly be a site see(or read in this case) i shall wait till next month. its totally worth it.
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2010 11:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well...I'm still not sure about Kagome forgiving Inuyasha enough to be his mate but since you made it so that she's still scared of him, then that works just as well. I'm sorry to say this isn't going to be as much of a review as my previous ones, but college has gotten to me too. So anyway, keep it up- it was wonderful as always. -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 10:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... glad that kagome went to talk to sesshoumaru... and good that sesshoumaru told her about inuyasha... looks like kagome and inuyasha are going to start all over again... very touching scene between kagome and inuyasha - liked it... nice that sesshoumaru was watching out for them... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: cora_wellsome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 20:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
I like it its a aswsome story I havent ready anyhting quit like this before very good, update soon
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 15:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Great story! This is the best chapter yet, I love the way that Inuyasha is being given a second chance. I don't always have time to write a review, but I am keeping up with your story!! Good job!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2010 06:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I cannot offer full time beta services, if you're ever in a pinch you can always ask me for help. I must say though that I am loving the demon Inu/Kagome thing. It is what I voted for huh? Sadly this update caught me on a bad day since I'm in one hell of a mood thats beyond forgiving people. All the same I still loved your writing, and even without the help of a beta you're still talented. Don't ever forget that. Still, if you ever need the help of a beta just message me. I've got the (somewhat) annoying ability of being able to edit other people's writing and not my own. Your loyal reader- DuskenDreamer
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Title: INU/KAG!!!
Reviewed By: locoramen On: July 30, 2010 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I'm gonna be honest and not obsess just so you write it the way I want. It's not the BEST fanfic I've ever read but it is very good. I gave you a seven for style because it's very simple. Spelling and grammar an 8 because, I'm sorry but I have an eye for this, I've caught more than 1 mistake; although some of them look like they might just be typos and I'm pretty sure Sesshoumaru is spelled with 2 S's. I still gave 10 for enjoyment 'cause I cried way too easily. Which is good. Now that I was finally able to review because i just started reading today, I would personally prefer an InuYasha Kagome pairing. Love, An Editor To Be. (>*-*)>
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Reviewed By: What name On: July 30, 2010 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and kagome please
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Reviewed By: ichiruki25 On: July 28, 2010 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make it an Inu/Kag. I really love this couple.
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Reviewed By: Vixen12089 On: July 28, 2010 09:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm likeing this, but sometimes it gets confusing, or at I was confused after I went back to reading it. Lol. Also, I kind of thought it already was a Sesshoumaru and Kagome fic. :P Whatever you do with the story, I'll continue reading, but I'd prefer the pairing to be Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Keep up the good work and thank you for a wonderful story.
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