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| "Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 1095 ] | | Pages (73): [ « ‹ 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 › » ] | Title: also saying...
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 25, 2004 16:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly the mother of all fanfics, i have never seen such a spectaculiar, well-updated, masterpiece of Inu fiction that has also managed to be un-ooc in all ways and forms and fits so well with the original plot that you believe this is the sequal in all of my many reads, and I have read ALOT of shit on the web, there was another like yours, except he was a great in a different way, he made you fell everytihng with vivid emotion, You saw the world out of the characters eyes in a third narrator way, beautiful, spectacular, and all the deserving of the compliments that this one has gotten except it had it's own fantastic plot, it was not an AU but it was centered with modern day being the main setting, but alas, the creater abanded us a year and a few weeks ago, the fanfic was "Present Time" which can be found on mediaminer, the most updated version is here actually, but though it is difficult, I must detach myself from the fic as I've come to realise the author is dead, doesn't care, or his life truly is so horrible that he can't even attempt an update, it's so sad when a fic like that goes to waste... *cries*-Kitsu :(
| Title: *growl*
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 25, 2004 16:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Shippou, if you kill him off... grrrrr..... I'll hate you! I love the little guy! You can't do that to me, let alone the vast majority of the IY public, NOOOO!!!!!!!-Kitsu
| Reviewed By: GranolaBar - not signed in On: October 25, 2004 14:31 PDT
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Awww... Does Shippo live? He's one of my favorite characters. It would be a shame to see him die. I'm glad that Inuyasha has finally figured out the attack.
| Reviewed By: MouF (cannot loggin to review??? what the...) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 13:15 PDT
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Noooo, you can't kill Shippou like that! Tell me that Sesshoumaru is there in the vicinity with Tenseiga! Please!!! You're right Shippou, the masses are revolting! LOL And what's up with Katosan? Is he good or bad? I'm confused o.O Women, we have to group together and corner BakaYasha. We have to tell him it's a woman's right to wear a tampon in this day and age! (Oups, the feminist in me got out. Gotta put her back in the closet! LMAO)
| Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 11:29 PDT
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Shippo can't be dead, you hear, he can't be! Inuyasha will have tear Nortismu limp from limb if he is, and find Sesshamoru and make him use Tensaiga to bring him back. On a lighter note, your work is great, and I really should've commented earlier, but I hope that person who stole you work duefully apologizes to you.
| Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: October 25, 2004 11:26 PDT
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Wow! Some cliffie! Poor Shippo!! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. BTW - cool new Tetsiga power, time slip. I wonder how it could be used in battle.
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86(not signed on) On: October 25, 2004 11:19 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't kill shippo off and his finnal thought is right we will revolt. SO PLEASE NOOOO!!!! Anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I can't wait to PLEASE HURRY!!!
| Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess not logged in On: October 25, 2004 10:54 PDT
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They can go back in time! I'm so excited!
| Reviewed By: tessie On: October 25, 2004 10:46 PDT
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please, no, not shippo! let him live, please!!! tessie
| Title: Lemons & Such
Reviewed By: Squalleon On: October 25, 2004 05:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where to begin? I apologize for not reviewing again until now. Your story has evolved into an entity of its own! Beautiful. We'll start there? I've been a huge fan of your 'lemons' though I hesitate to use that terminology since they are so well written that they really should fall into the category of art-candy. How do you describe what a young woman feels the first time she's touched? Basically as you did: with brilliance, with elegance, and with simplicity. In this day and age, I don't believe it matters so much, what goes where and what does what. Those who are old enough to read 'lemons' have most likely already experience such details. That aside, it is nice to be reminded what it felt like, way back when. As for your style? How do you know when to blend humor with angst? When to drag out the moment and when to wrap it in? It is a gift that cannot be taught. I've tried for years. Teaching creative writing is an interesting thing. If I had just one writer like you pass through my class in the 15+ years I've done it, I would have retired long ago. Interestingly, your ideas and characterizations are so intricate yet understated, a rare gift in an author in any genre at any time. I hope you keep this level of writing up. You're truly a talented writer. As for those who would plaigarize you? At least, if they must steal, they've done so from a master craftswoman. As always, your enthralled reader, ~Squalleon
| Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 24, 2004 20:53 PDT
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Poor InuYasha. He's gotta live with Kagome's family now. And he thinks her mother hates him. *pats Inu's head* There, there Inu. And he seems very protective of his journal. Hmmm. I wonder what "secrets" are written in that book. Could anything in there raise the score for Kagome? LOL
| Reviewed By: notzathros aka laptawenzell On: October 24, 2004 19:52 PDT
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Yea. I'm back. I missed you! Let's see... the story. Inuyasha needs to lighten up on the whole bossy, possessive mate thing. Especially the tampon thing. When Inuyasha gets his period, he can decide how he's going to deal with it. As long as Kagome's the one with the monthly cycle, how she deals with it is her choice. It's her body, not his. Though she may be willing to share it with him occassionally... IF HE BEHAVES.
| Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:52 PDT
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I want to see Tetsusaiga's new attack in action, any clue when that's going to be? I don't mean to rush you, just want to know. Good chapter, Totosai's just a vague as ever, and Inuyasha must've learned self-control somewhere and I missed it cause he only hit Totosai once.
| Reviewed By: peachykeen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**jaw drops** the wells destroyed?? oh this should be interesting...will a futrue shippou be in this fic too?? and is there gonna be another showdown between katosan and inuyasha?? :o) awesome chapters :o)
| Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: October 24, 2004 17:32 PDT
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Oh WOW!!! There were so many chapters to catch up to and I just cannot believe all that has happened now!!! hehehehehe. Kagome tweek Sesshoumau's nose? That was great. Please make her do that! hehehe. And the Tampon bit--- I laughed for quite some time on that one. Oh Inuyasha, you have much to learn on the advencements in the "women department." What would he say is Kagome decided to go on some sort of birth control such as Depo Provera? hahaha. Wonderfull advancements in the story! So.. There's someone out there who thinks that they can steal parts of your story... Please point me in the correct direction so that I, along with my army of Sue-Loyalists, may go and seek this offender out! =D I mean come on, who does this person think that they are?! No one can get away with stealing Sue's wrok without dying!!! Sheesh-- if death is the punishment for asking what will happen next what is the punishment for this? hehehe. Well, speaking of stealing other people's work-- It looks like my brother is looking for some of my old Adv. Comp. papers so I guess that I will go fax him some old work--hahaha. Keep up the great work Sue!!!! Take care!!! ---Aitu
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