| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: yami_neko2 On: June 04, 2004 15:46 EDT
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hey i just noticed thiswhen kagome was telling the story of her father to sango and miroku and kogua, , if inu yahsa could go through the well when he was in demon form(in the beginning of the story when kagome had her period and inu yasha was tryign to mate with her) then how come Rare go through when he was hurt so kagome's mom could help him ghet better and then have kagome? or maye its just a plot hole caused by the grenades *snickers*
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Reviewed By: digger On: June 02, 2004 04:35 EDT
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I've been enjoying your fic. I hope that you update fairly soon. By the way you may have a nuke but, I'll just lob shells the size of volkswagens at you from the Missouri; an Iowa class battle ship with 9 16inch guns. If you attempt to send in the bomber I'll just have one of my escorts intercept you. They are all equiped wth the AEGIS fire control system and have the full balistic missile defense upgrade. Also don't forget one of the stars of operation Desert Storm the Tomahawk cruise missle which is on board every ship in my flotilla
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Title: K...
Reviewed By: Andraya On: May 31, 2004 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good! plz update. O and... {Brings out chainsaw and starts running after the author}SO, HOW DO YOU LIKE IT WHEN SOMEONE TRIES TO KILL YOU?!?!?MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
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Title: bringer of death
Reviewed By: lodus On: May 29, 2004 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was for 53 and i loved it so you kneed to update the story ok have a great day where ever you are. here in hawaii live is good with no more finals and summer on its way. I love the originality of your story like how she just happens to have all these things she dident know have a good one and eat some da-kine good grins k see ya
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is all I can say I just read chapter 28 and I kept thinking all that happen over spilled ramen! wow!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Chick, Kagome On: May 27, 2004 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo I must say well done...You are an exeptional writer and i thouroghly enjoyed reading this fic (although not completed yet). I am a fanfic writer/ reader myself who relatively writes about what i like to read and such, so the "for me, by me" senario works out just fine by me. Actually, u write almost too much like me *screams* ur my long lost twin!! Just kiddin but i had an idea for a fic like this too, much different but same Hanyou Kagome idea in mind which people tend to like. But somehow i like these stories better when someone other than me with talent like urs does it. And one last comment before i annoy u with a huge review...I rarely ever write reviews and such b/c most of the time i dont think its worth it...but i must say this WAS worth it and the hours i spent reading..kinda obsessive huh..oh wellz...Keep up the exellent writing u good writer u...lol ok outtyz! (ps Ami's name is Ayami or somthing close to that) ^_^
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Title: DONT KILL ME!
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 00:56 EDT
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AAAAAHHHGGGG!!!!!! DONT SHOOT ME!!! I-I-I- l-love the fic!! *runs and hides in a corner* PLEASE JUST DONT KILL ME!!!!
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Title: The whole story as far as chapter 53...
Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word... "WOW!" This is the best fanfic I've EVER read. You have the perfect balance between the romantic stuff and the story itself. You should really continue writing... especially when you end a chapter with a cliffhanger -_-; That's just plain cruel... but on the other hand it makes me want to reat more. Keep up the good work!!!!!
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Title: bringer of the after life
Reviewed By: bringer On: May 26, 2004 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story and it is realy realy good in my opion but u kneed some new weapons how about an m-80, a glave (fun boomarang knife thingy), flying monkies with fez hats would be cool
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Reviewed By: kyoten On: May 25, 2004 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have real talent for writing. You have the rare ablility to draw your reader into your story. I have to admit i spent about 6 hours staight reading this last night and finished it today at work. Please do update soon. Also i like you end chapter funnies, very good.
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Reviewed By: Me Again! On: May 24, 2004 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I see that you got out of my bottomless pit of a weapon bag.... sorry for that, I guess it backfired.... well I did get you another present, more specific and better, I think... Well here *tosses it to you* Inside is a modified, updated, super, action........ bottomless pit of weapons....... well think of the good things about it. I came with a rope this time! Don't get mad my mind is not working very well ok? Well bye, Sionara!
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: May 24, 2004 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my second time reviewing but it deserves because its so friekin cool,no one except kirara is left out of this story the one thing i dont like is the black nails /lips just not right on kagome verything else is awseome you should make it 100 chapters and it would be the longest fanfic i have ever readyou have righting talents
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Reviewed By: squirrelboy On: May 24, 2004 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its the perfect fanfic theres romance denial(the baby)love ,action ,heavenly action if you know wat i mean but not too much,tou should make it 100 chapters
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Title: Awesome~!
Reviewed By: ChibiStarTk On: May 24, 2004 05:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say this is the greatest Inuyasha fanfic I've ever come across. It has every factor I ever looked for in a Inu fic. Please keep writing more! When I saw the two new chapters come up I was very happy ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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Title: Chapter 53
Reviewed By: feurigekatzchen On: May 20, 2004 15:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great piece of writing, aside from some spelling and grammatical errors but I'm a bit anal about that so ignore it. I really like some of the twists you put in and also giving the evil ones, like Kikyo and Kagura, some depth and motive. I also liked the many little things like the demon parasite, educating Inuyasha on the female body, Hojo being a demon, and how Sango and Miroku FINALLY get together. The part about there being an extra Jewel Shard is perplexing, I wonder where you will go with that. I hope that this story isn't over quite yet, there are still many things left to resolve. I can't wait to read the rest of this story! Also I love the interesting comments you make at the end of each chapter, it's a bit scary though how much alike you and I seem to be. hehehe. I would like to read more of your work so I'll either have to find more or you will have to write more. Have you ever seen Hellsing or the Mysterious Play (fushi yuugi, sooo not spelled right but oh well)? They have interesting characters and many different plots to play with. You should look into them, maybe. Anyways, keep up the good work and please write the rest soon!!
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