| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 20, 2003 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trust me. Theres nothing to hate about this lemon chappie. And I love Nine Inch Nails.
Hey...Who is 'him' anyway. GRRRRRRRRRRRR
Anyway,love the plot. Keep it up. And dont forget to e-mail me when you update ok.
*Hugs to you* for the hard work you are putting into this fic.
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 10:37 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That is all I can say. Update. |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 08:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god ! This is so cool ! Continue ! I can't wait to see the rest ... and more lemon :) And I maybe have some requests for u... :) write me, see my profile for it ! |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 18, 2003 13:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Vegeta Goddess!!!! I must say that I, Onimusha, am very impressed at you entire fic so far. The lemon detailing that you and your companyon did was breath taking. The whole painful/sex thing is quite the turn on. I'll admit, I, myself, like a degree of pain with mine too.
I gave you all 10 because this fic, in my minds eye, is perfect in every way.
Now, I, Onimusha, have a request of you. E-mail me when you post your next chapter.
I command this of you. (lol)
singasong47@earthlink.net
The Great -Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 18, 2003 13:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Vegeta Goddess!!!! I must say that I, Onimusha, am very impressed at you entire fic so far. The lemon detailing that you and your companyon did was breath taking. The whole painful/sex thing is quite the turn on. I'll admit, I, myself, like a degree of pain with mine too.
I gave you all 10 because this fic, in my minds eye, is perfect in every way.
Now, I, Onimusha, have a request of you. E-mail me when you post your next chapter.
I command it of you. (lol)
singasong47@earthlink.net
The Great -Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 18, 2003 13:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Vegeta Goddess!!!! I must say that I, Onimusha, am very impressed at you entire fic so far. The lemon detailing that you and your companyon did was breath taking. The whole painful/sex thing is quite the turn on. I'll admit, I, myself, like a degree of pain with mine too.
I gave you all 10 because this fic, in my minds eye, is perfect in every way.
Now, I, Onimusha, have a request of you. E-mail me when you post your next chapter. I command it of you. (lol)
The Great -Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: jess131346 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv da plot |
Reviewed By: DragonQueen On: March 15, 2003 14:18 EST
Comment/Review:
HEY HEY! whats going on! hey i love where this sotry is going! oh Bulma, you little whore! just joking just joking...... anywho can't wait for the next chappie!
Luv ya lots! |
Reviewed By: Ying-chan On: March 14, 2003 22:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, good chapter, as usual. I'm glad you posted something! I really love this fic, i check every day for updates. anyways, post more soon please.
Ying Fa Li, Ja ne |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Thank u for updating man! I was dying here GRRR! But this chapy has me at the edge of my seat I think I know who the spy is but I wanna find out anyway .
*Hi this is NSBVEGETA sycho self saying LLLEMONNNNNNNNN NOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! and by the way you write I believe you when u say that is the best yet soooo UPDATEEEEE SOONNNN!!!!*
Love u!
Later ! |
Reviewed By: NIGHTSCREAM On: March 14, 2003 12:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great VG! I have a weird feeling about who the spy is but, I think I will keep it to myself for now, at least until I get a little more info. I hope you update this soon, i have enjoyed it since the beggining and it is only getting better each chapter. Any way keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: March 14, 2003 06:01 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you can get on the pc again, and I'm real anxious to read that B/V lemon!!
I hope you update soon!
it came quite in handy that the chapter was so short, I got to work in a few minutes and last time I was late because I wanted to read your chapter off first.... |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 16:52 EST
Comment/Review:
ohhhh awsome can't wait for the next chappie the spy is the other slave girl isn't it? muahhah can't wait to find out |
Reviewed By: loo On: March 12, 2003 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Now! |
Reviewed By: ray-raye On: March 11, 2003 10:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey gurl! yo! you just gotta keep updating! damn! this story is really good! please keep it up! hehe :-D much thanx....=) |
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