| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: darkangelis On: April 02, 2004 05:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
when is the next chapter going to be up?.....BTW great fic
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Reviewed By: Lenore On: April 02, 2004 01:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I'm really enjoying your fanfic. The funniest thing about your writing is your little remarks at the endings of your chapters. Especially the one about the glass and using the imagination. So far the story has been a great read.
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Reviewed By: yummyinu On: April 01, 2004 17:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't see how this fic can get too much better. I know it will but *dang* I'm very dizzy from the twists and turns you've thrown in there. Dizzy is GOOD! I like dizzy. I want chapter 48 soon PWEASE!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: March 30, 2004 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is : I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!! I cant wait to read moreee!
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Reviewed By: haruka_tsuki_kou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:17 EST
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WOW!!0_0 This fic pulled me right in. I can't wait to read more of it, and soon, maybe? Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:57 EST
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YAY!!! It's about time we get some new chaps, I was begging to think that you forgot about the story. As for your brother in law Throw lemons at him ::hands you bag of lemong:: I hope these updates keep comming because if not ima have to read the whole story again to remind myself what it was about. As for weapons why don't you ask Miroku to use his kazana (wind tunnel) :)
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 19:26 EST
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Doing great, get the next chapter up quickly please. ^-^
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: samie On: March 28, 2004 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, cant wait for the next chapter. good job so far.update asap.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 28, 2004 18:08 EST
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Excellent set of chapters! Glad to see Miroku and Sango finally get together. The insight into Kagura was unexpected and the last part certainly caught me of guard. Keeps getting better, look forwards to the next chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Evil Eric On: March 27, 2004 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall this is decent, but it gets that rating based almost entirely on strength of concept. The actual writing and plot are far too simplistic and uninspiring. It's good enough to amuse the simple-minded, but leaves a lasting feeling of "For Joe Schmo, by Joe Schmo." It's obvious the author barely knows the bare minimum about the subject to write about it. It's lucky to get the rating it does, since I have a soft spot for Kagome-turns-into-a-hanyou stories. Mediocre, mediocre, mediocre.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 22:46 EST
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Another amazing chapter. I liked the perspective on Kikyo, not many people are very simpathetic for her. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep writing. ^-^
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Title: A-freaking-mazing
Reviewed By: PVX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This, was the BEST Inuyasha fanfiction I have ever read. The story is amazing. And, *lifts up chainsaw* I brought you something. *pulls cord, nothing happens, tries again, still nothing* Is this thing even sharp? *Brings blades up to neck, sudennly chainsaw kicks to life and rips face to shreds* DAMMMNNNIIIT! NOT AGAIIN!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 15, 2004 19:59 EST
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Very nice chapter! A lot more introspective this time, you gave us more of an inisght into some of the supporting cast,a welcome change from much of the near pathlogical need to focus souly on the two stars. Looking forwards to the next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Tekablade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 23:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are still one of the best writers I've have ever seen. Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, love the story. Update again soon.
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