| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Title: Another chapter!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: January 23, 2004 09:33 EST
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Well done, even if it may take you a while to read the reviews on MM, I'm reviewing here anyway. Great job, *claps hands once* now for the next chapter.... and, of course, the lemon.... wai! Anyhow, you've said not to ask for anything, so I won't ask. Just be prepaired if I happen to have any questions after the next chapter. ^^ Depends if you happen to explain the things. Tanya
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Reviewed By: DemonKitty51 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 02:06 EST
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I'm So Glad You Updated! I've Been With Your Story Since You Started Writing It! I Love It!!!! Keep Up The Good Work!!!
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 00:12 EST
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Very good chapter, very good. And I can´t barely wait for the lemon... I´ll not make a request except one... Update soon please
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 21:19 EST
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I really love this story. I had read it twice :-) I really wanna read about their night together hehehe...and I have a question...to Kouga it´s okey that kagome and Inuasha are now mates? Please, update soon
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Reviewed By: kisagurl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really great. I love it and I hope you you update soon.
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Reviewed By: ko-chan On: January 09, 2004 16:26 EST
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i thank this fic is awsome now white the next one
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Title: Well, I thought that I wasn't logged on last time*shrugs* Oh well...
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: January 09, 2004 09:04 EST
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I've been thinking my last review over.... You've taken that character, and you have totally changed her. You've given the character a different name, changed her appearance, and have changed the kimono's colors and design... but I hope that you've e-mailed the author and asked to use his/her idea. Anyhow, the review! But more important things come first... *pulls out a burn healing potion* Here you are.... get better soon and hopefully you don't burn yourself again. And I bestow upon you the elemental powers of(pick your own elements, I'd hate to give you something that you didn't want ^^') Now, here is hoping the font color worked.... Now for the review... VERY GOOD CHAPTERS!!!! Keep on going!!! WAI!! Anyhow, hope tht you bring out more chapters soon!!!!!!! Tanya
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Title: The title for the story that Faye273 mentioned
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged in] [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 13:53 EST
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Yeah, the name is 'Courtship' >grumbles about forgetting the author's name< Anyhow, I'm not sure if you did take that idea>I personally think that the idea for a Spider seamstress is totally awesome!< but that is where the spider demon came from..... I will leave a review later, right now, I'm at school -_-0 school me no likee!!!!! Tanya
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Reviewed By: Dragon Child On: January 08, 2004 03:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I really, really hope that there will be more up soon. It's neat that Kagome's a hanyou to. I got to go cause's it's six in the morning I have to work in an hour and I'm had no sleep in a day and a half, but I really do love the story. Well, ja ne. Bye byez. ~ KDragon Child ~
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 01:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I adore your fic (honestly), but there a few things that I need to say (a few of which I've forgotten... but when I remember I'll review again). 1) After Kag's Ma rips them a new one... Daddio comes is and you keep saying "underline" and I was totally confused. But then, it dawned on me. You meant "undermind" as in "to subvert." To underline would be to highlight or, "put emphasis on." OK,2) the spider thing, you totally ripped that off! (I'm not flaming and I'm not mad... I just think you need to give cradit) I remember reading a very good fic a while back (I don't remember the name or author) where Inu used Shess's personal (and freaky) spider-lady to make secret gifts for Kag as a wedding present. She even made a kimono with a pic of a deamon dog on the back. So I think you need to revise that chapter, and give credit to the person who wrote it 1st. Other than that I love your fic and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 07, 2004 22:14 EST
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Whew! Good lemon! Thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 07, 2004 20:10 EST
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O_o Ok...that was a strange image... Nice pair of chapters, enjoyed reading them. Story just keeps getting better. I look forwards to seeing where the next chapter will take us...a Miroku and Sango romance perhaps? Good luck & best wishes (And a jumbo size tub of healing ointment!) Hououza
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Reviewed By: GuardianWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 12:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
soooo good! please please please write more!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 23:53 EST
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*stops humming* hmm...good story...good music to listen to...life is good. kickass kimono kagome just got, and i think that Hime is a good person as well. *snickers*must suck to be naraku right about now...just got beaten up by kagome and was betrayed by kagura...must really suck. well, should be fun to see what happens next. have fun and good luck with the rest(and hope you heal soon from your injuries, cant wait to see what you'll do next...couldn't i just heal you or something katana's are fun but leave lasting impressions...especially when a person refuses to let themselves heal).
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your stort! Its really good!!! please update soon!!! ^__^
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