| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: Credik On: January 17, 2003 22:15 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey sorry i haven't reviewed b4 but my computer has issues but anywayz gr8 story. My sugestions: NO THREESOME!!!!! But keep with the idea u came up w/ in the Chapter 10 where Bulma began dominant itz about time Vegeta got dealt what he was dishing out. also definitly curious about Vegeta's gonna feel when he sees the dressed up guards! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 15, 2003 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. as usual, wonderful, I'm very curious to the next chapter!!
Luv your writing style! KISS! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 00:31 EST
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lol can't wait to see how you play dress up with boys it should be great lol |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 14, 2003 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT~~~!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 18:19 EST
Comment/Review:
Still doing great. Just because there wasn't a lemon doesn't mean it's bad. I love your fics. |
Reviewed By: DemonicKittenTehan On: January 14, 2003 17:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I dont really have that much to say, other than this story rocks! Wish I had inspired my human to write it, but oh well, thats the life of a demonic kitten muse.
Ciao
Tehan |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: January 14, 2003 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! keep up the good work.
I didn't came mediarmeiner fanfiction alot could
E-mail ( amandajune45@aol.com) when this fanfiction has a new chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: January 13, 2003 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think for the next lemon chapter you should make Vegeta beg. I find it so cute in other stories when Vegeta, the great prideful ouji, whimpers because Bulma isn't 'rocking' fast enough. Hahaha |
Reviewed By: aquaprincess On: July 19, 2003 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense fic.. Real good.. I couldn't stop reading once i started.. Very Very original... Update soon please.. When updated can you give me a notice at:
fanfictionlover@hotmail.com? Thanks tons.. Great story.. Keep it up.. |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 12:28 EST
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Handcuffs and bondage for the next fic. Lots of bondage...*hehehe* It's a great fic! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 11, 2003 22:05 EST
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A beautifully steamy chapter! I would be awesome if he ever let her have complete control, but I doubt that would fit with his character and all. Oh well. The lemon was yummy and I can't wait until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Sara On: January 09, 2003 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really really great! :)UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooh, this is getting really good ^^ -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: January 09, 2003 05:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good! Do more please! |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 18:31 EST
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Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
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