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Reviewed By: td On: October 23, 2004 13:21 PDT
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so there was no wishing involved with the purification of the Sikon no Tama just...
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 23, 2004 12:19 PDT
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Wow, my head is spinning from all these developments! Is Grandpa building Inuaysha and Kagome a little home? What are these too gonna do now that the well is closed? What's Totosai doing in the modern era? Can future Sesshomaru be anymore vauge? Where does this leave Katosan, Norimitsu, and Aya? Isn't Norimitsu gonna be pissed that Shippou stole the diary from his palace?
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Reviewed By: mystechj [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 11:21 PDT
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First InuYasha was tweaking Kagome's nose, then she tweaked his nose, followed by mutual nose tweaking, and now she's tweaking InuYasha and Sesshomaru at the same time? 0.o And Nibori saw his aunt tweak his father and his uncle. Poor kid's gonna need therapy. Anyway, now that the jewel's gone and our couple trapped beyond the reach of their enemies, can we assume we're closing in on the end of the story?
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 09:28 PDT
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How in the world did Mrs. Higurashi and Grandpa knew to prepare the store/guest house for Inu and Kag since chap. 63? Nothing had happen then! And they could still move through time. What are you not telling us? (Like you'd give me a strait answer right? ;-) LOL) Did Sesshou told them that our favorite couple wouldn't be able to go back in the past? Or did the Shrine had a book telling them the story of Kagome and InuYasha? From Miroku perhaps?
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 08:46 PDT
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LEt's see here, so Sesshamoru gave Inuyasha the concealment charm, but there's more to that charm than just that. I know this, it's too obvious otherwise Sesshamoru wouldn't have used one of HIS hairs with it. Inuyasha going to talk to Totosai again? I wonder if Myouga's still with him? I hope Totosai holds out of Inuyasha, I want to see Inuyasha threaten to Kaze no Kizu Totosai into oblivion. Please write more, I'm begging you.
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Reviewed By: marta178 - again not signed in... [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 08:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha!! She twinked Sesshou's nose!! LoL And the best is...He let her do it!! XD ^LOL^ ....but still i feel sorry for Shippo ;_; is he going to see them again? You better let them go back to the past you know!! :P ....Update Soon!!
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Reviewed By: enya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 06:31 PDT
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I found the writing quite proper, and liked the work. I did not read it all... way too many pages! but I found the first one good! ^_^;;
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 22:26 PDT
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okay...if i'm following this right....i'm a little disgrunteled, lol. Sesshoumaru has been sitting around his house waiting for his brother to get laid? wow...i really hope i am so not right...cause i have more respect for Sesshoumaru then that....and thats just like...something a brother should just not know. :-X hehe....excellent as always. keep it up. lol.
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Reviewed By: Sozoteki On: October 22, 2004 22:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You girl are the Queen of all fanfiction! Another amazing chapter. I can't wait to find out exactly why they're all blue and glowy. I just have one question. Did the whole Shikon no Tama being purified and dusting all over Inuyasha and Kagome solve the little not-so-equal lifespan problem by any chance? I'm dieing to read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 22, 2004 21:53 PDT
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Omg, I just read the lemon and all I have to say is...beautiful. Ha! And I just realized that's the name of the chapter. Hehehe. And the well is closed??? No wonder why Sesshoumaru was fooling around with that thing in the box. That thing which was a fang? I can't remember. Oh, I hope you don't write Shippou, Sango and Miroku out of this! I would love to see their reactions to how the Shikon jewel was purified. HA!
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Reviewed By: tessie On: October 22, 2004 19:19 PDT
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NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! what about shippo? it isn't fair! how could you? inu just started acting fatherly towards him. darn it. tessie
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Reviewed By: inuhanyou nikkie On: October 22, 2004 18:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuhanyou steps out wearing cheerleader outfit and big bushie pompoms-- "Go Kagome! Go Kagome! (shakes pompoms to the right)Go Inuyasha! Go Inuyasha!(shakes pompoms to the left) GO GO GO!!! (Jumps up and shakes pompoms high in air)Whoo HOO!!(Does the splits)" Sees inuhanyou spin around in grace arc to blow huge NYAH!! NYAH!! razzberries at Kouga and shouts "You can't touch this!!". -OMG!!! that was just perfect!! I was supposed to work today but after reading tests I bawled so hard I gave myself a delightful migraine! Now THATs a story-If it makes me have outbursts and I dont care if anyone sees that is a KEEPER!!! You are SOO talented!!! Thankyou for these two chapters! I think maybe Kagome should tweak Inuyasha nose for a good several seconds (not letting go) for the lynx youkai stunt.Sighs Ahh well. Shrugs shoulders. By the way... What IS with the Blue Aoirotoku? Is Sesshomaru conventing his empty box like Gollum/Smeagol and his Precious?? Keep up the most excellent work!! Huggles-gaves Sue HUGE box of Pocky from secret stash
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Title: Loyal reviewer
Reviewed By: Karuo-chaness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 18:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!!!! GREAT CHAPPY!!! I love it!!! Oh.. The swords glowing again... isnt it weird that everyone except for Inuyasha and Kagome knows why the sword glows? Lol. Whats with Fluffy? He's acting a little weird... and what does he what With Inu -chans fang?? dun dun Dun.... Next time on..... "Chronicles!!" Lol... anyways.. great chapter...-_^ Signed: Your Loyal reviewer... Kaoru-chaness
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Reviewed By: Time Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 17:08 PDT
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The well caved in? Inuyasha and Kagome glowing a bright blue along with Tetsusaiga? Sesshamoru waiting for Inuyasha to come to him? Interestingly different I love you writing, please continue, and even though I usually hat ewhen explainations are drawn out the way you write makes me want the explanation to take longer so we can see if the characters get it or not. Bravo! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: tduke1999 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to applaud your timing on writing the lemon. It's refreshing to read a story where K&I take their time after confessing their love. Since it has taken them so long to get to this point it would only make sense that they would also take their time before the next big step in their relationship. I also think that sometimes its better to delay gratification, it makes you enjoy it that much more when it does finally happen;) Besides, its your story, you get to decide the timing for a major plot point like this. I've enjoyed reading all of your stories and they just keep getting better and better. Thank you!!
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