| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 28, 2004 21:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
love it! cant wait for the sequal
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he cried? wtf lol nice lemon ^_^ and thank you for the link ^_^
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Title: sequal?
Reviewed By: vizmanga On: October 27, 2004 13:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not all that mad that there not going to be anymore lemons( alittle disapponted but i'll get over it 0 i was wondering if you were going to my a sequal that deals with their kids( i mean both i/k and m/s kids)if you do let i/k have a girl please?? also you need an a-bomb vizmanga
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Title: Lyrica Should Screw Herself
Reviewed By: Hanyougal [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg Lyrica shut the hell uo its an awesome story but your just bitching cuz you are jealous. The green eyed monster is like humping your back. Just shut the fuck up and screw yourself
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: HanyouGal (Offline) On: October 27, 2004 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT AHHHHH I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS STORY. The Batlle chapters weren't spaced enough though hard to read. Dont ake this as a flame I love this story soooooo much thx for writing! -HanyouGal
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: October 26, 2004 22:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is great please update
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 26, 2004 17:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, very much looking forwards to the sequel. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: please god write more
Reviewed By: inuyashalover34 On: October 24, 2004 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more and a sequel would be so badass i had an idea try to develop hojo a bit it would make it a bit more interesting like make him learn more demon abilities
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 00:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow i'm soo happy i found this on! i used to read it on ff.net but got really disappointed that it was removed.
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Reviewed By: lyrica On: October 23, 2004 16:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
FIX YOUR FUCKING STORY
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Title: 55
Reviewed By: Lyrica On: October 23, 2004 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the hell is going on? i'm guessing this chapter has been up for a while, why haven't you fixed it? i love this story, but i wont finish reading it if i can't understand whats going on! you say you do this strictly for the readers and all that crap, but this shows me you don't give a shit. this chapter makes no sense and screws up the frickin story.
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 23, 2004 15:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
love this fic! cant wait to see your sequel!
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Reviewed By: Lyrica On: October 23, 2004 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading it practically non-stop ^^ i loves it. i wasn't really planning on reviewing because i'm a lazy shmo, but you said my name (miranda) although not on purpose, so i decided i would because i'm sooo cool.
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Reviewed By: sarah gray On: October 23, 2004 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thanks for updating i was wondering when you were. on the last chapter you wrote there is a glitch i think. the first word is cut off every couple of paragraphs you start. maybe its just my computer. oh well anyways LOVE the story i am a big fan and i hope you do put those lemons in there, very entertaining!!!!! thanks again for updating....look foward to reading somemore
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 22, 2004 23:08 EDT
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It was still an excellent chapter, one that makes me all the more want to obtain the rest of Inuyasha, both manga and anime. I look forwards to both endings and your next story. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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