| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: cherry On: February 08, 2003 15:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! i love the story...it's great.. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 21:03 EST
Comment/Review:
coolness..... grr.. i hope some one kills Zucchini
soon hehe hopefully Bulma... can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 09, 2003 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^
heya, lol thanks for answering my revieuws, funny, nobody ever did that before *chuckle*
I feel flattered!
this chapter was real good, I believe there's more behind it than what you wrote.
or I could be wrong, I just love anyalizing stuff =)
Looking forward until the next chapter *as always*
Can't wait!
*huggles*
oh yeah btw, I know it's a bit late but HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
*hands her a rose and bows politely*
sweet 18! err...or was it sweet 16? oh well it doesn't matter ay ^-^
Later!! |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. saiyans love earth food!! lolz!! anywayz please update!! |
Reviewed By: fanfic lover On: February 09, 2003 17:57 EST
Comment/Review:
love it love it |
Reviewed By: amy On: February 09, 2003 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to say this is one of the most interesting B/V lemons i've ever read...can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Faith On: February 10, 2003 06:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^!! im love this story!! is amazing ^^ so unlike the other ones i have read, its how it should be between Bulma and Veggie, not all the "i love u ima weak and musy"(dont kill me people who like them) ^_^ and..WRITE MORE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! > |
Reviewed By: magic_goddess22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 15:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was interesting now wasn't it. I did like it. It was well written but uh please up date quickly |
Reviewed By: Bao On: February 11, 2003 10:19 EST
Comment/Review:
Aww..veggies starting to have feelings for bulma!! well hes starting to think about her..haha... good chapter...the last one was really good..damn i have all ur chaps printed out and stapled into a book... yup yup.. happy birthday...update soon!! im so addicted to this story! im on vacation in vietnam right now. i was so fuckin mad when i knew i wouldnt have the internet for the next 2 weeks...haha im across the world from my comp back home and i couldnt stand it anymore so i had to go to the local computer store and check to see if you updated... lol update soon!!! plz!!!
ooOoo btw, how old is vegeta? in the chap sweet dreams bulma was all saying shes not yet an adult.. well den how old is veggie? i think somewhere in the first few chapters you mentioned vegeta's age.. but im just asking to make sure..
nways update soon plz!!!!!! (*-^)")wave! |
Reviewed By: NIGHTSCREAM On: February 11, 2003 22:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey VG this was a really good chapter at 10 all the way! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Cessy On: February 13, 2003 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please write more. This's a GREAT fic. Really different. Perfectly unique. Oh, and- by the way..... Happy birthday!!!! Lucky you. You live in Australia. *looks out the window at snow* yeah. It's summer there, now isn't it? Damn seasons.....
Oh well! Happy 18!!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress On: February 08, 2003 10:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't waitt o see the other chap! Continu! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 09:47 EST
Comment/Review:
Happy birthday! great chapter. can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 07:14 EST
Comment/Review:
hey! Another great chappie!! Happy Birfday!! Yeah I live in Aus too, But ive still got a year till im 18..:( |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 18:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very cool pwease update asap!! ja!! |
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