| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2017 16:10 PDT
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So Eddie deserves a raise...
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2017 05:51 PDT
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Yes I am! I thought I sent you some pics to your email back in 2014
when I last deployed. I remember doing so at least. This deployment
isn't nearly as exciting in terms of port visits so I haven't been
taking that many pictures. On another note. I bought 4 of your
original works and I saved the PDF files to my external hard drive
which shit itself recently so now I have to hope they are still on
my old kindle along with all the PDF's of the purity stories that I
had so I could read them offline when I was on the ship.
unfortunately my kindle is back home in America and I'm hell far
away, I only brought my ipad this time and use the kindle app
because its easier not to have a bunch of different chargers, but
most of the purity stories and all of your original books that I
bought are missing. I was really wanting to reread vendetta also. I
was so hurt when I saw they weren't there. but I wont be able to
read them until I get back home. :'( But anyway its great to hear
form you. I just printed this chapter and I'm about to log off and
read it.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2017 07:57 PDT
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Hey SUE!!!! Been a long time. I'm actually back on deployment now.
My last one. sorry I haven't been able to review. internet is not
always reliable and I usually cut and paste the chapters so I can
read it when I have time just in case the internet goes down. I
absolutely love this story so far. I always wanted to see what
would happen between Ben and Charity. I hope you get you mojo back
for Mikio's story because I really would like to know how his story
plays out especially since he is so different from Inuyasha and
Kagome's other children. I remember back when you were having
similar feeling about Evan's story due to what you were going
through back at that time. But I hope you find your way back to it.
Because as you know I've been a fan of all your stories for over a
decade and I'm always excited to read them from start to finish.
I'm anxiously awaiting chapter 13! Also I was intrigued to see you
began a continuation to metamorphosis, which was a very emotional
story. I love it! I hope this review finds you in good spirits and
I can't wait for the next update! ~Love OB
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2017 14:22 PDT
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Inu is blushing cause Kagome wants another baby, thats so freaking
cute...Your lips are flapping...Sue, you crack me up. I love yours
stories and Inu taking the baby so she won't cry because of Cain. I
love this story, I love all your stories and I can't wait for your
next post.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2017 12:08 PDT
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I'm so happy for Ben and Charity but I've got to say, Bas getting
Sydnie a glass of milk tugged at my heart strings. She does have
someone to bring her milk all the time. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2017 02:36 PDT
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Yes, yes, yes!!! Go Charity, there is that Inutaisho spirit. I had
a thought while considering all that has unfolded so far, on a
scale of 1-10, how much of a hard time is Sesshoumaru going to give
Ben once he learns of his interest in Charity? 11.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2017 12:13 PDT
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Thank God for Chelsea, without her this could go on for a while
sense there both so oblivious! Maybe the visit won't go well so
they have a out. Or it's gonna go so extremely well. Could go
either way lol anyways look forward to more :)
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Title: Another Chapter!!
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are too good to us Sue to give us another chapter, not that I
am complaining, I love it!! Chelsea is going to get into so much
trouble from Charity when she finds out that Chelsea told Ben about
her interest. But I understand why Chelsea did it, she is trying to
protect her twin. It will be interesting to see what Ben does with
the information.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 21:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Charity, she starts to fall in love with the twins and then
finds out that they may be adopted. I was surprised that Ben didn't
push more for the twins keeping their names but I think some part
of him realizes he isn't giving those girls up. I hope he is ready
to face an enraged Eddie when she finds out they may go. Looking
forward to more here and in Purity 10
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Xx-eww_noo-xX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 10:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I read the original purity when it first appeared so long ago.
Maybe last month I had this horrible itch to find it and read it
again. But I couldn't remember the name but I'm so glad I found it
because I felt like I already read all the good inuyasha and kagome
fanfics to death so many years ago. I knew there were sequels to
purity but I was hard headed and figured I wouldn't care for them
because they weren't based on inuyasha and kagome. But last month I
was like what the heck and started reading purity 2 and now I'm
here I have read ALL the purity stories and I love and enjoyed them
so much. Every second I get I would read them, I would stay up my
eyes burning with sleepiness in the early mornings just telling
myself "one more chapter and then I'll go sleep." I fell in love
with all the characters and I would think to myself that there is
no way the next story would be as good, but each time you would
prove me wrong. Haha, I just want to thank you for giving my a nice
escape and to see the world of your stories. I loved every second
of them. Hopefully you keep it up :)
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2017 02:44 PDT
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I want to hold a parade for Chelsea. I found myself mentally egging
her on and clapping as soon as she levelled the question at him.
Now let's hope Ben is more panther than kitten in his response. I'm
loving the frequency of the updates and enjoying how thks is all
unfolding. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2017 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goodness... I'm sad. He really loves them doesn't he? They both
do. Can you send Eddie in to do something about this please? A
couple of well placed words then I'm sure there will be order. I
love how they're getting to know each other after all this time, so
naturally. And yes, foxy panther. I'm sure Charity thinks Ben is a
foxy panther.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2017 04:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I go away for a few days and return to several chapters of goodness
waiting for me. You are right,shirtless Ben was a wonderful
distraction. Can you arrange for him to come for a visit? I will
return him to Charity undamaged in a few days. When I read about
shirtless Ben I wondered how Charity would react to towel-clad Ben
and then there he was! I agree with Eddie, I wish Myrna would have
shown up to see Ben and Charity together at breakfast. I look
forward to seeing how they get together and you work out all the
kinks in their relationship that you put into it ;-) I know
everything will work out the best for both of them and the twins.
Maybe Caine will have to have a word to Ben about not missing out
on love and happiness?
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2017 05:46 PDT
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If probably choke on my coffee too if Ben walked in with just a
towel on lol now he just has to tell charity that the twins may
have a possible other home... and convince himself that he'll let
them go.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2017 05:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for another great story. I've missed the purity universe An
am glad we get another look inside it.
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