| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: End
Reviewed By: kasumi1205 logged out On: February 03, 2005 17:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was awsum, i loved ur idea to make her hanyou, and to make every 1 live. alotta people get her to live as long as inu, but they let sango and miroku die..i also loved when she started flying when she was fighting Naraku..that was perfect exactly what i wanted to see, cuz i wanna be able to fly...*mumbles* damn gravity...gr8 story i loved it so much!! =^.^=
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Title: fic as a whole
Reviewed By: subie On: February 02, 2005 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent creativity; you have a gift for description expecially in the battle scenes, however be careful you don't get too bogged down in details. The writing style is better than average but still could be improved; that will only come through practice. I could tell through this story that you are getting better. Your detemerination writing this long of a fanfic is impressive, I hope that you will end up finishing it cus I want to read it :) Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 11:16 EST
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hehehe, god i love your authors notes, there so funny. great chappy, can't(but will)wait for the next one. Zirra.
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Title: FLUFF!
Reviewed By: celtic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, fluff is nice. I like this story and how there was a story within a story. Will kagome write any other stories? lol. Anyway, I also like how Kagome is reserved about marking and such and I started cracking up laughing at the nipping bit. It was good though, and brought a unique style to your story.
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Title: FLUFF!
Reviewed By: celtic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 21:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, fluff is nice. I like this story and how there was a story within a story. Will kagome write any other stories? lol. Anyway, I also like how Kagome is reserved about marking and such and I started cracking up laughing at the nipping bit. It was good though, and brought a unique style to your story.
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Reviewed By: Seito On: January 30, 2005 20:04 EST
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Yet another Awesome chapter ^_^ btw just out of curiosity will be creating another AE after this one is completed? Well can't wait till the next update. Ja ne for now.
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Title: @. @
Reviewed By: Liliedhe On: January 30, 2005 19:23 EST
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@.@ uggghhhhhhhhhhh what the fuck man my head hurts now...how the fuck can you keep up? im tempted to right down all the blood lines but i think ill run out of paper.... damn my head hurts now T.T bitch you gave me a migraine!!! arrrgggghhhh ...... my head hurts wheres the motrin!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Houozua On: January 30, 2005 18:38 EST
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Hi, me again! Excellent chapter! So, Kagome isn't quite yet ready to 'mate' with Inuyasha...that could cause some interesting problems, especially if his instincts try to take over... Glad to see we got a brif look and Sango and Miroku too, nice to know that things between them are progressing abliet slowly. I did have a look at Dark World but for some reason the formatting went a bit...um...odd. Probably didn't read the line break characters properly from Word, if I may I suggest saving it as HTML and uploading it from that (Sorry, work tomorrow so switching back into developer mode ^_^;) Ok, got to go. Sorry once again about not reviewing Dark World yet. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Chapter 66/AE35
Reviewed By: soul bled dry On: January 28, 2005 23:37 EST
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i love your writing but i cant see this chapter for some reason
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Reviewed By: AmberL On: January 28, 2005 22:32 EST
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No i can see what you put in this chapter
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Title: end of transformations
Reviewed By: Sunshine______Angel@hotmail.com On: January 23, 2005 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was awsome.you didn't have to make an alternet ending. I've also got some wepons for you. theres a chinese spike ball,a fork,a curling iron,a curling hair brush,cds,acid,mr.clean,shampoo,a telephone cord, a peice of paper(papercut!)glass,ice cubes.Just read the fanfic 100 ways to kill kikyou and you'll have over 100 wepons. Seriously frozen yogurt? funny yet stupid.my bf freaked at the hampster thing, he's obsessed with hampsters almost as much as he is with inuyasha. Pretty freaky shit. keep on writing. i'm not gonna read the alternate ending.its gonna ruin it for me.its nice to know theirs someone out there with my matchurity level! Ja Ne ! ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ...................................................................________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________---------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------________
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Title: Umm
Reviewed By: wingless_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may be only my computer but the latest chapter does not seem to appear... there is no text...
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Reviewed By: wingless_dreams On: January 20, 2005 20:55 EST
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Title: loved
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it i just finished reading all of it and i love it........GREAT JOB!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Seito On: January 12, 2005 22:09 EST
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Wow I love your fanfic. I finally got up to the end. But I was wondering, am I the only person who is currently having trouble seeing AE 36? Anyways. I love your fanfic. Can't wait to see more updates.
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