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Reviewed By: credik On: March 08, 2003 22:37 EST
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
sorry i got a little carried away, but usually ur one to update quick and u haven't, by the way i LUV the Don Juan bit!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 14:19 EST
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AND WHO IS TRYING TO KILL BULMA I AN GONNA CHASE THAT SON OR A BICTH |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 14:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yours is one of the only that I have read I loved it but please write some more.
~~KISS KISS~~ |
Reviewed By: Jam ( to friends) Dilan ( to family) On: March 06, 2003 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who the hec is trying to kill Bulma
:: If I dont know soon I'm going to scream!!! :: any way your fic was great!! |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked a lot. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 10, 2003 19:36 EDT
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Update please! bakayaro! heh heh heh. Gomen Nasi. I'm just not having a good time here. I haven't found an update yet, that's really annoying, ne?
A note to:"Hard Love"
Kisama, I'm sure Vegeta Goddess is aware that Eurythemics is the one who origionally did Sweet Dreams. I like Manson's version better my self, so, shut up!
Mate ne Everyone!!!
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 19:33 EST
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I wonder who "he" is...I can't wait to find out more, this is getting really interesting. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: cherry On: March 04, 2003 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story! finish it faster!!! |
Reviewed By: Natsumi Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 20:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooh Cliff hanger Aiiiiie evil!! .___.!
Great fic so far, I'm totally loving it ^^"
Who's got it in for Bulmy? o.O'
Update Soon please! ^^!
Fantastical chapter. =) |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 28, 2003 06:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm exciting...seems like No Ou has got a big problem with our Bulma...
I am VERY curious how it goes on... please don't wait so long with updating :s
it's killing me, lol.
You girls rule!
updateeeeeee!!!
lots of love and kisses. |
Reviewed By: Tifa Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color
I want to first comment on how well you are dpoing with this story. The story line is off the charts and I think you should think about really going into the field of writing stories. I myself have a hard time keeping up a story on line. But this story is by far on of the best Fan Fiction that I've seen. I think you really have some skills going for the both of you. (is it two of you wrting this becasue the comment goes to both if so) I caheck this site all the time looking for more chapter to just this story mosty. I was wonudering, do you have your own site becasue I would love to vist it if so. I'm on the look out for more of your work. The reason I think I like this story so much is becasue you keep up with the charters and the way they REALLY act. Like Vegta for ex. You keep the mean, hard core act tht Vegta really has. I like that. I've crossed a few stories here where they tollay got the charter way wrong. But you've nailed the nail on the head and I love that. Your story is a scheen popping, action, drama filled story that I think is by far the best. (I talkj way to much) Do make sur you keep up the excite work!!! I love your story and I'm your biggest FAN!!! |
Reviewed By: Super Nerd [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 17:52 EST
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'Him'? ....... the suspence is powerful... *grins* love the story ^.~ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 22:58 EST
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Ack, who is he and why does he want to hurt Bulma? I must know. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 21:28 EST
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Who the hell is HE? |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHo the fuck want to hurt bulma??! *YEAH WHO?!*
Shut up ! When Vegies finds out! *yeah when Vegie finds out* Shut up! *MAKE ME*!! Im giving a review here! Im impacient now damn it and I wanna know who it is and what the hell is my babe going to do about it! So I cant wait for the next chapy!
and hey before I forget *WAIT A damn minute Thats my line WHEN IS THE NEXT LEMON GOING TO BE!?
Later:) |
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