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 Reviewed By: Tarialla  On: August 06, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AAAHHHH!!! Ok, I TOTALLY LOVE YOU!!! I need more now. I love the original story, and the alternate ending which is now a whole 'nother story... It just branches off! Ok, so 'The Phantom' totally seems like Inumuffin from the past but he's lived through to Kagome's time. If that makes sense in the least. Anyways, it seems so much like this, it's probably not! But then you could think that we'd think that and make it so it is him which would just maky my brain implode, so I'll just stop. In summary of all this; Love the story, and my theories on the Phantom need hella lot of work. They're probably not even talking about Kagome. But - GAH! Stop! Bad Tari! Shut up now. *slaps self* Good day.
 Title: Oh My..........
Reviewed By: Evil Kitten Dhild  On: August 04, 2005 04:06 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ha Ha ha ha HAHAHAHAHA... oh my that ending way perfect. You lnow with the naraku all at your mercy. Very funny. Oh and can you tell me where to get the chains from so Lord Shessy and Me can Have some fun!!!! *blush* Isn't that right sesshy Sessho- No Oh don't kid your self fluffy sessho- Do not call me that -Bankoutsu walks in- Ban- Hey why don't you leave him and come with me um.... sessho- why are you here, leave at once oh you really do care sesshy *runs towards him* ban- you're comeing with me weather u want to or not *steals alex in mid run* SESSHY HELP- *get kissed by Ban* Mmmm...ohhhh Bankoutsu.....Mmmm Sessho- Wait..you tratior!!!! *but doesn't get heard* **Beats up Bankoutsu takes me back and...** OH SESSHY!!!! *tries to kiss him all over his face* Sessho- stop this at once- *smooch* See I knew you'd like ittttttttt- *falls back with seeho on top of her* Wait...sesshy ...let me....finish the letter.... Sessho- U did good with the writing of this story so this is the end of this pointless conversation. *Starts licking her face, neck- sessho-LEAVE AT ONCE ANNOYING HUMAN!!!!! *shuts door and cuts off lights*
 Reviewed By: elementalobsession  On: August 01, 2005 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
good idea. i wish you did have enough reviews to get published. although i don't see how that would work out with the whole copy right thing and what not. oh well. good luck on everything. your devotedf reader, elemental obsession aka~ Julia
 Reviewed By: g.j.g  On: July 09, 2005 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
why did he die that is so very evil you can't make the main charater die that is completely insane
 Reviewed By: g.j.g  On: July 09, 2005 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
why did he die that is so very evil you can't make the main charater die that is completely insane
 Reviewed By: Hououza  On: July 05, 2005 18:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
First of all I owe you an enourmous apology, sorry for taking so very long to review. That was, as ever, a magnficient chapter. What started out as an alternate ending is now a full story in it's own right and one that I have greatly enjoyed thus far. I have to admit at first I had forgotten the identity of the killer, recalling when I did was a shock at first, reliasing it was him from another time line. I can't help but wonder what will happen when he is done, if he will vanish or remain. Glad to know Kikyo was finally resolved. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
 Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2005 05:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well i'm in no way a kikyo lover but i still think what you did somehow fits!. It's nice to see new chapters and the length is great i really dislike the fics that fit in a single window no scroll bar. So maybe i should use a lower res.. But anyway this is marked as a dark fic in the summery... as it would shre as :bleep: warrent it.. Not that i'm in any way complaining. Keep up the good work:) O right and this was for the last 2 chapters.
 Reviewed By: Mr. Chaos  On: July 02, 2005 00:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
Can I make a prediction? I have a weird feeling it's Koga. That, or Shippo. I just don't think it's going to be another world Inuyasha
 Reviewed By: Rosy  On: July 01, 2005 21:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
As much as i liked the original version, I think i like the alternate even better. I love a good mystery, and now all i can think of is who the killer could be. I wonder, could it be Inuyasha from a different time? But no, that doesn't make sense....then again....great! now i won't stop guessing until you let us know. Keep it up!!
 Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2005 16:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay a new chapter. I liked it. I can't wait for another one. I hope you update soon. Are you gonna do one murder every chapter? Well Ja ne for now, *~Star Fire Kagome~*
 Reviewed By: elementalobsession  On: June 30, 2005 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cutting off his eyelids so he couldn't blink away the blood? you are truelly sadistic and for that i love you. damn you're good! it pisses me off...*pouts*
 Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Zach  On: June 30, 2005 12:48 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, i love your writing, and you made my day yesterday, i came to see if you posted an other chapter, and you did! i was like HURRAH! anyway, keep going, and i was just wondering, how come your not posting any chapters in DarkWorld, cuz i like that story too. :D anyways, Ciao!
 Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2005 18:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
hm..*watches DL chase Naraku for a bit...then put an old Kikyo plushie in a large strong cage* "here boy, here Naraku, get kikyo!!" *Naraku jumps out of the tree and right into the cage...SLAM....the door slams shut* *mutters* idiot.....@ DL: there you go, he's all caught again. :D great chapter by the way. *gives DL the key to the cage(which has a flap to feed whatevers in it)* update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
 Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2005 18:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
hm..*watches DL chase Naraku for a bit...then put an old Kikyo plushie in a large strong cage* "here boy, here Naraku, get kikyo!!" *Naraku jumps out of the tree and right into the cage...SLAM....the door slams shut* *mutters* idiot.....@ DL: there you go, he's all caught again. :D great chapter by the way. *gives DL the key to the cage(which has a flap to feed whatevers in it)* update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
 Reviewed By: Inu_Girl17 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2005 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!I DEMAND IT!!!AND WHO THE HELL IS THE KILLER???WRITE MORE AND TELL US!!!!=^.^=LOVE THE FIC!!!
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