| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover On: January 27, 2003 11:07 PST
Comment/Review:
Keep it up I'm loving it!!!! |
Reviewed By: gymrat On: February 14, 2003 10:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: January 26, 2003 14:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I could see what Bulma's dress realy looks like,let alone the look on Zucchini's face.I bet she is very jealous. Well on to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 09:23 PST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta is being such an ASSHOLE! Can't he be a little nicer to Bulma? She's only 17 after all. Hurry up with the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 26, 2003 08:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*speaks without breathing*
teriffic, absolutely terrific, I cannot believe how GREAT you make Vegeta in this story, he's really EVERYTHING except OOC. I LOVE you for this, I love Vegeta this rough, this animalistic, this mean, this...sexy!!!
*sighs heavily*
I cannot wait until the next chapter!! I'm really anxious to read more, PLEASE DON'T WAIT TOO LONG WITH UPDATING THIS STORY.
please update this story first, and then the rest =)
please?
You are great writers, wonderful story, really amazing!!
Please update soon alright?
Love and kisses!
THIS FIC RULES, great how you put Bulma as well, they are both amazingly described, and too all those nitwits flamers, bugger off and shuv it!
these gals rule!
*lets out avery frustrated sigh*
I really cannot wait until the next chap...... |
Reviewed By: Tokia On: January 25, 2003 22:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to know one thing,
does this have a continuation?
I like the fic a lot it would be nice to know what happend next. |
Reviewed By: Tokia On: January 25, 2003 22:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to know one thing,
does this have a continuation?
I like the fic a lot it would be nice to know what happend next. |
Reviewed By: SaiyanTrombone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I absolutely LOVE what you've done with the characters. Next, Vegeta is a bastard!!! But y'know, I can't wait to see what happens next! Hurry up and write more! Good stuff!
Oh yeah, I'm a tough rater, so don't be offended by the 7 on the spelling and grammar thing. You should get an editor if you want your sentences to flow a little more smoothly. But your ideas and the way you are putting them across make up for the few grammatical errors. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: ketpai On: January 25, 2003 18:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You protray vegeta and bulma perfectly...i love how thay act, its just like how they should. not have vegeta all mushy and sweet...im loving the fic please continue!
^.^ |
Reviewed By: Leena On: January 25, 2003 17:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I love it! Each and every chapter has been very intriguing to read. I can't wait to see what will happens next! Hmmm..what will Bulma do?? Keep up the very good work!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Asanra On: January 25, 2003 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! *stands up and starts to applaud* That was prolly one of the best chapters of anything that I`ve read in a while! I can`t wait to see what happens next! Update asap!
Asa |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 25, 2003 17:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's just wrong!!! Vegeta is so evil...I bet Bulma has a shit-fit!
GREAT story...should've reviewed before...but I'm lazy. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 16:39 PST
Comment/Review:
*cries* that JERK!! *wants to beat the living crap out of Vegeta now* heh... good job you.. keep going :) |
Reviewed By: syethemano On: January 25, 2003 16:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess Bulma is the true masochist! Feeling hurt after Vegeta bangs her around? Pain+sex and pain+anger equals two different things. |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 14:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, poor Bulma. Man if I were her... yea, well, this is going great! I absolutly love how Vejita would take action, I mean, normally in these type of fics, Vejita's all gentle and everything, although, well yea. Nice job though!! ^^* -luv Roshy- |
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