| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amaris On: May 07, 2003 22:10 EDT
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that's just very cruel to leave it like that! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: May 07, 2003 19:47 EDT
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Wow! Vegeta's gonna be king amidst all this chaos? Finally we see more outward expressions of feelings between V/B (i like how they aren't too OOC compared to most other fics - i.e. confessing their undying love for each other after sharing the bed for a couple times)! This stuff's awesome! *and yes keep the lemons coming* |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 19:36 EDT
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the kings dead holy fuck!!! I cant wait for next chapyy! IM CLUUUULESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOONNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Lemon ruledddd!! |
Reviewed By: deathstall On: May 05, 2003 09:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at last! i've found a fanfic that really has flavor in it!!! GREAT JOB!!!
some 'scenes' were moving and i'm really looking forward into reading the 21st chap. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: deathstall On: May 05, 2003 09:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last! I've found a fanfic that actually has flavor in it!!! GREAT JOB!!!
it was really moving(some of the 'scenes')and I'm really looking forward for the 21st chap.
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: May 02, 2003 19:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALY good fic. Just plain......great! = ). And that's comming from royalty, so, Update soon, okay? |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: April 30, 2003 22:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was excellent, please update soon, me and Saiyan Princess are waiting for it. That was a really great fic. Update soon, or I'll sick Veggie-Chan on you. Lol. Cliffhangers are sooooo.....EVIL! But yes, I know, I love doing it to my readers too.
*Evil Smirk*
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: April 30, 2003 22:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That's all I have to say. That was a really, really, realy good fic! Please Please Please update soon. Errr...don't mention this begging to anyone, I am a Saiyan.
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Sese On: April 29, 2003 17:30 EDT
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Am I missing something here? Coz this plan a Bulma's had totally got me confused...what's she gonna do? Murder Vegeta when he's asleep or somthing - but if she's gonna do that then why does she want im so much??? It's very good all the same ^_^ I loved your lemons ^_^ well...that is the point of the fics right? Any chance you post all the chapters up on ff.net - I don't know why but this site is very slow!!!
~silent storms on ff.net~ |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: July 15, 2003 01:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear if you dont finish ths ting soon ill find you adress and tie you to a char till its finised! ok not the best threat in the world but hay come on well hurry it up k thanks bye |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm surprised Bulma hasn't jacked a space-ship and flown off the freaken planet with it already...Then again she doesn't really have anywhere to go so I guess it's explainable as to why she's still there. I can't wait to see what Bulma's master plan to captivate Vegeta is...Please put the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: Tifa Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn!!! You ended the stroy like that was very cruel to us all!! DAMN!!!!!! It's not good to get someone excited abou something and then leave them to dry up!! PLEASE POST MORE~ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 10:11 EDT
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Very nice, dark chapter. The next one promises to be quite steamy! Heh heh. update soon! |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 17:44 EDT
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I love this fic. But how could you leave us on such an intense cliffhanger?!! Write on soon! |
Reviewed By: ssj4 yuffie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 17:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOI!!
This is my favorite chapter so far. I really enjoy your Zucchini bashing and although Bulma is not 100% similar to the one in the show she's still SO cool and Vegeta *Oh Vegeta* I can't believe how sexy you make him sound.I give you credit since he's more similar to the one in the Japanese version in almost everything. |
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