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Title: incredible
Reviewed By: nomey On: July 02, 2004 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy, and i mean HOLY, shit!!!! that was incrdible, one of, if not, the best story i've ever read, Good job. But plz don't tell me thats the last hapter, its a cliffy in itself, AND I MUST READ MORE, so if your going to, udate more plz.
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Reviewed By: swirly On: July 02, 2004 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not sure that you will get this but here i go anyway. k i'm just going to tell u straight out... i loved ur fanfic... but i thibnk u should have gone on instead of ending it that way. if i were u i would have kept on going after the battle and told the reviewers about what happened to hojo or koga and kagome and inuyasha and sango and miroku. if i could rewrite this whole story i would first of all fixed ur grammer and and put it in better decriptiopn and stuff like that and ad i told u i would have gone on about what happened afterward it would have been a great fanfic if just went on. if i ahd the abilty to re-write it i would all the way this may not seem like the best news to u but it needed to be said and ad u always say reviewers better review. well in my review this is my opinion and i think that u should consider it. please do cause i would so waqnt to re-write it with your permission i'll if u want to e-mail me heres my e-mail spazmnky_920@yahoo.com if u don't get a reply from me it's because my god damn e-mail won't work and won't let me e-mail nebody
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Reviewed By: Leeneko On: July 02, 2004 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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wheeee!!! i just finished reading it all te way through. @.@ -dances with glowy sticks- that twas so great. yep yep -runs around with her own flamethrower from excitment- wheee!!
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: Nomey On: June 29, 2004 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN!!!!! THAT WAS GOOD, Great analagies. I must say you seem to have experience from the great description you put in.
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Title: When?
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 04:28 EDT
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When are you going to update your fic? I hope you post again soon, I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NOOO
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Reviewed By: inu_shikon On: June 18, 2004 23:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
cool story
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:54 EDT
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh evil typos.....!!!!! and i dint mean too post twice... falls down on hands and knees and begs for forgiveness!!!!!
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:53 EDT
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i really do enjoy this fic. the one problem that i have w/ it is that fact that kagome is a metch for inuyasha. that in itself is not bad. its the fact that shes almost a little too mch of a math for him that annoys me. i maen come on i know all us girls like too say that anything a guy can do we can do just as well if not better, but this makes inuyasha look a little bad. this is not a flamer just an opinion. but all in all i simply adore youre ficcy. - milady 17 m8ball@bellsouth.net (if you would like to speak with me:-) )
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Reviewed By: milady17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 19:53 EDT
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i really do enjoy this fic. the one problem that i have w/ it is that fact that kagome is a metch for inuyasha. that in itself is not bad. its the fact that shes almost a little too mch of a math for him that annoys me. i maen come on i know all us girls like too say that anything a guy can do we can do just as well if not better, but this makes inuyasha look a little bad. this is not a flamer just an opinion. but all in all i simply adore youre ficcy. - milady 17 m8ball@bellsouth.net (if you would like to speak with me:-) )
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Title: transformations
Reviewed By: goth_inu_girl On: June 15, 2004 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Subject: 53! is kagome really pregnant??? i had a lot of other questions, but i just fell out of my chair and can't remember them anymore. who r u? who am i? where am i? do i know u? maybe if i hit myself again... *falls out of chair again and lays there, twitching every now & then* owww. bad idea. good story. really. i'm not lying. i don't think so anyways. hahaha. j/k. ^_~: winking *_*: stoned person. ha. c u.
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Reviewed By: Ky On: June 06, 2004 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You never cease to amaze me with your writing, but it's been nearly three weeks since your last update. Please start writing again. I'm sure "the final battle part 2" will be awesome. Write faster. Thanx Ky
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Reviewed By: yami_neko On: June 05, 2004 21:36 EDT
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chapter 53 heeheehee i like the faces, now please........... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... UPDATE AND GET TO THE FREAKIN' BATTLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yami_neko On: June 05, 2004 21:08 EDT
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ya know the male tubeie thngs are called vas deferens, see how much useless stuff i learn in school
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Title: 53
Reviewed By: Kettricken On: June 05, 2004 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God oh God oh God. Close to a month and you haven't updated. I just read this entire fic today and if you're not going to write any more of it, I may quite possibly die...or finish it for myself, albeit terribly, and read it over and over obsessively like a crazy person. =7 Your fic is great. Usually I don't like fics that turn Kagome into a youkai or hanyou all that much, but you've done an admirable job. I've tried to stop reading at least a dozen times and I just couldn't. Oh, and your writing is pretty high-quality as well--almost forgot that part. I'm a technicality junkie, and while I did notice some spelling and grammar errors, there weren't nearly as many as most fanfics I've read. Your style draws the reader, also. Your development of minor and original characters is excellent; I like knowing why everyone is acting the way they are. I've really enjoyed your changing perspectives as well, even when they sometimes split a chapter into five or six little bits. Many kudos and cookies to you, and please, pretty please don't abandon this story!
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