| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: May 03, 2004 23:20 EDT
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EEEE!!, please update sooonnnn!!!
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Title: Well... I have an interesting weapon for you...
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: May 02, 2004 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course... the review comes first! lol :P Anyhow, uh...-is at a loss for words-... ... I loved the chapters... fewf, it's been a long day... forgive me! :P Anyhow... please update soon! Now for the weapon... *hands her a flamethrower* This is no ordinary flamethrower... *starts to back away* I hope you'll use it! *turns and runs* *You pull the trigger, and chocolate hundred dollar bills shoot out* ^.~ Told you it was no ORDINARY flamethrower! ^o^ lol. Ja ne! Tanya
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Title: hissori yume
Reviewed By: sessh's demonic tenshii On: May 01, 2004 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omg om fukin' god, i cant beleev u!!!!!!!! i dont understand it, u hav got to b 1 of the BEST writers i no!!!!!!!!!!! i read A LOT of fanfiction!!!!!!! an i love ur lil theatrical plays at the end of ur story!!!! they're awesome an its great to get a kick out of the authoress nearly killin urself!!!!!! no body does that ne more! every body jus goes an picks on Sess or goes an kills naraku + kikyo or jus tortures koga with evil torturous weapons! its funny but i think ur acts top em ALL off, no doubt about it! an i cant wait for ur nex chapter so start writin! (or else.....)
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Title: Smithers
Reviewed By: anglsmith On: April 30, 2004 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all I think you're doing a greatJust reread your last couple of chapters and look for one or two uncomplete sentences. Other than that, awsome story. But I still think my favorite part is your evil authoress notes at the end. Very creative and funny!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: April 29, 2004 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaahahahah I wonder if he memorized it all since I barley remember that stuff from school
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 28, 2004 18:26 EDT
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O_o Putting the authors notes aside that was another excellent chapter! Look forwards to finding out the resolution to the cliffhanger. Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwww how scary and sad for all of them
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Title: transformations
Reviewed By: RUBSHW On: April 11, 2004 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it was soooooooo coooooool i loved it i have so many parts i love i cant count how many it was geart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hey Look Its Me! On: April 10, 2004 05:04 EDT
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All I gotta say is hurry up and update! Oh and umm... PLEASE! Thank You. Im done now. =:3
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Reviewed By: Niko with an I On: April 09, 2004 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fanfic that I didn't get boerd with after the first few chapters. This is realllllllllllly good. *pulls out flame thrower* And for shoting me and setting me on fire... *tries to turn on flame thrower but it doesn't wor* damn... uh seeya *runs*
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Reviewed By: demonic tenshii On: April 09, 2004 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i am gunna say is this: i haved read this so far and this is one of the best storys i have ever read an that goz 4 the lemon as well! i no im not confused by any twists but if u can, dont ever mention kikyo (i hate her with a passion!!!!) an u shood hav inu kick kogas ass that wood be fun an kag shood definitly kill that mirlu idiot that wood b great! an i dont think u cood make it any bettr than it already is! i meen u make me laf UNCONTROLLABLY thank u!!!!!!ur the hi lite of my week!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kdhfsdhtfe On: April 08, 2004 23:55 EDT
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u wanted 2 no what narakus mist is called well it is called myasma
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Title: Transformations
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl15 On: April 06, 2004 18:43 EDT
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I'd love your fanfic. I mean ,how did you manage to come up with 47 chapters?! That's really long.But it was fun and entretaining. P.D.
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Title: Transformations
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover 1 On: April 06, 2004 18:41 EDT
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I'd love your fanfic. I mean ,how did you manage to come up with 47 chapters?! That's really long.But it was fun and entretaining. P.D.
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic...please update soon.
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