| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 21:24 EDT
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*wipes a small tear away* wow your work...even as ugly as these scenes were to think about(i don't think i could stand to watch what happened to that guy even though i do believe he deserved it*shudders* what a way to go) they're still masterpieces, true works of art. I only wish i could see good art more often. *sigh* oh well you are the supreme writer. and as such you have complee control over what i see and when i see it(when it comes to your work :D) please update asap i beg of you...i'll give you some highly posionouse posion*evil glint in my eye sparkles* just be careful because there is NO antidote(none no where no how)*hands you a vial(only about an ounce worth)* believe me its all you'll need, here *hands you some scraps of paper* the instructions *you read*...add one drop per three gallons of water, then use like any other posion..WARNING no antidote you like maybe yes??? well i'll be going now, remember update asap, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: May 07, 2005 20:53 EDT
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I think I get it now although the fact you pulled this out of the bag shocked me at first, very very very clever... So, it seems that Inuyasha, an Inuyasha from an alternate future (or past depending on your POV) came back and took care of them this time although if he could do that I can't entirely understand why he did not stop it the first place and why two of him does not cause a paradox... I truely never expected that to happen, so it seems that if I am right then he is the killer after all...sort of... Ok, now even I'm getting confused...I'll leave it at saying that it was a magnificent chapter and I look forwards to seeing what comes next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Inu_Girl17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 18:16 EDT
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OH MY GODS YOU HAVE TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!I don't get it....is the killer a future InuYasha?Please update soon!!!!=^.^=
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Title: i LOVE this story
Reviewed By: lilmab207 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 18:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im on chapter 37 now and Ive been reading none stop I have to finish keep writing. LILMAB207
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: April 20, 2005 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again with the torture... *sighs*... *mumbles* she-devil.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 19:57 EDT
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nooooooo! you have to tell us who it was...i vote for Sesshomaru(one that lived till kagome's time not one that went through the well or somehow got foward in any way, but actually LIVED all those hundred of years) and of course did what INuyasha was forbidden to do by Kagome. any hoo, that sucks about your computer, I just got a new one and when it farts(loses data) on me i get pissed, and my dad has to handle it or i might end up smashing the thing, i have very little patience for technology, if i have to use it it better work is what i say, i would never be able to use your computer, you poor thing here *hands you a cyber inuyasha hunk* he does everything but listen so you might want to keep him in a cage or on a chain :D, well update asap, computer willing, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 19, 2005 17:15 EDT
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Beautiful chapter. Very sorry to hear that you lost your work...it is almost like losing a friend or family member in a way as it's losing all the time and energy you spent on finding those things and now they have been lost thanks to a glitch... If I may, I have to agree that with all the problems you listed I recomment you tell Tammy she needs to reformat the disk, it sounds like it has got some serious viruses and hopefully should be cleaned by a fresh instal. Also, sorry if I am being a pain, I suggest a firewall such as Zonealarm which should help prevent most of that stuff. Sorry if I'm being a nusciance suggesting this... I think that I liked this darker style better, the death was deserved although it does leave me wondering who or rather what it was that could have done it... Well before I ddig an even bigger hole for myself I better go. I hope that somehow it works out in the end, I want to say sorry for your loss but it just sounds corny, you know? Good luck & best wishes always, Hououza
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 03:45 EDT
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Ouch sry about the PC stuff. I'll tell you now though that things don't MOVE them selves. eather someone was being an a** to you or somone has controll of your PC via the net.. If the folder was just gone along with other things o the first start i'd say the Hard Drive got currupted but since it MOVED it had to be DONE by someone.. Eather way i'd get myself a Router/Firewall and reformat the PC.. Just my advice from someone who clames to know these things.
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Title: I'm so, so sorry
Reviewed By: Eartha (nsi) On: April 19, 2005 00:20 EDT
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Hey, I'm just writing this to tell you how much I feel your pain. I've blown up a few computers of my own and lost many things that I would have wished to keep. So, with my experience, I will give you my wisdom. If it's important, save it on disk. That is something I have learned the hardest of ways. The first thing you should always do when facing a computer that starts to go a little 'off' is save everything you feel like you can't live without on disk. Then, take it to get fixed. It sounds like you got a virus, so some better protection for the computer is in need to. Again, my sincerest expressions of sympathy. -Eartha
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Reviewed By: Tsujita_91notloggedin On: April 18, 2005 22:36 EDT
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I feel your pain. Similar things have happened to me and it sucks. Just wanted to let you know I sympathize!!!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME I read it i love it also this is one of the best stories. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mr Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Except for one or two spots that are slightly iffy...this story remains my favorite Inuyasha story. It inspired me to write my own, and I owe that to you. Thanks
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Reviewed By: kitcat99 (forgot to log in) On: April 04, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would rate the first version not the alternate as more creative and original. I've seen a simular plot (not the same) for the alternate ending version. Though not where Kagome writes a story but the rape thing. I am looking forward to the next chapter and sorry for not reviewing till now just haven't had time...as it is I hardly have time to read the chapters. As is evident by my reading three to four chapters in a row. So keep up the good work and add my review to your tally. ^_^
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Title: ME!
Reviewed By: Jewishpaladin or ScaryClownHat, whichever I used when I reveiwed On: April 03, 2005 03:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ME!
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Reviewed By: strange one On: March 29, 2005 22:15 EST
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i am at alternate ending 33.I was going to review when i was done reading,but i want a weapon too.i can add it to my assult weapon closet I MEAN COAT CLOSET!!!!!!!!I WILL TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*takes drink*HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! U WILL NEVER CATCH ME!!!!*runs away chased by man in white coat*NNOOOOO!!!*knocked out with Tv and stabed with tranquilizers and a pencil*me sleepy
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