| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: me On: February 04, 2003 23:44 EST
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I was just wondering, if Bulma is seventeen, then how old is Vegeta?, just wonderin' |
Reviewed By: LiL pixie On: February 04, 2003 21:06 EST
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you are sooooo cruel! I saw "slave" with an "updated" sign next to it and I got soooo excited!! ::wow, another chapter out already!!!!:: but nooooooooooooooo it was chapters i had previously read, with revising/editing. Not that that's a bad thing, but ARGH!!! i need more chappies, dammit!!! (i've been sick all day, and have gotten way to much sleep, so forgive me as i may seem a little high strung) but pwease? pwease send us another chappie soon!! |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover On: February 04, 2003 18:29 EST
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I love your story it's really good. I love the way you set them both up even though the set is old but it's still a good and great way to set them up together. |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 16:00 EST
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The candle wax was a nice touch. I found it interesting how Vegeta asked if Bulma was ok. Does that mean he's starting to care about her a bit? |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: February 02, 2003 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry jacked up comp! buhbyes!
//////much\\\\\\\luv///// |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: February 02, 2003 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
since when did bulma give a phuck about what vegeta thought?shes really gettin un easy isnt she! how do u pronounce zuchinni or wutever?shes such a bitc* man i hope she like..dies or something! what if she kills bulma in her sleep or sumthing! that would rock! and vegeta would revive her wit the dragonballs or something!(dont pay attention to me im like high on pixi sticks or sumthin!)and when bulma got revived she would be all'im pregy!'
\~heyheyhey~/ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: February 02, 2003 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
since when did bulma give a phuck about what vegeta thought?shes really gettin un easy isnt she! how do u pronounce zuchinni or wutever?shes such a bitc* man i hope she like..dies or something! what if she kills bulma in her sleep or sumthing! that would rock! and vegeta would revive her wit the dragonballs or something!(dont pay attention to me im like high on pixi sticks or sumthin!)and when bulma got revived she would be all'im pregy!'
\~heyheyhey~/ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: February 02, 2003 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
since when did bulma give a phuck about what vegeta thought?shes really gettin un easy isnt she! how do u pronounce zuchinni or wutever?shes such a bitc* man i hope she like..dies or something! what if she kills bulma in her sleep or sumthing! that would rock! and vegeta would revive her wit the dragonballs or something!(dont pay attention to me im like high on pixi sticks or sumthin!)and when bulma got revived she would be all'im pregy!'
\~heyheyhey~/ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: February 02, 2003 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
since when did bulma give a phuck about what vegeta thought?shes really gettin un easy isnt she! how do u pronounce zuchinni or wutever?shes such a bitc* man i hope she like..dies or something! what if she kills bulma in her sleep or sumthing! that would rock! and vegeta would revive her wit the dragonballs or something!(dont pay attention to me im like high on pixi sticks or sumthin!)and when bulma got revived she would be all'im pregy!'
\~heyheyhey~/ |
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen On: February 01, 2003 21:04 EST
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You know how much i love yer story. ^_^ Nice job with this chapter. Usually when i read dbz fics it's nice to see Vegeta and bulma make up from fights and what not...but in this one, i can't wait to see bulma betray him somehow..he's such an asshole. But hey, if he wasn't an asshole, he'd be totally OOC.
A-heh, anyways, keep up the excellent work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Fallin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 16:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness you post fics so often, whoa, well done, my reviewers would lov eme if I was like that. Excellent as usually, My God Vegeta is such a sadist, though in a way it does make sense that he is. Sayians loving the pain and suffer of others and all...The plot is great you really don't need to stay up thinking about it. You can surprise me cause its your fic I really don't know what your thinking. Well...if you can checkout my fic and give me tips amd comments I would be grateful. |
Reviewed By: Chichi On: January 31, 2003 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC ,the cat fight in chapter 13 was funny especially when Bulma questioned Zucchini's virginity, Zucchini is a bitch I hate her. Bardock & Brolly are so kawaii in this fic & I loved the candle thing in chaptre 14 it was an original idea.PLEASE don't keep us in suspence for too long. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 31, 2003 06:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww , how sweet!!!!!
Bulma has to eat something though!!! she looks better with no sticking bones out lol.
Veggie rules
this chapter ruled
you girls rule!!!!!!!!!!
and bardock and brolly are SO adorable in this story *giggles*
looking forward until next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LiL Pixie On: January 30, 2003 22:02 EST
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ooooo...duhn, duhn, duhn!!!! Bulma's starting to get attached!!! heeheehee...superb candle scene! All I could think about was that Ricky Martin Video "Livin la vida loca" where the naked woman pours the orange candle wax on his tight abs....yummmm. Hey, I don't care if he's supposedly gay or not....he's got a niiiiice body!! LOL. Hey, that would make sure a great pic! Any takers for drawers? Cuz i can't draw. -_-() Anywho, Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. You have no idea how long i've been waiting for this. Everyday I check back to see if there's an update or not...lol |
Reviewed By: MaraKraus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's the best one I've read in a long time. Hurry with the next chapter. |
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