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 Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2010 23:55 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOOHHHH Good CLiffie... LOL I still say that Sesshomaru and Kagome should be together, but maybe they can compromise and it could be InuYasha (once he gets his head out of his ass so to speak), Sesshomaru and Kagome. They both are attracted to her so it could be possible. Keep up the great work and update soon.
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2010 20:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My reviews really make you that happy? Well I'm glad! Anyway I'm sorry to say I can't take the time to write one of my long reviews for you tonight. I have two finals tomorrow- one right after the other. So I need to be cramming right now. You totally made my day with this update though- so thanks for that. I still want to see Inuyasha's demon side get to be with Kagome, but I want to slap the other two parts of him with a wet fish. It looks like you got a long review after all. -DuskenDreamer
 Title: Daisuki!
Reviewed By: Seryna-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2010 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my matsujun! I freakin love this fic! I swear by all that is sesshoumaru, that if kags doesn't end up with sesshy, blood will be spilled! I mean it! Oh, nd btw, this is an awesome fic nd your doing an excellent job! Keep up the good work!
 Title: Sess/Kag pairing Please
Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2010 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope, I really really hope that this is a Sess/Kag Pairing! All the other reviews say that it has to be Inuyasha but honestly he has hurt Kagome way to much...I honestly hate the idea of her going back to him (but in the end its your story I'm just stating my opinion)seriously though make Sessy be the one to not only heal her but love her (of course with Sessy's personality it will take a while but its do-able) anyways if for some ridiculous, crazy, stupid reason you decide to pair Kagome with Inuyasha PLEASE dont pair Sessy with Kagura oh how I despise that pairing...and no Rin either! (which wouldnt work anyway since she is a child) I must say though that I love your story and I cant wait till you update next! oh and if you do decide to make this a Sess/Kag pairing not only will I love you forever but I would also recommend that you Post this Story on Dokuga (which if you dont know is a site dedicated to Sess/Kag pairings) :D
 Title: omg
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: April 28, 2010 20:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! what the hell is up with Sango? dang. i love it tho! (although i'm secretly hoping it was naraku in disguise lol) can't wait to see where you take this story!!! :D
 Reviewed By: Inudewaruika (nsi)  On: April 28, 2010 14:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
here i reviewed, good story!
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2010 00:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
-sigh- how could Kagome fall for that trick (well I know how but still)? Its essentially the same one Naraku used on Inuyasha and Kikyo. In that sense its perfect- framed betrayal using a loved one seems to be Naraku's signature move. I'm loving this story, and especially the fact that Sesshomaru is actually IN character. Not many people can pull that off- when it comes to romance I have yet to be able to do so myself. Good luck with exams and all- I've got finals coming up myself. -DuskenDreamer
 Reviewed By: coykoi  On: April 27, 2010 10:26 PDT
Comment/Review:
I see it as Sesshoumaru protecting his sister in law. He's the companiable silence that stops her from tring to hurt herself, like with the fire. All I know is that Inuyasha has some serious ass kissing to do, though I don't think he can be redeemed after beating Kagome and doing nothing while she died. I mean he just stood there and did nothing.
 Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: April 25, 2010 18:22 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh, so good! i can't wait to read more. poor kagome, poor inuyasha. man, i really want them to end up together!
 Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2010 13:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
InuxKag, definitely. I hate Sesshoumaru. xD Besides, he doesn't like humans. Rin is a pet. Face it, fans. I'm actually enjoying this more than I thought. The only part that bugs me is Inuyasha beating her up. It's so far out of character it's ridiculous, but I suppose it contributes to the plot, so I can partially overlook it...
 Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 22, 2010 20:15 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm an Inu fan, all the way. So you know my vote for the pairing. But, I wouldn't object to a Inu/Kag/Sess, either. At any rate, I think a separation is in order for them, and hopefully some maturing on both ends, b/f they reconcile. Perhaps Sess could be the motivator for that for each of them.
 Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 21, 2010 22:43 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Short but pleasurable. Still would like to see some of a DemonInu/Kagome relationship- who knows.. maybe Inuyasha's demon self would get along more with Sesshomaru? Its up to you, I'll still be here for the story- its too awesome an idea to leave behind and you pull it off really well. -DuskenDreamer
 Title: INUYASHA!!!
Reviewed By: inu_slayer078  On: April 20, 2010 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i haven't read a story this good in a LONG time! Great job and i can't wait to read more! Pick Inuyasha! he's the best! i love Sesshomaru too, but he should end up with someone more like Kagura, not Kagome.
 Reviewed By: Rachel Amanda  On: April 15, 2010 11:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry >.< came up with another idea once i left, Kags should kiss fluffy at one point and find its not right... then go to inuyasha!! lol im a hopless romantic...
 Reviewed By: Rachel Amanda  On: April 15, 2010 11:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kagome and InuYasha must be together!! He needs to do something Epic that shows kags how he or in this case his demon really feels!! they need their happy ending!! First chapter was a-freaking-mazing btw!! update soon ya hear!?
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