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Reviewed By: LiL Pixie On: January 25, 2003 11:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH, my Gosh!!! ahhhh! how can you leave us all HANGING like that!! you say vegita's cruel, ::pouts:: you made a cliff hanger....grrr.... poor bulma, veggie head better not do anything with zucchini just yet!!! grrrrr
anywho, i absolutely love this fic to DEATH and i sooo can't wait for the next chapter to come out! hurry hurry hurry! wonderful job, keep it up! :o) |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 11:26 PST
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HAHAHA. I like how Bulma was making fun of Zuchinni, but it was so sad how Veggie yelled at her. Please update soon, if you're not too busy. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 22:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh I luv this fic! Its really good!! hehe I liked that bit "zuchinni was GREEN with envy" nice humour!
Well done with this fic! You must update sometime soon!!! Please!!! |
Reviewed By: Yuffie On: January 24, 2003 15:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was upset when fanfiction.net banned this story since it's one of the few fics that I've enjoyed reading in a while (fanfiction.net is SO insipid), but I was relieved when you guys moved it to mediaminer. I love Vegeta's character in this stort & I hope he won't claim Bulma in the end JUST when he discovers she's pregnant with Trunks like in many other fics. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 00:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma is SO cool ... dressin up Bardock and Brolli, pickin fights with Princesses, oh yeah!! Aw, how'd he know that she'd be wearing green??? Is he psychic?? Does he have cameras in the room??? *lol* I'm WAY to addicted to this story ...
This story is SO awesome and if you still need a beta-reader and become desperate for one . . . then I'll volunteer! :)
*remembers that she is virutally unreachable from Saturday-Monday* Well, it was the thought that counted. :( |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 19:06 PST
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aaaaaaaaah!!! no fair! keep goin! *twitch* |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 16:40 PST
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Another great chapter. Sorry to hear about Lady D, but your fics are still great. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 12:49 PST
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Good work this! Well written lemon with decent plot woven in between. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: BeCcA On: January 20, 2003 17:59 PST
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OMG!!!! your story is so interesting~!!!! you have to update soon!!!!! PLEZ~!!!!! ITZ SO GOOD!!!1 WELL PaYce OuT!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 20:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
Twenty-One:
From what I'm reading, it could still go either way. Regardless as to whether or not she killed K.V., Ilandra might be using Bulma or she might be trying to help her out of pity, or even both. Either she or Brolly could be working for Frieza or maybe Brolly was a spy for K.V. against his son or even against Bulma Briefs, who was, after all, a great human scientist, and the closest thing the conquored people had to a crown princess.
All I can tell right now is that Brolly and Ilandra don't seem to be on the same side. ...although I wouldn't rule that out either.
Plots within plots. (--DUNE)
Twenty-two:
...Why should Bulma's presence have been a hindrance to his killing Ilandra? Surely he'd have been more concerned for her safety and his duty than for her feelings.
"What's inside you," could mean the weapons tech she's got in her head, could mean something about her inner nature. Of course, though, it could also mean a son or daughter. I'd been wondering since around chapter twelve what was to become of the children of concubines.
Promises that Bulma will be her own master? Even if Ilandra means her no ill, I don't think her father will be so benevolent. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 00:06 PST
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lol whoo hoo... i hope she kicks the princesses butt |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 20:57 PDT
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Awww, Bulma's gonna leave? Veggie-kun will be so sad. And what's Ilandra gonna do? |
Reviewed By: Legana On: January 19, 2003 10:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOOOOO
this story really is AMAZING!
*claps her hands extreamily hard, and acts real childish*
I cannot WAIT until the next chapter, I really enjoy reading this story.
KISS!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU GALS ROCK!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 22:42 PST
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(Bell rings three times) "In this corner we have the beautiful Chikyujin concubine, Bulma! And in the other corner, Vegeta's betrothed and future Queen of the Saiyajin, Zuccini! Let the match begin!!" Heh heh. Can't wait to see that. Lovin' this story. Can't wait til the next chapter. Maybe I'll have had more sleep when I read it and not leave retarded reviews. Ha ha. Oh well. |
Reviewed By: Majin Pan On: January 18, 2003 22:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED Bulma's dresses in chapters 11 & 12 can't wait for the next chapter. |
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