| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know what? i think you should still wrie a book mabie not an inuyasha book but a real book seriously!! you have a real kool writing power from yo homies at atlanta peace -.0 -jordy
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 13:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
you know what? i think you should still wrie a book mabie not an inuyasha book but a real book seriously!! you have a real kool writing power from yo homies at atlanta peace -.0 -jordy
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 22:18 EDT
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really awesome fan fic you should write a book =] lol no really! lol keep em comein !=)
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Reviewed By: Kendra On: May 19, 2007 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story line, and your writing is great. I also like the little things at the end of each chapter to get people to review. I have a picture I'd send you if I knew how...hang on, I do know how...*hits myself in the head hard* and here's an idea for a new weapon or two: broad sword and smoke bombs. use the smoke bombs to hide yourself attacking the nonreveiwers.
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Reviewed By: Ikamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing! And might I say I was thrilled when I discovered that the fic had 65 chapters! I am new to the sight so I can't really tell if the stories done or not; if it isin't, I sincerely look forward to more chapters! If it is, then I hope for more stories by you, I'm sure I will enjoy them all. Ps: Long enough for 'ya? ;3
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Reviewed By: carole On: April 21, 2007 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story but...black lips? kinda turns off the beautiful thing no?
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Title: Transformations
Reviewed By: PopTart Margarita On: April 11, 2007 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just LOVE this fanfic. I rarely can read a lot of chs of fanfics but this one..man i wanted to read it in one night (but i didn't because my eyes got tired :P) i found it to have the right mix of everything. I just had surgery on my shoulderr two weeks ago and i found this story just before it and i was SO so pissed about not being able to sit in the chair comfortable long enough to read. You did such a great job on this! I'm sure its going to be one story i'll read many times over. *claps* I look forward to reading other stories written by you!
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 22:32 EST
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Can't look for any mistakes entertainment way more than OK just perfect. Love the idea and the originality surrounding it. A+
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Title: Waaaah! ur CRAZY! O.o
Reviewed By: Tohru Hotaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Your fanfic's so cool! A BIG well done for you! Tee hee hee *waves a flame thrower around as if it was a tissue* SO HYPER ATM! My fiance is readin the story on his laptop. Eating more skips... Yumyumyummy. ha ha ha
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 23:07 EDT
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OMG I started crying so hard when I thought this was over, I mean like I never cry but I've been staying up late and just reading this now for the past 4 days and I never wanted it to end!! It's the best fic that I have every read in my entire life! The only part that I didn't like about it was that Shippo and Kagome seem to drift apart... but 500 years would do that to you... I'm so sad though because I know that I can't read the other AE because I would be so sad if something happened to Kagome or the pups... any of them.. .I am however really curious as to how long they plan on living?? And with all those youkais and hanyous around, wouldn't modern times be alright with the whole, apearence thing? Anyways sadly I have to go... I wuvvles you for all the work you put into this... Ja ne
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Title: Finished
Reviewed By: Bladecutter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There, finnaly done. Well played out ending. Gatta say though, holy crap at the amount of kids they had. Jeebus. O_o
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Title: Oh yes,
Reviewed By: Bladecutter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 21:37 EDT
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By the way, the hanyou Kagome sounds cute. :3 I always wanted fuzzy dog ears like Inuyasha's... Makes meh sad... Ah well, very descriptive fic. Hope to see you write more, and try not to get deterred by all the untalented pricks who bash authors for every tiny thing they find. Like a typo. Or something. They should just die. Maybe I'll donate a laser of eternal pain to you or something... :) Some parts of this made me wonder though but I can't quite think of them right now... Anyways, I hope you keep writing fics for us adoring bullet-hole filled, charred and beaten fans of yours to read. ;) I bet most of the flamers are just jealous that they lack talent. :o Either that or they think they are above everyone else and flame for no reason other than to get rid of competition. But we all know thats not true. :o Kudos! ...Grrr, Mediaminer is tickin' me off, it keeps givin me this crap about a invalid spam protection code. They can shove thier damn code, all its doing is making it take longer for me to review again... >.
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: Bladecutter2 On: May 17, 2006 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good fic. I tend to read through reviews when I'm done with the fic so I can laugh at all the people bashing the author for being stupid, but I'm not done yet. ;) Loved the lemons by the way. O_o Most descriptive ones I've read. These actually put images in my head. XD
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Title: crush
Reviewed By: aranay On: May 14, 2006 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*blush*I think I have a crush on Kagome's dad. *blush*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is some kick-ass fic! I loved the placement of the lemons. Kagome as a hanyou . . . I'm not so sure about it, but you made it seem so real. Like it really happened, you know? I wish you could've put some more Sango and Miroku romance into it, gives the story more variety and "fling." Again: KICK-ASS FIC RIGHT HERE PPL! IF OTHERS DON'T READ IT, THEY'RE CRAZY!!!!!!!!
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